Come read my poems and critique them heart
I'll do the same for yours 3nodding
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BROMUS SECALINUS
I made myself a soft stream-bank bed
Of cress and chess and bulrushes
Between an ancient willow-tree
And where the blushing salmon blushes
Between my knees and under my bones
I put down roots and dreamt and wept
I spoke in Polish and you spoke in French
And we cried with frustration and curled up and slept
But all implications I studiously
Forgot and filled up with shyness
Instead I read and thought like Socrates
And drowned myself in bromus secalinus
When the sunrise spoke at last
It spoke in ancient fairy tongue
And washed me free of vestiges
Of my cerebral iron lung
I shed tears, awaiting the stream
To rise and washed my nest away
I swam in bitter water until
I could feel forever and a day
I dared not think of my stream-bank bed
My mind and heart now both were filled
Between my knees and under my bones
And where the blushing salmon’s killed.
I made myself a soft stream-bank bed
Of cress and chess and bulrushes
Between an ancient willow-tree
And where the blushing salmon blushes
Between my knees and under my bones
I put down roots and dreamt and wept
I spoke in Polish and you spoke in French
And we cried with frustration and curled up and slept
But all implications I studiously
Forgot and filled up with shyness
Instead I read and thought like Socrates
And drowned myself in bromus secalinus
When the sunrise spoke at last
It spoke in ancient fairy tongue
And washed me free of vestiges
Of my cerebral iron lung
I shed tears, awaiting the stream
To rise and washed my nest away
I swam in bitter water until
I could feel forever and a day
I dared not think of my stream-bank bed
My mind and heart now both were filled
Between my knees and under my bones
And where the blushing salmon’s killed.
