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akukei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:42 pm


Weekly Prompt Challenge - Week One

Welcome to the first installation of the Weekly Prompt Challenge. Information about the event can be found in the sticky. This week, the challenge will be running slighly shorter than usual due to the fact the guild had opened mid-week. Hereafter, challenges will run monday through sunday, sorry for any confusion!

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This weeks prompts:
arrow So, tell me about the mushroom
arrow 'Its eyes stared back at me, as I strained to see the creature in the dark'

Closing date: Sunday, March 4th

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Don't forget to use both prompts in your entry. You are allowed to change tense and point of view if you wish. You are welome to discuss and post your entries in this thread. Good luck everyone!

RESULTS:
Equal first place: Siatara, Akukei, Seraf the Tainted
PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 1:26 pm


Just a reminder that this weeks challenge closes tomorrow night.

I know alot of you showed interest in it, so hopefully someone enters. Good luck everyone! I hope to see some entries/discussion popping up soon.

akukei
Vice Captain


Kamiense

PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 5:57 pm


akukei
Just a reminder that this weeks challenge closes tomorrow night.

I know alot of you showed interest in it, so hopefully someone enters. Good luck everyone! I hope to see some entries/discussion popping up soon.

Oh wow, I completely forgot about this. I'll try and whip something up tonight.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 6:33 pm


Here's my entry. A little bit about it: It's very short. I'm not used to doing fiction bits quite this short, but the lines lended themselves to this piece.

"So there I was, face to face with the most vile beast imaginable. Its eyes stared back at me as I strained to see the creature in the dark-"

"How'd ya know it was the most scariest creechur in the world if all you could see was its eyes?" The high-pitched, squeaky voice destroyed the carefully constructed atmosphere of the room.

"Jilly!" Several voices grumbled in exasperation as the lights in the room flickered on. A circle of teenage campers with wide eyes sat huddled on the wooden floor, a few sporting slightly annoyed expressions.

"Do you want the story or not?" Theresa asked, hands on her hips where she stood by the lightswitch on the wall. One of the youngest in the group bit her lip and pulled her legs up to her chest, nodding rapidly as other campers glared at her. "Good." The lights flicked off again, and the councilor smiled at the collective intake of breath she heard from the dark room.

It was a camp tradition on the first night of the session to scare the new campers out of their wits. Campers who had been to this one before knew not to spoil it for the others, but there was always one smarty, new or not, who felt the urge to correct the story as it was being told. This time, however, they were all silent as she spun the tale in the dark. "Huge, green eyes stared back at me as I strained to see the creature in the dark. I didn't have time to react as it-"

"Theresa, wake up!" A voice called from outside of the cabin. The camp councilor went to the door to answer the call, annoyed at yet another interruption to her tale.

"Megan, look, I'd love to talk, but we're in the middle of a story here," Theresa chided, recognizing her best friend. She barely heard her friend's words as she glanced down the dorm room hallway and realized that she had been sleeptalking again.

Megan had one of her frequent looks that said she thought you were crazy. "So, tell me about those mushrooms again?"

siatara


Cromwell Initiative

PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 8:40 pm


Here is my entry. It is inspired by my love of camping, and because in the woods there are a ton of mushrooms. 83

The fire snapped and hissed as the rain assaulted it’s heated body, each tiny droplet of water a soldier of moisture sent to slay the once roaring beast of flames and heat, beating it back into it’s layer of wood until only a small portion of it’s body protruded for us to gather around for warmth.

All around us swarmed the droplets of water as we sat and grumbled around the blaze. I shifted uncomfortably from one foot to another, rubbing my shoulders to keep them warm. I turned, presenting my back to the flames so that it would begin to thaw.

I glanced around in the shadowed woods looking for something, anything, to distract myself from the cold and the wet. A splotch of deep cream color attracted my eye against the black, brown and green of the night time forest. It’s eyes stared back at me, as I strained to see the creature in the dark. Slowly it began to resolve, the random paths of the falling deluge the only thing that seemed to attempt to draw my eye away from the little fungi.

I stared at it, it’s little umbrella hat over it’s thin body shaking with each impact of water, causing it to shiver as if afflicted by miserable cold that myself and my companions were. The black locks of it’s hair were groomed into orderly wavy puffs drawn up into its head concealed beneath its umbrella like a shy dame hiding her face from the rain and the men, her tan dress standing out against the filth of the land she stood upon as if asking for the attention of others while pretending to direct it away.

The deluge intensified and my view of the fair maiden of the forest was cut off. A stream of curses from behind me echoed through the night as the beast of flames finally died within its den when the next wave of liquid soldiers fell upon it.

“Screw this guys, let’s head back to the cabin, I don’t think Thomas and the others are coming in this weather.” said Lance. “We can clean up tomorrow.”

A murmur of agreement washed through our group and we soggily and sullenly filed towards the cabin. I looked back once more to the place in the distance where I had seen the little mushroom lass before turning to follow.

The next day dawned and I opened the door of the cabin, blinking till my eyes adjusted to the light. Outside around the fire pit stood rings of mushrooms, tiny figures huddled around the still smoking and snapping coals.

“Hey guys! Come take a look at this!” I called over my shoulder, and a couple thumps of bodies rolling out of bunks answered my call. A shuffle of feet and Lance and Kris came to flank me in the door, blinking as I had moments before.

“Whus all the fuss abou’?” slurred Lance, rubbing sleep from his eyes.
“Look at the mushrooms.” I said.
“You woke us to look at mushrooms?” grumbled Kris. “Why were they invited to the party anyways?”
“Maybe Eric wanted some fungis” muttered Lance.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:36 pm


Well here's my attempt at this weeks challenge. To be honest, I'm not really sure what happened with it - i was quite pushed for time with school work and all. The story just started writing its self! Hopefully someone enjoys reading this, i can't wait to see everyone else's.

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Rain fell that night. It was a cold, misty rain; tapping quietly on smooth-worn pebbles with sharp, trembling fingers. Moss crawled over the rocks, as a centipede wandered placidly back to its earthly home. The mindless dance of the moths drew to its conclusion as midnight’s silent blanket fell over the forest. Time itself appeared to slow, and the darkness began to unfold.

From within a large fern frond damp with beads of dew, a flickering light dripped into the darkness. The frond rustled playfully and the light spilled more radiantly, trickling through rotting leaves and enlivening the soil.

‘Gather round,’ A deep voice spoke, as the frond began to silence. ‘Hear my tale little ones, for the outside world is tough.’

‘A story!’ Small shrill voices cheered, then ran, and bumped, and fell.

‘Tell us about the thorny fox!’

‘No, Robert Rabbit!’

‘The hornet’s knell!!’

‘Hush now. Hush.’ The rich voice answered, silencing the din. Small faces watched in jaw-dropped awe as the ancient man begun his tale.

‘On a dark and stormy night,
the waxing moon cast eerie light.
Tightly, darkness clung to ground,
As night’s unsightly creatures
stalked the earth without a sound.

Unawares I wandered in the shadow of the trees,
raising up the mushrooms, and planting newborn seeds.
In my tread the forest bloomed,
a fragrant bliss in nights momentary absence
until once more, the bitter darkness loomed.

One other creature walked the forest then,
Having left behind his dark, dank den.
A glimpse I caught, an air so stark.
Its eyes stared back at me,
as I strained to see the creature in the dark.

And then, as I had so feared,
the creature growled and howled and reared.
So back I turned into the night,
with hasty leaps and side-steps
I danced and disappeared in fright.

And in my steps the forest grew,
plants and vines reared anew.
The ghastly creature sought my trail,
but in a fight with leaves and light
in end I heard his deathly wail.

If you walk the forest in the grasping hands of night,
remember to bring with you the lively aid of light.
When you walk the forest, you must be strong and grown,
bring your friends and joy to guide you,
for rarely do these beasts travel all alone.’

And then a small man left the leaf, as children’s murmurs filled the air. And in his tread he left light in which the forest bloomed and flourished. While he walked he muttered, a story coming true, and from the sodden earth besides him brilliant mushrooms grew.

’A lonesome mushroom reached up to the stars, one-legged and hooded in red. It twirled and unfurled, and around dirt was hurled, till it clung to the ground by a thread…’

akukei
Vice Captain


akukei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:43 pm


Siatara: I really liked your entry! biggrin It was funny and engaging and made good use of the prompts. A fun read indeed. I especially enjoyed the interruption at the beginning from Jilly. whee

Seraf The Tainted: *sigh* How i'd love to go camping in a wood full of mushrooms. Seriously, those two things together would be so inspirational for me! There was some good description in this piece too! I especially liked the way that you described the rain.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:44 pm


akukei
Seraf The Tainted: *sigh* How i'd love to go camping in a wood full of mushrooms. Seriously, those two things together would be so inspirational for me! There was some good description in this piece too! I especially liked the way that you described the rain.


Thank ye kindly. -^^-

Cromwell Initiative


Kamiense

PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:55 pm


Here's my entry. Sorry if it's bad, it was kind of a last minute write.

Amongst the scattered leaves, I sat down, placing my spear to rest against an aged oak tree. I cocked my head from side to side, and tried to relax. The sky was in a subtle twilight as the shadows below me disappeared, and my friend grasped his knees to try and save himself from an invisible fear.

The air was warm, carrying a brisk scent with it but that was expected on an August evening. I leaned back against the oak and peered over to my friend. “What’s ailin’ you?”

“Don’t you feel… y’ know, in some type of danger?”

I quickly let out a short laugh. “You’ve gotta be crazy to be that paranoid, just because we’re in some woods in the hour of twilight. You know those legends aren’t true.”

That comment wasn’t well received, and he proceeded to look around. Some mosquitoes started to buzz around his head, and he swatted away the infernal buzzing. I laughed, “Hey look, it’s the creatures of twilight! Ooooo, so scary.” He grunted and stood up, grasping his spear.

“Look, you know we have to report back that nothing’s here. Why don’t we just stop talking about this and move.”

“We’re not supposed to be back for two days yet. Relax.”

“But-“

“I’m tired of you being so scared of something that doesn’t exist! You have a weapon, don’t you? Use it!”

He lowered his head and dropped the spear, crunching some of the leaves and knocking one out of flight. “Man, you don’t know what these things can do. I know someone, who knows someone who knows someone’s father was killed by one of those monsters!”

I rolled my eyes and stood up. “You ‘know someone who knows someone, who knows someone?’ How do you know this person is telling the truth? You know, he’s probably just having fun with you.”

“No they aren’t! If they did, than why wo-“

A loud thud bellowed in the distance, and we both scrambled our way to our feet, and grasped our spears. I looked over at my friend, who’s knees where starting to buckle. I tried to stay poise and confident, but only to reassure my friend that he has some veil of protection.

The creature peered its head out of the thicket, covered in whitish green glowing marks. I took a step forward and stopped, I didn’t want to risk any injury. Its eyes stared back at me, as I strained to see the creature in the dark

I darted.

The creature leapt to the left as I stabbed with my spear. I felt something strike me across the face, knocking me to the ground. It snorted, and rushed behind me. I sat up, shaking my head, and peered over to my friend. My pupils shrank as I saw him become dismembered by the demon. I hurried up to my feet and grasped onto my spear. It was just me and the beast of twilight. I shook, but positioned my spear. We darted at each other, got within striking range and-

***


I heard a slow clap, as my English teacher stared at me.

“Very nice Mr. Schmidt. Now as I was saying before we were trying to listen to a story by Ms. Trea over there. So, tell me about the mushroom.”
PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 12:10 am


Kamiense: Was that Zelda inspired by any chance? It reminded me alot of Twilight Princess. heart Nice work!

akukei
Vice Captain


Kamiense

PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 8:20 am


akukei
Kamiense: Was that Zelda inspired by any chance? It reminded me alot of Twilight Princess. heart Nice work!

Yeah, it was. I play that game a lot, doing three heart challenges and such.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 3:17 pm


akukei
Siatara: I really liked your entry! biggrin It was funny and engaging and made good use of the prompts. A fun read indeed. I especially enjoyed the interruption at the beginning from Jilly. whee


Thanks! It's alot shorter than I usually write; I'm trying to improve on the little snapshots of fiction.

siatara


akukei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 9:17 pm


Everyone judging will finish tomorrow, so don't forget to vote in the poll!
PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 5:31 pm


xd Have we decided what we are going to do with a tie?

Tsuta
Captain


akukei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 9:06 pm


>.> We better decide soon!
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