Okay! Say hello to my first crappy attempt at poetry! This piece has been composed because I needed somethink dark (as in "I'm so dark I crap bats. BLACK bats." dark) and I am not exactly sure how well I hit my mark or how well it has been constructed. Critiques are gretly appreciated!
Oh Darkest Darkness of Night
Through which no mortal sight may pass
To the I call, to the I pray
So that the Darkness of thine darkness might be mine one day
I sit in torment within my cell
Each passing moment its own little Hell
With each passing day and each passing night
I loose my mind and loose my might
So I call to you this dreary eve
That you may help me take my leave
Grant me the power to strike them down
And grind their kind into the ground
With each breath I draw your shadow in
And with each heartbeat accept my sin
To wish for power is not right
But I hunger for revenge this night
