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PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 9:46 pm


Ken could not believe his ears! His best friend, Ryu Adachi-Ku on his wedding day with Ken had decided to marry a woman named Heneroshi Shikoku instead.

For those who have begun reading this book and did not read Cindy and Jon or He loves you Ryu Adachi-Ku, this is my third book of an eight book series.

Ken is better known as Kenneth Alexander Wave. He is a gay man that bonded with Ryu Adachi-Ku when he was only 17. He is 26 now going on 27.

He, Ken, has blond hair, almond colored eyes, has a slender build, taller than average height, and is American in descent. He loves to heal people with a goal of becoming a doctor. However, since this upsetting tragedy, it could spell disaster for Ken's goals.

Ryu Adachi-Ku is a man that is Japanese in descent, has jet black hair, oriental style eyes in the color of chocolate brown, has a large chest build, and has an average height. He was 18 when he was with Ken when Ken was 17, Ryu is 28 now.

Heneroshi Shikoku, the lady that Ryu has married now, is also Japanese in descent. Err..she's Japanese-looking. She is actually from another planet and another galaxy.

Her hair is jet-black like Ryu's hair, but it is much, much longer. Her eyes are a heron wing blue as well as oriental shaped. Her build is slender, much like Ken's is and she is taller than average in height.

What gives it away that Heneroshi is from another planet and galaxy is that she has these weird powers. Powers that might be not of good nature. This is what worries Ken the most about the relationship Ryu now has with this alien.

So, getting back to the story at hand, Ken could not believe his ears as the wedding had made a drastic turn around. And, ironically enough, Ryu's half-brother Prince Vegeta Osaka wanted to marry Ken!

Okay, okay, Ryu comes from a big family. Actually, he's an orphaned warrior. Ryu does not actually know for sure where he came from, he thinks he is from Japan, but he is sure that his parents are dead. A kind old woman named Mimi took Ryu and a bunch of other orphaned kids when she was traveling the globe a long time ago.

So, out of an agreement, Ken marries Vegeta.

Now at Vegeta's and Ken's new love nest, one winter's night, William-Tyler, who was Vegeta's adopted son of 13 years old, was drawing in his coloring book when he heard this sound.

He went to investigate only to see that his mom (Vegeta) has entered his dad's (Ken) body somehow. It was so freaky, William shut the door in a hurry and raced down the stairs to hide in the corner. Shivering, William says aloud to no one in particular, "What kind of freak is dad?"

In this case, the word "freak" is not an insult. It means that Ken is really mega different and not from where he said he was from or thinks he is from.

And so, it is found 2 weeks later, that Kenneth Wave is about to give birth to a child of his own.

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Thoughts please!
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 10:48 pm


I feel bad for that child.. walking in while his parents are going at it. That could scare a child for life.

Pretty good but this time you didn't get into much character description with Vageta and William. But still awesome none the less, and I am interested into what happens next.

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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:01 am


Vegeta and William don't need too much of a description right now because in the 4th book it basically describes Vegeta in a bit of an overkill.

William gets more introduction as the story goes on. Oh, and William gets over seeing that.
PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 10:47 am


Sveet...

Ah I see, that works out. Littirature can be quite a pain to deal with sometimes so its hard to see where the writter comes in and how the audience should see it. Grade 12 english is a slave driver I tell you...

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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 3:23 pm


Grade 12 was tough for me, I agree. You really gotta learn how to make good interpretations in that year.
PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 5:06 pm


Well we barely do writting assignments outside of essays which are crap anyways...

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PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 8:17 am


You would not believe how important essays are in life. Essays are one thing that is necessary if you want to be a writer. How else are you going to keep the reader informed and to know exactly what you are talking about. Essays are all about opinions usually. But, I mean, don't you want a say in stuff that might really count?
PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 12:58 pm


But because we've only done essays they've thrown a report into the mix for our summative. Summatives are usually comprised of things you've learend in the year. Reports are supossed to be more facts then opinion, not opinion then facts. I think reports are more important then essay's along with how to write a proper business letter.

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PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 10:10 am


It really makes me wish you were in around my age because you could have learned that on an earlier Microsoft word. There was a template where you could write a business letter and learn how. Or...was that Microsoft Bob? Anyway, I learned how to write a business letter through that program.

First of all, you gotta write your company name.
Then you write who of your company is sending it.

Example:

The Honshura Academy
C/o Empress dee
# 208 A 11903 162 Ave
Edmonton, Alberta T5X 3R1
Canada

That is what you type first except, not my name, address, and company, but your name, address and company.

After you do that then you gotta type who you are typing it to.

Say that I was writing it to William-tyler. This is how it'd look thus far

The Honshura Academy
C/o Empress dee
# 208 A 11903 162 Ave
Edmonton, Alberta T5X 3R1
Canada

Mr. William-Tyler
c/o The Romantic Piano
Block 2
South Town City, Planet Hamster
Renaissance Galaxy

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In any written address always include first:

Your name:
Where you are writing from as in home address
the city, province/state postal/zipcode
Country

Businesses only add what their company name is above their name so you would add

Company name:
in care of your name:
where you are writing from as in a home address
the city, province/state postal code/zip code
Country


After doing that you would write who you are writing to, in the same fashion as in the "any letter" except write their name and such. In a business letter type in Mr. for a man, Mrs. for a married woman, Ms. for a separated woman, or miss for some girl never married.

Then put Dear (Mr., Mrs., Ms., Miss) _______,

Does that sound simple enough?
PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 12:54 pm


Oh I know how to write them it was the first thing we did in english xD

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PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 7:45 pm


Oh good. So, what is it that you are behind in then? Out of curiosity.
PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 9:05 pm


Nothing really, I cought up in science cause the stupid teacher was just giving out projects like candy on halloween.

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PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 11:42 am


Do you mean you were sick in science? Or do you mean you caught up as in made progress in science?
PostPosted: Thu May 24, 2007 7:13 pm


No he gave out to much work for my brain to handle so I handed in some things late. Well done, and proper, but late. I still get marks for them though.

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PostPosted: Sat May 26, 2007 7:37 am


Okay you meant "caught" up. It was a spelling error you made. Are you using spell check very often?

I mean no offense, but that was an easy word to mess up.
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