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The Voices In My Head a poem by me

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 7:07 am


i just wrote this after school one day. i hope you like it. it was actually supposed to be a song but its a little short. comments and advice would be nice please!

the voices in my head
tell of the tears that i wont shed
'cus of the voices in my heart
i wake with a start
'cus they speak to me
they speak of you.
with you i am
safe and protected
and i cant stand
being with out you
i'll stand by your side
with no rules to abide
'cus i want to spend
my whole life with you
hold me in your arms
keep me safe and warm
i want to spend
my whole life with you
PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 5:16 pm


I loved it!
It is very nice....a great love poem. mrgreen

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