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 Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 3:12 am
i was bored so i started writing a story this is what i have so far... tell me what you think about this and if i should fix any of it. you can put your name in the place where it says vikki.
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I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken -- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived.
- Margaret Mitchell
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PREFACE
I just stood there watching as the rain fell on his beautiful, pale face.
He was hiding something from me and it pained me inside. I was waiting for him to say anything. waiting...
"Good-Bye Vikki."
"NO WAIT EDWARD!"
But it was to late he was gone never to be seen in my life ever again.
I fell to the ground hopeless once more in my life. Left in the dark to rot.
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 3:13 am
chapter one - the beginning
I looked out the window of the school bus while I sat in the front with my 9th grade bus buddy Alana.. It was a beautiful day maybe about 80 degrees.
Today was our first day of 11th grade. The bus now was turning into our school slowly like every other day. LTHS was a huge school, overpopulated even with two schools. This bus came to a complete stop near the entrance. We got off the bus one step at a time.The light breeze felt good against my skin, with the blazing hot sun shinning. We started walking towards the door when i spotted an odd looking car. It was dark red like blood, the car itself was a little bit rounded, the windows were tinted like an eighty's car. The think that caught my attention the most was the six people getting out of the car. The two girls, were beyond beautiful but very pale. The other four were guys. They were the most handsome guys I've ever seen but also pale. Each of them looking like models, but some how scary.One of them looked at me, his hair was a beautiful bronze color. I quickly looked away. Just as i looked away Laura, and Luma caught up.
"Dude Vikki, we were calling for you!"
"Well Luma you should of been louder."A cocky smile appeared on my face.
We entered the school. It was the same as last year. Tall red and gray lockers, white colored walls, random posters and nearly no windows. I looked next to me and nearly Luma was gone.
" Wow, You are really spacing out." Laura said with a chuckle.
"Uh-Huh sure." Just as I said the the bell rung. We both went our separate ways.
I walked into the room for my chemistry class and noticed a seating chart. I sat in the very middle. I looked up to see the bronze haired boy and on of the girls from this morning walk threw the door. They looked at the seating chart then they walked pass me and sat right behind me. I just kept looking straight feeling their stares on my back. When the bell rung i bolted for the door. The rest of the day went slowly until I got to lunch. I walked in to see Laura waving to me. I waved back and joined her.
A couple of tables away i saw the two girls from this morning with the bronze haired boy. I quickly looked away.
"So how are your classes?" Laura asked curiously.
"Boring. BLAH! Chemistry is the worst. Theres a bronze colored hair guy with a girl who sit behind me and i swear i can feel them staring at me, and now i figured out they are in our lunch room."I pointed to them carefully so they wouldn't notice me.
"Oh thats Edward and Alice Cullen with Rosalie Hale. They are in my history class. We had to introduce ourself and state a fact about ourself.All they said was that they were from Washington." Luma said.
I looked at them one more time and noticed Edward looking at me. I quickly looked away blushing a bright red.
The bell rung, only two classes left and i would be home soon. The two classes went by slowly, thank god that all the teachers talked about was how "cool" they were. The last bell rung and i went to my locker.
I put away all my books away and closed my locker and there was Edward standing there.
" Hello I'm Edward Cullen. Sorry we didn't get to introduce each other in chemistry."
"Um. It's ok...?"I started to walk and he just kept pace.
"I'm new at the school so i hope you can show me around sometime."
I looked at at his beautiful topaz eyes.
"S... Sure." I blushed and pushed some of my hair behind my ear. I looked once more but he was gone. I walked to the bus and sat next to Alana, just staring out the window...
Who is he... i questioned myself.
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 3:41 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 11:32 pm
haha heart That was so corny, I love it ^__^
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 8:22 am
i liked it but rosealies last name isn't hale thats jaspers last name and there are only three boys Edward Emmet jasper were did u get four from. im sorry but i just had to correct you . redface
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 10:18 am
prettywomen444 i liked it but rosealies last name isn't hale thats jaspers last name and there are only three boys Edward Emmet jasper were did u get four from. im sorry but i just had to correct you . redface sry to correct u, but there R 4 boys. u forgot carlisle. Also, jasper's last name it Whitlock (sry about spelling, too l-z 2 look it up) and rosalie's name is hale. as vamps they both go by hale
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