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Sprockette

PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 8:14 am


Smiles all around,nothing could ever feel painful to me.
Bright my world is,laughter ringing clearly in the distance.
Sun is shining radiantly,wrapping around me like a warm blanket.
Happiness hugging me tightly.
Skipping,
Playing,
and smiling...Happy as can be


Tear streaks stain my face,darkness is where I lay my head.
Pain fills me,it seeks and destroys me.
I feel only it's hold on me.
Like evil chains,squeezing my life from me.
Sinking,
Drowning,
Dying....Numb as can be




And I am torn between myself...bit by bit,deterierating myself from reality into hell.
Breaking me in half...sanity coiling into it's darker place.
My mind unraveling.
Fighting myself,wit myself,by myself.
Self-destruct....inevitable

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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 3:54 pm


And I am torn between myself...bit by bit,deterierating myself from reality into hell.
Breaking me in half...sanity coiling into it's darker place.
My mind unraveling.
Fighting myself,wit myself,by myself.
Self-destruct....inevitable


That's my favorite part, I feel that everyday.
And you did what all poems should; you made a connection with the reader.

Well, me at least, lol.

TwilightsFire32

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