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An evil known as The Corruption infects the land. Will the shinobi world overcome the corruption, or be consumed? 

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 11, 2016 1:28 pm


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Owner
Makako-ma

Name
Sayori Suishou

Meaning of Name
Sayori means born at night, Suishou can mean a few things but refers to crystals or birthstones associated with April.

Nicknames
a name that your friends call you.

Famous Shinobi Name:
a title you are known by to all who have heard of you

Gender
Female

Age
28

Physical Description
Include any details you like that aren't mentioned below here.

Height
5'6"

Weight
160

Markings
Her lack of markings and seemingly flawless complexion. If one were to look closely they would find that her skin is not particularly strange due to some manner of exposure or lack thereof it has an unusually well taken care of appearance. She doesn't really have fingerprints or not much anyways. Half the time she wouldn't leave any even if she did.

Common Clothing
Clerical disguises or her normal outfit

Occupation
Investigator, handler, informant, exorcist, and high value deliveries.

Status
Whereabouts are rarely common knowledge but it is known that she can be contacted through employers and affiliates. She is not known to ignore summons but often works independently. Known to appear near shrines around paths to temples and places with important national government facilities.

though recently she's in the Tsuchikage's office a lot.





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Clan Name
Suishou

Kekkei Genkai, Stage Obtained
Crystal release, active

Known Chakra Elements
Crystal Release (thought to be made of 3 others but unlike wood for example you don't get to separate them whenever you feel like it)

Land, Village
Land of stone, Iwagakure

Rank, Title
S Rank, Tsuchikage

Special Skills
information gathering
art of illusion and misdirection
emergency medical care (think first responder rushing with a medical box not your doctor)
Shinobi sciences (able to create things)
unusually high weapon and taijutsu proficiency though her style if it could be called that is not exactly designed for fair fights or even an honorable "fight". Its designed to kill, period.


Known Affiliations
Its possible to contact Iwagakure through her. She can also arrange where you will get your response though at the moment she is this villages leader so this is more obvious than normal.

Organization Membership
founder of Iwagakures intervillage corruption research center
founder of some band of mercenaries connected to Iwagakure consisting of displaced people who didn't fall in line for whatever reason


Dominant Jutsu Types
Heavily centered around ninjutsu and taijutsu.

Intelligence
very high, extreme. She might come up with a new variation on a jutsu in the middle of a fight. Or rather she may have to. Has no problem keeping up with genius types. She's been known to decipher the tricks behind not only techniques but locked room murders and other complicated things as well. She is particularly good at puzzles, reading situations, seeing through illusions, and memorizing structures.. basically anything relating to her past work.

Fighting Tendencies
She tends to be very short range. Even midrange abilities tend to be projectiles or formations originating from her position. Longer range techniques won't be terribly hard to predict though evasion may still require some non-basic level of skill. She has a amount of weapon and ninjutsu experience but while her taijutsu is strong, she herself must exert herself to get the needed power output for stronger opponents. She can create and use weapons very well including unusual ones but they tend to be (and probably always will be) fairly simple tools like blades or shuriken.

She is a technical fighter specializing in fast, low power overall but heavy precision technique focused more on disabling, bypassing, escape, and killing as opposed to self defense or merely harming the opponent. She is not the type who will be trying to wear you down with punches, she will hit below the belt as an opener if it is beneficial to do so. Honor belongs to the one who lives to tell the story usually.

Her style can be flexible to a degree but it is fairly rigid with limits. Granted she will eventually come up with something, she has much potential in the way of flexibility but the effort involved in "flexible" is high for her.

One's best defenses against her are controlled range and evolving situations.

A great way to get killed by her is to get stuck in a single pattern or to rely on the complexity of something to keep one safe.





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Personality
She comes off as kindof serious to some but some may question just how serious she is overtime. She has a kindof dry sense of humor and isn't even a little disturbed by some morbid things.

Likes
Traveling
building things
art
sculpting
science
weapons


Dislikes
babysitting
getting stuck somewhere
irrational violence
horribly impulsive people


Miscellaneous Skills
She is really good at anything related to jewelry or weapons crafting. Not just shinobi stuff either. She can also make stuff like training dummies and stuff. She isn't the best engineer but if you give her the blueprint she can make the parts for you. She's put a lot of time into developing skills to design stuff based off older designs others put into practice though.

Sexuality
Hetero

Physical Conditions
suffers from some manner of not unhealthy skin condition. She reflects a little extra light which causes her to be pale. Related to her kekkei genkai, lifestyle, and dieting

Mental Conditions
Nothing with a special name, she's just "the calm type"





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Jutsu Points:
86

Ninjutsu

clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank




Elemental Ninjutsu


separated into 4 classifications

Basic Crystal release - makes stuff with crystal. Balanced technique requirements and output
Jade Crystal release - Makes fast forming crystals, higher shape variety but also tends to be easier to both reform AND break.
Pentagonal Crystal - sturdy crystal requiring more chakra use
generally fragile crystal formation - Formed with extreme speed and very brittle but very much capable of harming someone. Kindof like sharp chunks of glass. This type is expected to penetrate, maim, or entrap a body but could potentially be broken with brute superhuman strength. Unlike the other three this one likely wouldn't be able to crystalize the flesh of anyone actively using any amount of chakra whereas the others require that you be using a significant amount to the point it could be a named but not necessarily high ranked shinobi technique to avoid this.

The following contains some specific and derivative techniques. They will be color coded based off the type of crystal they are typically made of but its possible to make them with any of the three methods. The chosen variety however is considered to be "optimal" meaning that if an alternative is used then there should be something "suboptimal" about its performance when used.

Crystal Pentagonal prison - 2 derivatives B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal release - Jade Crystal Prison - derives from Crystal Pentagonal Prison

Crystal release: Crystal imprisonment wave - derives from crystal pentagonal prison.


Crystal Armour B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal wheel B-rank (based off guesswork but this is a supplemental jutsu with many applications, it seems to fit)

(Custom) - Crystal shaping techniques- S rank, - a collection of different things said crystal release user is skilled enough to make. The rank should match the shinobi rank of the user. (nothing with any particularly unusual application or high skill or athletic requirements goes here)



Crystal release: Crimson Fruit B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)


Crystal release: Crystal encampment wall B-rank (most wall jutsu tend to be around B-rank)



Crystal Release: Crystal lance C-rank (based on guesswork, fairly simplistic)

Crystal needles B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)



Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade D-rank (Jade crystal techniques tent to form faster and come in more variety of forms. I believe these are simpler)

Jade Crystal Hexagonal pillars B-rank (Just a guess based off its potential use and expected frailty relative to size since its Jade Crystal)

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique A-Rank (A more complicated illusory field technique. Actually making the base of the technique is probably not that hard but making one with purpose would take high intelligence and control)



Crystal Release: Giant Hexagonal Shuriken C-Rank (based off guesswork and the ranking of other item creation techniques. I assume some skill is needed to make a large sturdy crystal object from random materials around.)

Jade Crystal Clone Technique C-Rank (more advanced cloning techniques seem to be B rank at best. This one can be kindof strong but this is primarily because of the material used I think not the actual difficulty of use.


Jade Crystal Wall Eighth Formation C-Rank (simple but uses a bunch of chakra)




Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon B-rank


Crystal Release: God's crossing D - rank

Shuriken Wild Dance C - rank Flexible technique that can potentially use different types of crystal or formations but same general concept.

(Custom) Crystal release: Light manipulation - Rank S (rank my vary but this one is based off the highest level technique known for the system as a whole)



Crystal release: string of glory S-Rank (dangerous requirements and requires unnatural levels of chakra. The yield is also powerful. Designed to be strong enough for a human to fight a tailed beast. Using this as a prerequisite for some other, smallerscale derived techniques however.)

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror C-rank (Just a guess but the mirror itself is simple but used in other techiques)

(custom) Crystal Release: Illusory Veil - B rank - using a smaller version of string of fate the user can create a smaller scale version of Jade Crystal Labyrinth's shoton illusions. The crystals will remain immobile as will the source of the ninjutsu and can be used to create powerful illusions in a given space. It will be impossible to detect through sight, even with the byakugan or sharingan and there is no scent or sound that it makes on its own but if, as a ninja, you can find the sources without sight or smell then its possible to interfere with the illusion just by cutting off any light able to access the floating crystals semi-nearby with a cloth or something. It still works in low level's of light but not in pitch blackness.

(custom) Light recording - C-rank - a semi-advanced imitation technique. Derives form the crystal mirror, the user can record patterns of light to create clones of herself or others. These clones can remain inside the mirror or step out to become crystal clones. These clones can actually use any techniques the user knows and copy their kekkei genkai as long as it derives from their physical form. However the clones are still made using the users chakra. If person A makes a clone of person B then its a clone of person B but with person A's chakra and made of crystal. The clone can use your byakusharitokidokigan but will probably just hurt itselfusing a portion of the wrong chakra for a technique its controller has never tried before.




Medical Ninjutsu


Tenketsu point manipulation - B rank (varied rankings, B rank was chosen based off level of specialization) - She can manually manipulate her own tenketsu points. She can do the same with others but has no tool to find theirs or see the actual flow of chakra in their current state unlike those of the hyuga clan. She also only specializes in her own body and emergency procedures and some therapeutic uses for others. She can do this with needles as well but this is far more invasive and will leave scars. Her technique is not adapted for general straightforward combat.

Gates Opening imitation technique - A-rank 8 gates variation. She is able to open chakra gates without opening the previous steps but with an alternate but related effect. She must do this manually using Tenketsu point manipulation. The following are the alternate but related effects gained. In order to get the normal effects one must open ALL previous gates otherwise each will have its alternate application. Each gate opened intensifies the effect of the later gates already opened. If you have gate 7 open and try to open gate 1 you will kill yourself for example.

1. Gate of Opening - Acts normally.
2. Gate of Healing - Drains the user's energy to heal them
3. Gate of Life - Increase's blood pressure and begins to send the user into light shock... if done properly one could perhaps pretend to be sick
4. Gate of Pain - causes extreme pain and shock to the mind sending the user into an alternate state of mind similar to a monk that uses painful exercises to increase focus. The body will be damaged but the brain will be extremely sharp during this technique if used by a well disciplined person
5. Gate of Limit - Increases chakra flow but decreases control. Can be used to unseal something on oneself but otherwise mostly just negative
6. Gate of view - similar to the normal effects but causes extreme strain on the user during use. Expect anything from extreme exhaustion to death after using this. You will need to see a doctor after using this.
7. Gate of Wonder - Causes some loss of muscle control and extreme blood pressure fluctualtions. You won't survive this while being particularly active. This has a possible application in surviving for extreme periods in places where one might not expect a human to be able to survive without air food or water. You will need medical attention after using this though you might die anyways if you attempt to remain active with this gate open. This places you in critical condition and any movement before you can close it will only cause you more harm.
8. Gate of Death - kills user. This is just suicide without training and the other gates. You wont get any of the benefits


(custom) Mystery Palm Techique B-rank. It'll heal you but you a bit faster than the Mystical Palm but its effects are temporary and have funny side effects. Just enough to get you to a doctor or back into the fight to go die for something important. Works just fine on smaller injuries though. May get the target kindof high and unable to feel much pain.

Cell Activation Technique - C-rank

Not very delicate illness extraction technique - (D-rank) similar concept to the full version but she might break something. If you want to get sick near a doctor. If you want to survive then grit your teeth and hope this works. This version is good enough to get poison out of the body.



Taijutsu


She uses a martial-arts system called thousand-years river stone. As the name implies it is designed to be like a rock in flowing water. She is someone who studies the energy absorption properties of crystals and bodies. This martial art is about manipulating energy through solid objects. This art uses disciplines from medical ninjutsu and shinobi military arts. Its intent is not to win fights but to remain where you need to be or move to where you need to be while under pressure or attack. It is designed for focusing on destroying weak points and disabling stronger ones with decisive blows rather than simply overpowering. It is very well adapted for grappling and killing with over 1000 techniques for extreme short range combat. It would take considerable taijutsu skill to subdue her in allout extreme close range combat for extended periods without getting killed. The technique seeks to draw and keep a specific target in close and kill them even if they have help. However if you can keep a reasonable distance it will still be somewhat effective but she is a lot less likely to harm through pain or severe injury. It should be easily apparent what kindof technique it is fairly early in a fight.

some notable techniques used within this art

Cherry Blossom Impact C -Rank

(custom) Shifting current: motion - C rank - she can disperse a force using her hands or limbs and redirect whatever is left of it as long as it has a solid medium and a relatively small point of impact and area of exertion like with the cherry blossom impact for example. She could stop a train or boulder with this in theory but that's bigger than a fist or human so it would take a lot more chakra

(custom) Shifting current: stillness - B rank - using a larger amount of chakra she can perfectly redistribute energy passed win herself to negate large forces and bursts of chakra intended for some technique. She could stop a blade using this technique but there is a moment where movement is difficult afterwards. She could example just use an arm or hand to do this but depending on what she would have needed to block anyways she'd lose a lot of chakra and end up being unable ot mold chakra in that region for a moment. If done against a normal punch she'd just lose chakra and her hand might be a bit numb. If done to stop a boulder she will have full body restricted movement even in her neck and eyelids. All of it. the ground she stands on would also absorb part of the force and might respond strangely to any attempt to cast a jutsu on it as well as the air around her. This could be used to stop a rasengan but a rasengan has sustained output so it would have to be a smaller one. The force of impact still happens to some much smaller degree but will instead effect the whole body and likely fail to move her from her current position or change her form like if say a boulder would hit her. Obviously it has its limits, she's not going to stop a train.

(custom) 1000 paths to river's mouth - B rank - This technique is a system of extreme shortrange counters, grapples, and strikes for killing any realistic opponent at short range. However like in chess its not meant to end immediately unless the other person does something to make that possible. A strong enough fighter will be able to use whatever advantages to keep a reasonable distance, her arms aren't that long for example, and fight her on more even ground. There are perhaps some taijutsu masters that can simply fight her how they fight her and not worry about this if they have a technique to deal with it.

River god's grip - rank C - chakra enhanced gripping technique that crushes the hell out of things within reason. A killer grip and trained fingers basically. This is actually a variation on the concepts used in the cherry blossom impact and shifting current techniques. She can potentially break a sword with this technique if she can get her fingers properly positioned on the blade or crush a neck or wrist with just her hand though this is also a technical technique. Breaking something like a sword would require proper positioning and hand formation relative to the size and thickness of the weapon. wont work on a fairly large and heavy weapon and you she may have to reposition her hand first. Proper (real world) weapon technique, much like shinobi technique in general, is usually designed to prevent such a thing from being caught and destroyed by something. Hands in particular. The potential is there though.



Genjutsu






Fuuinjutsu


Evil sealing method + general sealing techniques that say stfu to evil spirits and curses - A rank - specializes in stfu spells or things that call forth something from a specific place, likely with the intent of telling it to stfu. She possesses a lot of occult knowledge.

Kyōmeisen: Shin Megami Tensei - high level sealing technique performed using a sealing tool that employs sound. Must be something capable of amplifying sound or and creating powerful sounds if the user themselves are not sound specialist ninjas (locked)



Weapon Techniques

Kyōmeisen: White noise technique - c rank - negates a sound or many sounds at different frequencies. But also makes a sound when doing so. It can be used to create complete silence in a particular area or keep sound from escaping a small area but this is for simple things like human speech. If for example the user cannot just predict what the next sound or sounds will be there will be a light buzzy sound or whistle heard though the sound will be negated or contained and thus communication will be facilitated or inhibited. It an also just block all sounds but its own by creating a wide but limited range of frequencies, this particular device is not designed for just any frequency however. Strong animals summons with good ears can detect this no matter how good you are at hiding it.
Kyōmeisen: Resonating echo drill - C rank - can break some objects using sound or disrupt a target's sense of balance. This has a variety of uses but the effect changes according to the design of the amplifier, this one in particular is fit primarily for disabling targets ability to balance themselves from range and breaking certain jutsus. It can deal damage at close range or further if you can use wind elemental techniques which its original design was meant to be used with.
Kyōmeisen: chain resonation echo drill - A rank - Using an amplifier designed specifically for this she can use a crystal as the source of a sound. A bigger bigger and more sturdy crystal will last a bit longer but for the most part this technique will damage the target until it no longer works properly from that target. It has to be something the user shaped themselves or has a good idea about the structure of it unless they can just see it right in front of them. This mostly has application in very subtle illusion techniques or tracking techniques. It is possible to make sound illusions with this technique. The illusion will be based off the shape of the crystal being used. It can also be used without an external crystal but the weapon must be adjusted for making illusions to do this then fixed for general use later using crystal release techniques.


Doujutsu


Juinjutsu





Summonings
spectral butterflies - C rank - contract spirits capable of releasing the souls of the dead from corpses to create more butterflies or becoming seals to keep something trapped inside something or out of something. They seal doors, make illusions, distract. Etcetc. They speak as a collective and can read each other's minds. They tend to have some manner of wind nature but don't use any grandiose wind techniques, they can assist in low energy function or high control techniques. Looking directly at them has a mesmerizing effect that gives the victim a strong sense that their attention is being pulled away. A focused mind can easily resist this even if you are a genin but if you're drunk or something or caught in some genjutsu or illusion this may make things worse for you. They possess the ability to actively mess with one's targeting for high precision, sentient, or homing techniques techniques or could help spy on someone but for the most part how useful they are will depend on their application. They have only one level of summon and can be touched through physical or nonphysical means though they will act kindof like clones with hit. Nonphysical attacks work best against them. The more of them that are damaged the weaker they entirety of them become but they can also regenerate over significant periods of time. They have glowy wings and while they aren't going to be killed by poison or anything they prefer clean mountain air and like most summons will get irritated and disappear under the right conditions. They prefer clean mountain air and something like a smoke bomb would bother them and keep them out of an area potentially unless they were there with specific intent like sealing something away or reacting to a specific jutsu being actively used by the summoner. Their chakra types are wind and they can use mini-versions of wind techniques as well as a few yin-yang techniques. Individually they do very little to anything physically and moderate amounts together but together with a summoner they can do combination attacks, tactics and such.


Kekkei Genkai
Crystal release - Her chakra manifests itself in such a way that she can make crystals from nearly any material substance. They tend to be very strong and breaking them requires a continuous strong force over a relatively large area or an appropriate nonphysical force with properties that should break through things or something like that. A particularly large crystal could be broken by attacking many nearby weak points simultaneously with strong precision techniques without the need for particularly long lasting force. Its also possible to prevent the formation of crystals with chakra based techniques or anything that can prevent the formation of stable crystalline structures

Note that against a crystal wall 1000lbs of force directed at a singular point will not be as effective as 750lbs of force over a larger less precise area or 500lbs of force directed at very specific and somehow very intelligently selected areas

Thought to be created with a mix of earth, water, and wind natures. Fire will make it crack and go brittle, lightning will pierce it though if you use a chidori for example you may find your hand going through but your body cant follow since it isn't where the correct chakra nature is being focused.

She can only use crystal release, or yin/yang release techniques but has a high affinity for them.





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Relatives


Other Relationships


History
A Tokubetsu Jonin of Iwagakure retired and left his remaining work to his pupil. She operated in the land of fire as a specialist as part of an effort to improve relations after all the warring and betrayals. Her primary task was assisting local monasteries with troubling tasks and threats involving international affairs. She also acted as a sort of mediator as a result for certain 'spy games' if you will between land of fire natives and well meaning shinobi infiltrators or "her fellow visitors" while avoiding their exposure. The end result was that great nations kept each other in check peacefully while looking out for one another's interests at the same time.

During this time she would also offer services to the local employers who sought to bypass some regulation or whatnot by hiring outside help instead of Konoha ninja. She would be taxed by Konoha for anything she gained on their turf of course but most importantly she was to report in most of what she did to both her own nation and Konoha as well as any relevant findings she received. Thus far she hadn't found much more than malicious plots and such, normal stuff one might sign up to deal with for some cash. She also helped reseal some spirit infested facilities


Born in Iwagakure to Iwagakure parents she was trained and raised to be a ninja by her clan, a small clan but long allies to many of the other clans of the Stone. As a youth she would be trained for assassination missions as well as service as female cleric but her unusual chakra nature became something of an obstacle. Nevertheless she would enter into many such roles and learn to traverse the underbelly of many of the land's secretive organizations.. well secretive by civilian standards. It started off mostly as infiltration and intrigue but overtime as violence, treachery, and dissention rose more and more individuals needed to disappear and more and more people would need guards and assistants and miracles and may other nicer things, far nicer than the unfortunate ones that passed needlessly due to the world's state at the time but allowing escalation wasn't an option even if innocents had to die. As she grew and developed her taijutsu.. as she put her taijutsu to constant use rather.. her ninjutsu became easier to employ as though something about her physical and mental state improved her affinity with it.

Upon realizing that a rare nature could be put to use the Tsuchikage at the time sent her to receive formal retraining under both clerical specialists and jonin in order to try and harness this skill, particularly its properties in relation to spirits due to having similar properties to the wood release in this respect. She would learn much but unfortunately she would have to grow more and develop her own techniques for this since it wasn't something one could just find in some scroll anywhere.

Overtime she would become a Tokubetsu Jōnin who often traveled and did work for the village as a networker, handler, and someone who could dispose of things or clean up jobs many others couldn't. She would also be a go between for many missions involving multiple villages. It was somewhat late in her life that she began to develop skills based off what she knew already because she now had the prerequisites as well as the experience. She'd been content with this type of work but soon many new missions would be thrust upon her and consume her schedule as the corruption would again years later.

While investigating the ruins of konoha a message reached her informing her that she'd been selected to become the next Tsuchikage... This wasn't really something she'd looked forward to but if the former Tsuchikage thought she was the best choice then she had to give it a try. She did already have some insight on the corruption afterall but it was going to take a lot more than insight to deal with this. Her first aim would be to reunite humanity... on the surface at least. The corruption however terrifying would never be as frightening as humans to one who'd taken on the role of a cleric for so many years.

History (Continued)
This should be everything that happens during RP. Things you have actually done with your character. Feel free to mention anything you want, but I wouldn't give details about every single time you trained for a technique. Just include the major stuff.




Leave the following section off if you do not have a Biju.
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Bijuu Name
Name of the Bijuu inside you...or the bijuu that you actually are.

Stage
Bijuus and jinchuuriki have stage. Put yours here.

Passive Abilities


Bijuu Techniques





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Basics
she keeps a curved shortblade handy

Special Objects
Keeps a few weapon scrolls onhand. Just has shurikens and other projectile types. Basic stuff in case she can't just make them with crystal

Kyōmeisen - rank A - sound amplifying ninja tool modified to use oscillating crystals. It's design is based off a tool to stop the edo tensai technique but can be used by shinobi to imitate some of what powerful monks can do. Unlike the original this custom one is a more delicate instrument and must be recalibrated each time it is damaged. It can be repaired on the spot unlike the original if it received damage that can be fixed with force or something but it must be recalibrated for use. This particular one will use an animal spirit in addition to its customizations.

Gear
she wears some padding and armor, nothing too heavy. Very little movement restriction but not designed for those who like to run around flying about kicking trees down with their whirlwind kick of death.

Miscellaneous
will occasionally have jewelry, prayer beads, or a vajra (used for sealing spirits in clerical rituals but is mostly for disguise in this case) on hand
PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 9:00 am


Makako-ma

Jonin must start at B rank normally,so you'll need to change that and make sure the jutsu points are right.

Anyway, I'm reserving your spot for an Iwa jonin. Iwa will open soon.

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Makako-ma

PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 9:02 am


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Makako-ma

Jonin must start at B rank normally,so you'll need to change that and make sure the jutsu points are right.

Anyway, I'm reserving your spot for an Iwa jonin. Iwa will open soon.


What does "locked" mean in these jutsu lists, and what would be a normal number for a B rank ninja.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 9:06 am


Makako-ma
--R31gn-of-Ph3r--
Makako-ma

Jonin must start at B rank normally,so you'll need to change that and make sure the jutsu points are right.

Anyway, I'm reserving your spot for an Iwa jonin. Iwa will open soon.


What does "locked" mean in these jutsu lists, and what would be a normal number for a B rank ninja.

"Locked" means that your character hasn't learned the jutsu yet, but you intend to and are putting it in her profile for convenience for now.

And this thread should answer your other questions.

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Makako-ma

PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:55 pm


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Makako-ma
--R31gn-of-Ph3r--
Makako-ma

Jonin must start at B rank normally,so you'll need to change that and make sure the jutsu points are right.

Anyway, I'm reserving your spot for an Iwa jonin. Iwa will open soon.


What does "locked" mean in these jutsu lists, and what would be a normal number for a B rank ninja.

"Locked" means that your character hasn't learned the jutsu yet, but you intend to and are putting it in her profile for convenience for now.

And this thread should answer your other questions.


changed her rank, I can lock some stuff but some of it doesn't quite make sense to lock for a jonin or even a chunin

But there are also some appropriate limitations on her starting out anyways. She can't learn a second chakra type outside of yin and yang which is technically just normal techniques. And there's some other stuff.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:57 pm


Makako-ma
--R31gn-of-Ph3r--
Makako-ma
--R31gn-of-Ph3r--
Makako-ma

Jonin must start at B rank normally,so you'll need to change that and make sure the jutsu points are right.

Anyway, I'm reserving your spot for an Iwa jonin. Iwa will open soon.


What does "locked" mean in these jutsu lists, and what would be a normal number for a B rank ninja.

"Locked" means that your character hasn't learned the jutsu yet, but you intend to and are putting it in her profile for convenience for now.

And this thread should answer your other questions.


changed her rank, I can lock some stuff but some of it doesn't quite make sense to lock for a jonin or even a chunin

But there are also some appropriate limitations on her starting out anyways. She can't learn a second chakra type outside of yin and yang which is technically just normal techniques. And there's some other stuff.
Yeah, you're going to need to lock some things to get to the appropriate jutsu points, everyone has to.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 4:08 pm


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Makako-ma

Jonin must start at B rank normally,so you'll need to change that and make sure the jutsu points are right.

Anyway, I'm reserving your spot for an Iwa jonin. Iwa will open soon.


What does "locked" mean in these jutsu lists, and what would be a normal number for a B rank ninja.

"Locked" means that your character hasn't learned the jutsu yet, but you intend to and are putting it in her profile for convenience for now.

And this thread should answer your other questions.


changed her rank, I can lock some stuff but some of it doesn't quite make sense to lock for a jonin or even a chunin

But there are also some appropriate limitations on her starting out anyways. She can't learn a second chakra type outside of yin and yang which is technically just normal techniques. And there's some other stuff.
Yeah, you're going to need to lock some things to get to the appropriate jutsu points, everyone has to.


I've locked some stuff and plan to have the crystal lady do some clerical work and thus learn something that may seem a bit off compared to what's left.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 9:49 pm


Makako-ma
(custom) Light recording - C-rank - a semi-advanced imitation technique. Derives form the crystal mirror, the user can record patterns of light to create clones of herself or others. These clones can remain inside the mirror or step out to become crystal clones. These clones can actually use any techniques the user knows and copy their kekkei genkai as long as it derives from their physical form. However the clones are still made using the users chakra. If person A makes a clone of person B then its a clone of person B but with person A's chakra and made of crystal. The clone can use your byakusharitokidokigan but will probably just hurt itselfusing a portion of the wrong chakra for a technique its controller has never tried before.

byakusharitokidokigan? What does that even mean? Whose jutsu can the clones use?

Also, you need to get down to 53 points, which you are not at.

You also must have these techniques are all academy students graduate with them:

clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2016 11:22 pm


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Makako-ma
(custom) Light recording - C-rank - a semi-advanced imitation technique. Derives form the crystal mirror, the user can record patterns of light to create clones of herself or others. These clones can remain inside the mirror or step out to become crystal clones. These clones can actually use any techniques the user knows and copy their kekkei genkai as long as it derives from their physical form. However the clones are still made using the users chakra. If person A makes a clone of person B then its a clone of person B but with person A's chakra and made of crystal. The clone can use your byakusharitokidokigan but will probably just hurt itselfusing a portion of the wrong chakra for a technique its controller has never tried before.

byakusharitokidokigan? What does that even mean? Whose jutsu can the clones use?

Also, you need to get down to 53 points, which you are not at.

You also must have these techniques are all academy students graduate with them:

clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank


it is just an "all the above" combination of a bunch of words followed by "gan" implying it refers to all the eye techniques.

She uses false genjutsu or pseudo-genjutsu based off light manipulation or illusion. It can trick eye techniques though its possible to overcome this if you are looking for her specific technique specifically for whatever reason.

I'll add the three and the clones don't use any techniques but may be used in techniques since they are made of crystal. What's special about this kind of clone is similar to the earth release clone. Just touching them isn't enough to make them disappear. Additionally, defeating one will leave behind something which has its own strengths and issues.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:12 am


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Makako-ma
(custom) Light recording - C-rank - a semi-advanced imitation technique. Derives form the crystal mirror, the user can record patterns of light to create clones of herself or others. These clones can remain inside the mirror or step out to become crystal clones. These clones can actually use any techniques the user knows and copy their kekkei genkai as long as it derives from their physical form. However the clones are still made using the users chakra. If person A makes a clone of person B then its a clone of person B but with person A's chakra and made of crystal. The clone can use your byakusharitokidokigan but will probably just hurt itselfusing a portion of the wrong chakra for a technique its controller has never tried before.

byakusharitokidokigan? What does that even mean? Whose jutsu can the clones use?

Also, you need to get down to 53 points, which you are not at.

You also must have these techniques are all academy students graduate with them:

clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank


done butchering the ninjutsu roster lol

53 points now

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:02 am


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(Custom) Crystal release: Light manipulation - Rank S (rank my vary but this one is based off the highest level technique known for the system as a whole) (locked)

You don't need to rank this. You'll just rank the individual techniques when you learn them.


E rank - 3 (3 points)
clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank


D rank- 3 (6 points)

Crystal Release: God's crossing D - rank

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade D-rank (Jade crystal techniques tent to form faster and come in more variety of forms. I believe these are simpler)

Not very delicate illness extraction technique - (D-rank) similar concept to the full version but she might break something. If you want to get sick near a doctor. If you want to survive then grit your teeth and hope this works. This version is good enough to get poison out of the body.


C rank - 5 (15 points)

Crystal Release: Crystal lance C-rank (based on guesswork, fairly simplistic)

Jade Crystal Clone Technique C-Rank (more advanced cloning techniques seem to be B rank at best. This one can be kindof strong but this is primarily because of the material used I think not the actual difficulty of use.

Shuriken Wild Dance C - rank Flexible technique that can potentially use different types of crystal or formations but same general concept.

Cherry Blossom Impact C -Rank

(custom) Shifting current: motion - C rank - she can disperse a force using her hands or limbs and redirect whatever is left of it as long as it has a solid medium and a relatively small point of impact and area of exertion like with the cherry blossom impact for example. She could stop a train or boulder with this in theory but that's bigger than a fist or human so it would take a lot more chakra


B rank - 10 (40 points)

Crystal Pentagonal prison - 2 derivatives B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal Armour B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal wheel B-rank (based off guesswork but this is a supplemental jutsu with many applications, it seems to fit)

(Custom) - Crystal shaping techniques- B rank, - a collection of different things said crystal release user is skilled enough to make. The rank should match the shinobi rank of the user. (nothing with any particularly unusual application or high skill or athletic requirements goes here)

Crystal release: Crimson Fruit B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal release: Crystal encampment wall B-rank (most wall jutsu tend to be around B-rank)

Crystal needles B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Jade Crystal Hexagonal pillars B-rank (Just a guess based off its potential use and expected frailty relative to size since its Jade Crystal)

Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon B-rank

Tenketsu point manipulation - B rank (varied rankings, B rank was chosen based off level of specialization) - She can manually manipulate her own tenketsu points. She can do the same with others but has no tool to find theirs or see the actual flow of chakra in their current state unlike those of the hyuga clan. She also only specializes in her own body and emergency procedures and some therapeutic uses for others. She can do this with needles as well but this is far more invasive and will leave scars. Her technique is not adapted for general straightforward combat.


A Rank - 1 (5 points)

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique A-Rank (A more complicated illusory field technique. Actually making the base of the technique is probably not that hard but making one with purpose would take high intelligence and control)


S Rank - 0 (0 points)

Total: 3+6+15+40+5= 69 jutsu points... you've got some more locking to do.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:02 pm


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Quote:
(Custom) Crystal release: Light manipulation - Rank S (rank my vary but this one is based off the highest level technique known for the system as a whole) (locked)

You don't need to rank this. You'll just rank the individual techniques when you learn them.


E rank - 3 (3 points)
clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank


D rank- 3 (6 points)

Crystal Release: God's crossing D - rank

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade D-rank (Jade crystal techniques tent to form faster and come in more variety of forms. I believe these are simpler)

Not very delicate illness extraction technique - (D-rank) similar concept to the full version but she might break something. If you want to get sick near a doctor. If you want to survive then grit your teeth and hope this works. This version is good enough to get poison out of the body.


C rank - 5 (15 points)

Crystal Release: Crystal lance C-rank (based on guesswork, fairly simplistic)

Jade Crystal Clone Technique C-Rank (more advanced cloning techniques seem to be B rank at best. This one can be kindof strong but this is primarily because of the material used I think not the actual difficulty of use.

Shuriken Wild Dance C - rank Flexible technique that can potentially use different types of crystal or formations but same general concept.

Cherry Blossom Impact C -Rank

(custom) Shifting current: motion - C rank - she can disperse a force using her hands or limbs and redirect whatever is left of it as long as it has a solid medium and a relatively small point of impact and area of exertion like with the cherry blossom impact for example. She could stop a train or boulder with this in theory but that's bigger than a fist or human so it would take a lot more chakra


B rank - 10 (40 points)

Crystal Pentagonal prison - 2 derivatives B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal Armour B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal wheel B-rank (based off guesswork but this is a supplemental jutsu with many applications, it seems to fit)

(Custom) - Crystal shaping techniques- B rank, - a collection of different things said crystal release user is skilled enough to make. The rank should match the shinobi rank of the user. (nothing with any particularly unusual application or high skill or athletic requirements goes here)

Crystal release: Crimson Fruit B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal release: Crystal encampment wall B-rank (most wall jutsu tend to be around B-rank)

Crystal needles B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Jade Crystal Hexagonal pillars B-rank (Just a guess based off its potential use and expected frailty relative to size since its Jade Crystal)

Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon B-rank

Tenketsu point manipulation - B rank (varied rankings, B rank was chosen based off level of specialization) - She can manually manipulate her own tenketsu points. She can do the same with others but has no tool to find theirs or see the actual flow of chakra in their current state unlike those of the hyuga clan. She also only specializes in her own body and emergency procedures and some therapeutic uses for others. She can do this with needles as well but this is far more invasive and will leave scars. Her technique is not adapted for general straightforward combat.


A Rank - 1 (5 points)

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique A-Rank (A more complicated illusory field technique. Actually making the base of the technique is probably not that hard but making one with purpose would take high intelligence and control)


S Rank - 0 (0 points)

Total: 3+6+15+40+5= 69 jutsu points... you've got some more locking to do.


emotion_awesome how many jutsu points does it take to make a lance as opposed to a spear

Technically if I make about 50 shapes my character becomes like a shinobi goddess with 200 points xD

I'd like to just.. consolidate something lol...

Makako-ma


Makako-ma

PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:16 pm


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E rank - 3 (3 points)
clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank


D rank- 1 (2 points)

Crystal Release: God's crossing D - rank

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade D-rank (Jade crystal techniques tent to form faster and come in more variety of forms. I believe these are simpler) (locked)

Not very delicate illness extraction technique - (D-rank) similar concept to the full version but she might break something. If you want to get sick near a doctor. If you want to survive then grit your teeth and hope this works. This version is good enough to get poison out of the body. (locked)


C rank - 4 (12 points)

Crystal Release: Crystal lance C-rank (based on guesswork, fairly simplistic) (locked)

Jade Crystal Clone Technique C-Rank (more advanced cloning techniques seem to be B rank at best. This one can be kindof strong but this is primarily because of the material used I think not the actual difficulty of use.

Shuriken Wild Dance C - rank Flexible technique that can potentially use different types of crystal or formations but same general concept.

Cherry Blossom Impact C -Rank

(custom) Shifting current: motion - C rank - she can disperse a force using her hands or limbs and redirect whatever is left of it as long as it has a solid medium and a relatively small point of impact and area of exertion like with the cherry blossom impact for example. She could stop a train or boulder with this in theory but that's bigger than a fist or human so it would take a lot more chakra


B rank - 7 (28 points)

Crystal Pentagonal prison - 2 derivatives B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal Armour B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal wheel B-rank (based off guesswork but this is a supplemental jutsu with many applications, it seems to fit)

(Custom) - Crystal shaping techniques- B rank, - a collection of different things said crystal release user is skilled enough to make. The rank should match the shinobi rank of the user. (nothing with any particularly unusual application or high skill or athletic requirements goes here)

Crystal release: Crimson Fruit B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank) (locked)

Crystal release: Crystal encampment wall B-rank (most wall jutsu tend to be around B-rank)(locked)

Crystal needles B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Jade Crystal Hexagonal pillars B-rank (Just a guess based off its potential use and expected frailty relative to size since its Jade Crystal)

Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon B-rank (locked)

Tenketsu point manipulation - B rank (varied rankings, B rank was chosen based off level of specialization) - She can manually manipulate her own tenketsu points. She can do the same with others but has no tool to find theirs or see the actual flow of chakra in their current state unlike those of the hyuga clan. She also only specializes in her own body and emergency procedures and some therapeutic uses for others. She can do this with needles as well but this is far more invasive and will leave scars. Her technique is not adapted for general straightforward combat.


A Rank - 1 (5 points)

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique A-Rank (A more complicated illusory field technique. Actually making the base of the technique is probably not that hard but making one with purpose would take high intelligence and control)


S Rank - 0 (0 points)


this should be 50 points

is this dysfunctional enough?

confused getting any weapon techniques on this character that makes weapons will take forever wont it
PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:26 pm


Makako-ma
--R31gn-of-Ph3r--


E rank - 3 (3 points)
clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank


D rank- 1 (2 points)

Crystal Release: God's crossing D - rank

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade D-rank (Jade crystal techniques tent to form faster and come in more variety of forms. I believe these are simpler) (locked)

Not very delicate illness extraction technique - (D-rank) similar concept to the full version but she might break something. If you want to get sick near a doctor. If you want to survive then grit your teeth and hope this works. This version is good enough to get poison out of the body. (locked)


C rank - 4 (12 points)

Crystal Release: Crystal lance C-rank (based on guesswork, fairly simplistic) (locked)

Jade Crystal Clone Technique C-Rank (more advanced cloning techniques seem to be B rank at best. This one can be kindof strong but this is primarily because of the material used I think not the actual difficulty of use.

Shuriken Wild Dance C - rank Flexible technique that can potentially use different types of crystal or formations but same general concept.

Cherry Blossom Impact C -Rank

(custom) Shifting current: motion - C rank - she can disperse a force using her hands or limbs and redirect whatever is left of it as long as it has a solid medium and a relatively small point of impact and area of exertion like with the cherry blossom impact for example. She could stop a train or boulder with this in theory but that's bigger than a fist or human so it would take a lot more chakra


B rank - 7 (28 points)

Crystal Pentagonal prison - 2 derivatives B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal Armour B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal wheel B-rank (based off guesswork but this is a supplemental jutsu with many applications, it seems to fit)

(Custom) - Crystal shaping techniques- B rank, - a collection of different things said crystal release user is skilled enough to make. The rank should match the shinobi rank of the user. (nothing with any particularly unusual application or high skill or athletic requirements goes here)

Crystal release: Crimson Fruit B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank) (locked)

Crystal release: Crystal encampment wall B-rank (most wall jutsu tend to be around B-rank)(locked)

Crystal needles B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Jade Crystal Hexagonal pillars B-rank (Just a guess based off its potential use and expected frailty relative to size since its Jade Crystal)

Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon B-rank (locked)

Tenketsu point manipulation - B rank (varied rankings, B rank was chosen based off level of specialization) - She can manually manipulate her own tenketsu points. She can do the same with others but has no tool to find theirs or see the actual flow of chakra in their current state unlike those of the hyuga clan. She also only specializes in her own body and emergency procedures and some therapeutic uses for others. She can do this with needles as well but this is far more invasive and will leave scars. Her technique is not adapted for general straightforward combat.


A Rank - 1 (5 points)

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique A-Rank (A more complicated illusory field technique. Actually making the base of the technique is probably not that hard but making one with purpose would take high intelligence and control)


S Rank - 0 (0 points)


this should be 50 points

is this dysfunctional enough?

confused getting any weapon techniques on this character that makes weapons will take forever wont it
Yes, lol. it should be approved once you get that in... in fact, you can keep all of your C ranked techniques, which would put you at an even 53.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 12:39 pm


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E rank - 3 (3 points)
clone technique - E rank

transformation technique - E rank

substitution technique - E rank


D rank- 1 (2 points)

Crystal Release: God's crossing D - rank

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade D-rank (Jade crystal techniques tent to form faster and come in more variety of forms. I believe these are simpler) (locked)

Not very delicate illness extraction technique - (D-rank) similar concept to the full version but she might break something. If you want to get sick near a doctor. If you want to survive then grit your teeth and hope this works. This version is good enough to get poison out of the body. (locked)


C rank - 4 (12 points)

Crystal Release: Crystal lance C-rank (based on guesswork, fairly simplistic) (locked)

Jade Crystal Clone Technique C-Rank (more advanced cloning techniques seem to be B rank at best. This one can be kindof strong but this is primarily because of the material used I think not the actual difficulty of use.

Shuriken Wild Dance C - rank Flexible technique that can potentially use different types of crystal or formations but same general concept.

Cherry Blossom Impact C -Rank

(custom) Shifting current: motion - C rank - she can disperse a force using her hands or limbs and redirect whatever is left of it as long as it has a solid medium and a relatively small point of impact and area of exertion like with the cherry blossom impact for example. She could stop a train or boulder with this in theory but that's bigger than a fist or human so it would take a lot more chakra


B rank - 7 (28 points)

Crystal Pentagonal prison - 2 derivatives B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal Armour B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Crystal wheel B-rank (based off guesswork but this is a supplemental jutsu with many applications, it seems to fit)

(Custom) - Crystal shaping techniques- B rank, - a collection of different things said crystal release user is skilled enough to make. The rank should match the shinobi rank of the user. (nothing with any particularly unusual application or high skill or athletic requirements goes here)

Crystal release: Crimson Fruit B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank) (locked)

Crystal release: Crystal encampment wall B-rank (most wall jutsu tend to be around B-rank)(locked)

Crystal needles B-rank (based on closest equivalent with rank)

Jade Crystal Hexagonal pillars B-rank (Just a guess based off its potential use and expected frailty relative to size since its Jade Crystal)

Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon B-rank (locked)

Tenketsu point manipulation - B rank (varied rankings, B rank was chosen based off level of specialization) - She can manually manipulate her own tenketsu points. She can do the same with others but has no tool to find theirs or see the actual flow of chakra in their current state unlike those of the hyuga clan. She also only specializes in her own body and emergency procedures and some therapeutic uses for others. She can do this with needles as well but this is far more invasive and will leave scars. Her technique is not adapted for general straightforward combat.


A Rank - 1 (5 points)

Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique A-Rank (A more complicated illusory field technique. Actually making the base of the technique is probably not that hard but making one with purpose would take high intelligence and control)


S Rank - 0 (0 points)


this should be 50 points

is this dysfunctional enough?

confused getting any weapon techniques on this character that makes weapons will take forever wont it
Yes, lol. it should be approved once you get that in... in fact, you can keep all of your C ranked techniques, which would put you at an even 53.
thanks, now I just have to get rid of her background and make her extremely vanilla because she can't exist outside of her home nation and doesn't know how to do anything lol. Maybe she'll be a plumber
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