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I assume this profile is incomplete, since you don't have any jutsu. Please tag it as [UC] in the subject line.

You don't need the u/c now that you've added the jutsu. That's just for if you put if your profile ISN'T ready.

you need to put your title in this format:
name [rank] village [ready or u/c]

for my character this was:
Chiyura Asira [Gennin] Konoha [Ready!]

Your jutsu point count is wrong. I count 21. Which is fine, you just need to have it say that.


Lightning Sabre- you say it can cut some metal, but what metal? Perhaps it can cut through thin metal objects like a kunai, but not through a normal sword?

As for lightning wave...I almost want to say the stun is too much for a c ranked move, but being able to ignore it with sheer willpower fixes the qualms I have with it. Since you have 1 extra jutsu point, lets make it B ranked. Also, it isn't really a weapon, is it? If its a technique that uses a weapon it goes under kenjutsu.

btw, you can start rping, just don't get into any major fights until you're profile is reapproved.

Yahoo and alright chief I can't wait to see your story unfold. smile