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 Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 7:40 pm
¬¬' I feel wierd asking this, but would any of you care to critique my rough draft in the prose forum?
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 7:44 pm
I swear that I'll get to it shortly smile I'm working on Tsuta's atm, and then I've got some poetry to look over...so probably either tomorrow night or Wednesday...*sighs* I hate not having time to do things....full time work stinks when you don't get breaks too sneak online...rofl smile I love fantasy, so I'll definitely be reading it biggrin
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 8:56 pm
Sorry i haven't really critiqued much yet! I've been so busy with school and setting up forums and things for the guild i haven't had time. I'll try to take a look at it soon smile
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:15 pm
Well I dropped a comment on it.. not sure how helpful it is though. ^^;
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 5:20 pm
Any and all comments are a help. We miss things or are unseeing when it comes to our own work, and where it may make sense to us since it is all within our head it may be lacking something when in prose so it is always advisable to get help. I take what I am given and see what I can do about it. I thank you all for your help.
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