Meaning of Name Kyrie (Lord) Ottilie (Prosperous in battle) Sakura (Cherry Blossom)
Nickname "The Passive Shukaku"
Famous Shinobi Name "The Ghost in The Machine"
Gender Female
Age 21
Birthday 6/9
Physical Description Wavy black, pink, and sky blue hair resembling loose curls that falls just below her upper back. She usually has her hair combed back and occasionally in an updo. Her eyes are fierce almond shaped green/light grey eyes shadowed by long eyelashes and thick always well-kept brows. Otti's facial contour is slim and well rounded yet defined and well taken care of hygiene and make-up wise. Her small nose is gently upturned with a delicate broad bridge. Her height average and her build would be best described as toned with light abs and long legs. Overall Otti is small with fair skin until her alternative state takes over and her skin develops a slight tint in tone.
Common Clothing • One pieces (body suits, rompers, dresses, and suspenders)
Occupation Tutor at the Academy & Librarian
Status Alive
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Clan Name Kurama
Kekkei Genkai, Stage Obtained Awakened
Known Chakra Elements Yin & Yang
Land, Village Land of Fire, Leaf Village.
Rank, Title D-Rank, Genin
Special Skills Genjutsu, elaborate tactioner, speed, & stealth.
Known Affiliations No.
Dominant Jutsu Types Genjutsu
Intelligence Kyrie is highly sensitive making her very self-conscience and forcing her to develop a high level of emotional intelligence. Her senses are keen to body language and tones to depict the demeanor of others and she will pick up on tension. Kyrie does not prioritize her intelligence quotient as much as she does her emotional quotient and will play dumb or clueless to avoid confrontation saving her a lot of trouble.
Fighting Tendencies Pressuring her opponent and making critical decisions under pressure. She can be creepy or a bit scary and sometimes maniacal or incredibly solemn when in combat. She will unload relentlessly, as her name states she is prosperous in battle.
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Personality Despite all of her mental conditions and negative inner speech, Otti tends to be one of the most outwardly loving, affectionate, caring, fun-loving and generous person to most that know her. In general, she can come off as introverted and shy, but once you get to know her you will find a quiet, strong, assertive, and humble character. Her wild fighting style reflects her aggression, creativity, intelligence, and wisdom for it appears reckless, but has a method to it. Otti may be very poised and mature by nature but her dual nature is also rough, wild, and adventurous. In general, this delicate flower tends to be responsible, ambitious, and yet have her fun too. It is important to be patient with her and she'll return the favour which is not always a good thing...
Likes ○Clarity/Peace__○Nurturing__○Making Connections__○Rough Housing ○Fantasizing __○Being morbid__○Being youthful__○Living above her means ○Progressive change/consistency__○Killing__○Intimacy__○Dying/dead Bodies
Kawarimi no Jutsu "Body Replacement Technique" E-ranked Bushin no jutsu "Clone Technique" E-ranked Henge no Jutsu "Transformation Techniques" E-ranked
Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing D-ranked Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking D-ranked Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique D-ranked
Kai - Release C-ranked Soushuuha - Manipulate Advancing Blades C-ranked
Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu "Sly Mind Affect Technique" C-ranked Kokuangyou no Jutsu "Journey Into Black Darkness Technique" A-ranked Nehan shouja no jutsu "Temple of Nirvana Technique" A-ranked
Kekkei Genkai: (May become real)
Magen • Jubaku Satsu "Demonic Illusion Tree Binding Death" B-ranked Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu "Demonic Illusion Hell Fire Technique" A-ranked**
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Relatives Brothers: Mike Kurama {Big Brother || Murk Kurama {Oldest Brother} Parents: Gale Kurama {Mother} || Aaron Kurama {Father}
Other Relationships ...
History Growing up Ottilie was an average ninja throughout being an academy student and Genin-Ranked Ninja. Her parents had died when she was 2 and she was left with her brother, Mike Kurama who was one of her 5 siblings. They always had enough especially, since Ottilie's brother was an ANBU and the money left behind by their parents could take care of them until Ottilie was an established ninja who could take care of herself. Well, for her brother that was not so difficult by age 16 he was an ANBU whereas by 16 Ottilie was just becoming an academy student. She had spent a lot of her ninja years just staying home and avoiding people. Growing up without parents was not easy for her and with her brother working often, she was often left unsupervised.
Growing up with her brother Ottilie never had to do anything much for herself or even take being a ninja seriously, until one day her brother was arrested for killing an innocent couple and their baby. Broken and frighten Ottilie rushed to make sure she advanced her rank during the four years it took for his case to break through. When he finally returned they both would meet a new version of their siblings. Ottilie was now a serious academy student at age 20 ready to graduate into becoming a genin. After proven innocent Mike was now age 33 and resuming as a bitter, and scarred Anbu after he was proven innocent.
The cold hearted Mike now short tempered and easily irritated took it upon himself to train his little sister. His methods not quite human as he used training sessions from his Anbu experience. He would often push Ottilie too hard and if he felt she was coming up short, he would punish her regardless of her state. Most could tell that Ottilie was going through something at home, but still there were some who made her experiences worse. Growing up with Mike was always fun and easy going, but now everything was edgy and/or sketchy. Even his job routine had changed and his income had significant growth. It was clear to see for Ottilie knew their parents' savings were completely depleted and yet their daily lifestyle kept growing. The lifestyle adding new shady characters, illegal substances, & definitely a materialistic lifestyle that was even starting to shift Ottilie's perspective.
By age 21 Ottilie was a Genin living comfortably and Mike was so busy he would barely have time to get on her case. She was truly an adult at age 21 he believed and had cut down on the training and abuse. Feeling less pressured due to Mike cutting the reigns, enabled her to settle down and find her footing. She was being placed into a squad expected to be elites one day, Ottilie just hopes she can find her balance in this journey to live up to her newly found expectations. As the stress grows, so does Lady Sakura's temper shortens. Her practice was becoming more consistent as she really began to get into her ninja way. As she grew in experience, her social life took a step further into the void of solitude. Her brother now becoming gentler in nature unable to close the distance on a closed off individual with a mission.
Gear Kyrie wears a black Flak Jacket, black hgih top ankle boots with extra grip and ankle support. Her lace up gauntlets are black as well and made of wood. It may not be the strongest, but will take an extreme blow before falling to pieces. Last, Kyrie has one black knee pad capable of enduring a lot of stress.
Miscellaneous • 7 ear piercings, snake bites, 5 inch back hooks (6) w/ribbon • Bracelet, ankle bracelet, & necklace • Herbs, Backwoods, & a lighter
Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2016 6:36 pm
You thought I was dead!?! HAHA!!! Keep dreaming! cat_3nodding
1) You can't be a C-rank genin without special permission.
2) You don't have any jutsu besides the Academy techniques. You by definition can't be C-rank if you don't have 37 points of techniques. You aren't even D-rank, normal genin level, without 22 points. (Of course, if you're one point under with nothing else to spend it on you're one point under, but you get the idea.)
3) Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, by definition, requires some sort of trauma. Yet there is no trauma mentioned in her History.
4) Yin and Yang are not Chakra Elements. While they are part of certain techniques, that field refers solely to the five elements (Katon, Suiton, Fuuton, Raiton, and Doton) as well as any combination elements coming from a bloodline ability.
5) What is Alpha Cell?
6) Under intelligence, the description in the template literally says not to just put an IQ score. Also, I have no idea what EQ is, and I'm about to graduate with a degree in Psychology in three months. You need to elaborate on that.
7) Not so much "you can't do this," but food for thought: how is a person that's this mentally unstable going to function as a ninja?
8 ) You need to remove the mention of marijuana in her profile. We're keeping it PG-13, in accordance with Gaia ToS. I'm pretty sure reference to an illegal drug (even if it's stupid that the drug in question is illegal) pushes it out of PG-13 territory.
9) Based on what you've written in her history, she graduated the Academy two years ago. That's not really allowed; new genin characters start with being assigned to their squads for the first time. So unless something happened to her last squad she is fresh out of the Academy.
10) Nitpick, but I'd put elaborate imagination under miscellaneous skills. While creativity is certainly helpful in battle as it is in all things, it's not immediately relevant to being a ninja.
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2016 7:42 am
Rhaegar14
1) You can't be a C-rank genin without special permission. Changed
2) You don't have any jutsu besides the Academy techniques. You by definition can't be C-rank if you don't have 37 points of techniques. You aren't even D-rank, normal genin level, without 22 points. (Of course, if you're one point under with nothing else to spend it on you're one point under, but you get the idea.) I thought it says leave blank if you want someone to do it?
3) Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, by definition, requires some sort of trauma. Yet there is no trauma mentioned in her History. Deleted
4) Yin and Yang are not Chakra Elements. While they are part of certain techniques, that field refers solely to the five elements (Katon, Suiton, Fuuton, Raiton, and Doton) as well as any combination elements coming from a bloodline ability.
Changed, but I expect to have Yin release due to my bloodline
6) Under intelligence, the description in the template literally says not to just put an IQ score. Also, I have no idea what EQ is, and I'm about to graduate with a degree in Psychology in three months. You need to elaborate on that. EQ link** **reworded it for you**
7) Not so much "you can't do this," but food for thought: how is a person that's this mentally unstable going to function as a ninja? Read EQ (I have all those well a different kind of OCD lol)
8 ) You need to remove the mention of marijuana in her profile. We're keeping it PG-13, in accordance with Gaia ToS. I'm pretty sure reference to an illegal drug (even if it's stupid that the drug in question is illegal) pushes it out of PG-13 territory.
Changed
9) Based on what you've written in her history, she graduated the Academy two years ago. That's not really allowed; new genin characters start with being assigned to their squads for the first time. So unless something happened to her last squad she is fresh out of the Academy.
Changed.
10) Nitpick, but I'd put elaborate imagination under miscellaneous skills. While creativity is certainly helpful in battle as it is in all things, it's not immediately relevant to being a ninja.
Refer to links in # 4. (Yin release, "governs imagination", I didn't read anything about creativity.)
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Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2016 10:14 pm
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4) Yin and Yang are not Chakra Elements. While they are part of certain techniques, that field refers solely to the five elements (Katon, Suiton, Fuuton, Raiton, and Doton) as well as any combination elements coming from a bloodline ability.
Changed, but I expect to have Yin release due to my bloodline
Yeah, definitely, but Yin Release is part of all genjutsu by my understanding. The point is more that it shouldn't be listed there than you can't have it.
Uriel X3
6) Under intelligence, the description in the template literally says not to just put an IQ score. Also, I have no idea what EQ is, and I'm about to graduate with a degree in Psychology in three months. You need to elaborate on that. EQ link** **reworded it for you**
Alright, I've never seen the acronym EQ, but I know what emotional intelligence is. But my point was more that if *I* don't know what you're talking about, a random person reading your profile is almost definitely not gonna know what you're talking about. I'd recommend elaborating on what exactly a high emotional intelligence entails.
Uriel X3
7) Not so much "you can't do this," but food for thought: how is a person that's this mentally unstable going to function as a ninja? Read EQ (I have all those well a different kind of OCD lol)
Somewhat addressed by the removal of PTSD, but that doesn't really answer my question. I was more thinking about the number of situations that could cause this character to utterly shut down in a stressful situation, such as a trigger-induced panic attack, or how she might react when she can't follow a compulsion in the heat of battle. You may be able to function as an adult with all of those disorders (and good for you if you can, really) but I am going to make the assumption here that you're not a soldier and are not routinely in situations where people are trying to kill you.
Again, though, this is food for thought, not me telling you you have to change it.
Uriel X3
10) Nitpick, but I'd put elaborate imagination under miscellaneous skills. While creativity is certainly helpful in battle as it is in all things, it's not immediately relevant to being a ninja.
Refer to links in # 4. (Yin release, "governs imagination", I didn't read anything about creativity.)
Okay, great, but I'd still call it tangential. At the very least tie it in to the potency of her genjutsu in your write-up.
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2016 10:34 pm
Rhaegar14
Yeah, definitely, but Yin Release is part of all genjutsu by my understanding. The point is more that it shouldn't be listed there than you can't have it.
Understood
Rhaegar14
Alright, I've never seen the acronym EQ, but I know what emotional intelligence is. But my point was more that if *I* don't know what you're talking about, a random person reading your profile is almost definitely not gonna know what you're talking about. I'd recommend elaborating on what exactly a high emotional intelligence entails.
Okay I will
Rhaegar14
7) Not so much "you can't do this," but food for thought: how is a person that's this mentally unstable going to function as a ninja?
Somewhat addressed by the removal of PTSD, but that doesn't really answer my question. I was more thinking about the number of situations that could cause this character to utterly shut down in a stressful situation, such as a trigger-induced panic attack, or how she might react when she can't follow a compulsion in the heat of battle. You may be able to function as an adult with all of those disorders (and good for you if you can, really) but I am going to make the assumption here that you're not a soldier and are not routinely in situations where people are trying to kill you.
Again, though, this is food for thought, not me telling you you have to change it.
Oh I thought you were making a point lol You're right I dont need to handicap my character. I was doing it to have fun.
Rhaegar14
10) Nitpick, but I'd put elaborate imagination under miscellaneous skills. While creativity is certainly helpful in battle as it is in all things, it's not immediately relevant to being a ninja.
Okay will change
Rhaegar14
Okay, great, but I'd still call it tangential. At the very least tie it in to the potency of her genjutsu in your write-up.
lol will change. I'll Quote you when I am done with my profile.
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Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2016 3:15 pm
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4) Yin and Yang are not Chakra Elements. While they are part of certain techniques, that field refers solely to the five elements (Katon, Suiton, Fuuton, Raiton, and Doton) as well as any combination elements coming from a bloodline ability.
You guys said these werent elements, then made them elements....; I am putting them back
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