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 Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 9:30 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 10:00 pm
You already know that I like it, of course. I have to say, while I was reading it in pieces it seemed a little disjointed, but now that I read it all at once it flows really well. I guess that's the nature of reading things as they are being written. Really great line: Quote: She took the mask and looked at it, looked at it for a long moment before she held it close to herself and put her arms around it as if it could - at least for a short moment - replace him. What had she done? And not just because of the hyphens! Although they do work very nicely.
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 3:45 am
I am glad that you posted a comment for me smile
And eventhough you're the only one who commented here yet I see that a couple of people has read it and the fact that you want me to go on makes me happy.
You know that I first was struggling if I really should post it up here, but I feel that it was necessary as a step to come over it - the unability to write I mean...
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 7:19 am
I know what you mean about deciding whether or not to post. I've never posted any of my writing online, but if I wrote fan fiction I think that I would. It sounds rather exhilirating to have a bunch of people hanging on your every word. xd Please please do keep writing!
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 10:48 am
Seabhac I know what you mean about deciding whether or not to post. I've never posted any of my writing online, but if I wrote fan fiction I think that I would. It sounds rather exhilirating to have a bunch of people hanging on your every word. xd Please please do keep writing!
When you know that there is somebody who's gonna read it and may even want you to write on it gives you a completely different feeling as if you just write it for yourself.
I mean if you just write it for yourself you can still say, that you don't necessarily need to write it down.
But writing is like a cure to me, and I'm starting to feel sick when I do not write for a long time, so this may be the only way to "help" me.
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 11:00 am
Azurella But writing is like a cure to me, and I'm starting to feel sick when I do not write for a long time, so this may be the only way to "help" me. Yay, we're curing Azu's sickness!
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Death_Valley_Queen Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 1:14 pm
aww! I love it! it made me cry! -hugs- Actually, I really was crying and I'm sitting in my school's computer lab so I got some looks and one chick came and asked me if I was okay.
Her: "is something wrong?"
Me: "Have you seen V for Vendetta?"
Her: "No.. why?"
Me: "Because you just can't understand."
Her: "... oookayyyy...-weirded out look-"
What is it with everyone and making me cry today? You are like.. the third person! -hugs- but these were good tears at least! (Not like the other two times).
Anyway, I'm really sorry I couldn't help with this instalment! I really wanted to I just got piled in with my own stuff (I'm working on five fanfics right now: two VfV's, on Harry Potter, and one LOST, I'm soo swamped!)
I would be more then happy to help with anything you need, since those five things are coming to a close soon so just tell me what you need and when you need it.
I really did love this instalment! Keep up the great work!
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 4:38 pm
Death_Valley_Queen aww! I love it! it made me cry! -hugs- Actually, I really was crying and I'm sitting in my school's computer lab so I got some looks and one chick came and asked me if I was okay. Her: "is something wrong?" Me: "Have you seen V for Vendetta?" Her: "No.. why?" Me: "Because you just can't understand." Her: "... oookayyyy...-weirded out look-" What is it with everyone and making me cry today? You are like.. the third person! -hugs- but these were good tears at least! (Not like the other two times). Anyway, I'm really sorry I couldn't help with this instalment! I really wanted to I just got piled in with my own stuff (I'm working on five fanfics right now: two VfV's, on Harry Potter, and one LOST, I'm soo swamped!) I would be more then happy to help with anything you need, since those five things are coming to a close soon so just tell me what you need and when you need it. I really did love this instalment! Keep up the great work!
Which part exactly? *is curious*
Well I am glad, that you like it and I will try to write on just today.
Well what I'd love you to do: Write the story from V's kind of view.
In this way we can still work together, since you then can keep an eye on what I have written and then tell the story from his kind of view.
Oh, that would be so great, I'm sure!
(And amazing to read smile )
BTW, my new nickname "AZ" is actually pretty lovely *hugs* smile
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 5:08 pm
^_^, oh wow, I really like this. More!!! feed the fans!!! *hops up and down in anticipation*
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 7:14 pm
Tsykcuhs ^_^, oh wow, I really like this. More!!! feed the fans!!! *hops up and down in anticipation* The fans are hungry! I've been quiet because I don't want to rush you, but this is a good opportunity for me to express how much I really do want you to write on. A writer needs some encouragement once in a while. No pressure, really I'm serious, just encouragement.
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Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 6:23 am
Seabhac Tsykcuhs ^_^, oh wow, I really like this. More!!! feed the fans!!! *hops up and down in anticipation* The fans are hungry! I've been quiet because I don't want to rush you, but this is a good opportunity for me to express how much I really do want you to write on. A writer needs some encouragement once in a while. No pressure, really I'm serious, just encouragement.
Oh well, if we're not Jolly RPing today I might actually have some time to finally write chapter 4 wink
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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 11:38 am
Just wanted to announce that I posted chapter 4 now (see first post please) and am currently writing 5 which I might add later today. Have fun! smile
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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:04 pm
Haha, the dominoes. I love that part. Hm, I'm excited to see what kind of impact she has on his plans. Things could be very very different. I can't wait to read more!
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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 1:25 pm
Seabhac Haha, the dominoes. I love that part. Hm, I'm excited to see what kind of impact she has on his plans. Things could be very very different. I can't wait to read more!
And it's indeed all going to be very different. I have posted part 1 of Chapter 5 now, can't wait to hear your opinion about it wink
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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 1:33 pm
What a great twist. I love how it parallels so many things and throws in some irony--someone asking V to dance! xd I love it.
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