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Ryuu-sakama

PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 12:06 am


i was thinking, the reason that this guild was started was that a bunch of us gathered in an art thread and yet we have no art here yet eek well i decided to take care of that little prob. feel free to post any art you want to showcase here, be that writing, drawings, HTML pics (i have seen some crazy HTML things and now think of it as art lol) photos that you have taken, ANYTHING!!

Edit: i forgot, and im hopping that this does not need to be said what with the nature of how this guild was started and all but no flaming or anything like that and all that jazz. this should be a safe haven for everyone 3nodding

Index: look here to see where who's art is. i figure we can organize it by what it is so if something becomes a regular posting you can keep up with it and go right to it and skip anything you are not interested in. i would recommend that you look through everything at least once and say what you think of it all!

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Drawings:

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Battlefield: Page 1, Post 2

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 12:31 am


ok so ill take the plunge first. this is a bookish thing that i have been writing on and off for a while now called Battlefield and it is also still a work in progress so you may have ot cut me a little slack on this one. if ya like it let me know and ill post more, if not let me know what i can do to improve upon my writing. so without any further waiting (i must be diff blaugh ) i present it to you.

Battlefield
By, Trey

Prelude Part I.

As he put the finishing touches on his uniform, Demecaris looked out the window of his room in his expansive estate. Beyond the glass and metal bars of his room, the sun was coming up over the horizon and casting its light over the land. Walking over to the window to watch the sun rise, Demecaris started to muse over his most recent victory over his hated enemy.

Zephon is finally gone…this time’s Zephon that is. Demecaris thought happily to himself. Now there is no real threat to my plans for domination. Now no one can stop me, not even Oria, or his old dragon; they are nothing without him, without his leadership.

There was a light tapping on the door and Demecaris moved to open it. “Yes, what is it.” He demanded of the puny looking guard that stood on the other side of the door.

“Sir! The generals are assembled as you commanded and now await your presence in the planning room.” The guard stated in a somewhat shaky voice.

“Good, that will be all, you are dismissed.” The guard turned on his heel and quickly walked down the long halls that lead to Demecaris’ room. Demecaris closed the door and walked over to the mirror that leaned on his wall. Looking in the mirror Demecaris admired himself. Though he was only about 5’2” his posture and dark piercing eyes more than made up for his composure.

His face was old and wrinkled, and his many scars stood out clearly on it and even his mustache and hair had an evil way about them being blacker than the darkest night ever seen on Battlefield. As usual he was dressed in black breeches, tunic, and boots and wore and vest that was a combination of blood red on one side and an image of flames so realistic a casual observer might think he was wearing fire instead of clothing.

Finishing the outfit was a cape made to look like the flag of his dark forces, a human head on a pike with the shadow of a black dragon looming over it and a village in the back that was set ablaze. Satisfied, Demecaris left for the meeting to plan the attacks that would end the war once and for all.

Prelude Part II.

Zephon’s eyes jolted open, he sat up quickly, and he almost fell out of the unfamiliar bed, but saved himself with a small table placed next to it. After he recovered he started to look around, afraid that he had been captured. As he looked around the strange room he saw odd devices, the likes of which he had never before seen.

There was a window that had a material in it that was clear and hard (he discovered this when he tried to stick his head out the window) and there were two “flameless torches” in the room. Zephon also noticed that the bed on which he sat was the softest he had ever lain on, and that he was not alone in the bed.

The woman who lay in the bed next to him, had long black hair, a shapely face, and from what he could see under the thick blanket, was sleeping soundly, her chest raising and falling rhythmically. Just as Zephon noticed the woman she began to stir, rolled over and opened her dark green eyes to look at him.

“Good morning darling, did you sleep well?” asked the woman with a voice that was not unlike Oria’s own musical voice.

“Uh, I, we,” at this point Zephon heaved a sigh and decided to try to get a little information about what was going on from this woman, “to be honest, I don’t recognize you at all milady or any of the strange things here in the room. I don’t know where I am or what is going on.”

At this she looked at him, puzzled for a minute, then a sly little smile spread across her thin face. “Is so sir? Might you be Amish then? Well you may not know this but I think there is nothing sexier then a well muscled man who can work with his hands.” And at that she pulled Zephon back into the large bed, under the blankets, and undressed both of them. Zephon, having lived day to day his whole life, never objected to pleasing his human desires when the time came up, especially with Oria, quickly started to get into it. Then a voice exploded in his mind.

Prelude Part III.

Enjoying your self Zephon?” asked a familiar voice in Zephon’s head.

Demecaris! The name registered in Zephon’s mind almost instantly as his old master.

In a time, long gone, the Zephon that was now destined to save humanity was very different; he was an agent of evil. When the war started Zephon’s heart was already almost entirely evil, even before he meet Demecaris one day midway through the Battlefield year of 1899.

After that meeting, Demecaris thought Zephon evil enough to be his apprentice, so he took him under his wing and trained him in magic, close-quarters combat, and riding skills on a wide assortment of animals from Dragons to Omlas. After some time had passed Zephon realized his mistake in allying with Demecaris and left, with out Demecaris’ approval or consent.

I hope you are enjoying yourself because while you fool around there, I am going to tear this world apart, Aha ha ha ha!” and with that his presence was gone from Zephon’s mind, and he realized that he had failed to protect his friends and Battlefield; as he had pledged to do years ago. Surely no one could stand Demecaris’ way now.

Ryuu-sakama


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:19 am


me?
PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 7:45 am


*looks around* yeah.... i'll be in here alot 3nodding xd

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 11:59 am


xO hardly anyone posts in here very few people ah well what can ya do
PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 1:09 pm


Completely _Freaky
xO hardly anyone posts in here very few people ah well what can ya do

sowwy ><. I usually stick to the first page lol. I must spread out I guess. ^ ^

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:36 am


elena_lily
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xO hardly anyone posts in here very few people ah well what can ya do

sowwy ><. I usually stick to the first page lol. I must spread out I guess. ^ ^

lol oh smile yeah I never used to see the subforums and only posted on front pages.

maybe there should be a better way for guild subforums
*thinks* like windows live hotmail
links to mail ..<>...reading pannel
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 11:17 pm


Completely _Freaky
xO hardly anyone posts in here very few people ah well what can ya do
you can hope!! blaugh

Ryuu-sakama


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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:59 pm


to start I am not the best writer.
however some basic rules I learned where as follows.
try and not use the same word alot in a sentence especially "and", "the", "or"
if its trying to explane more then one thing put "," in between.
the start of each new sentence is on its own line.

paragraphs are 4 or 5 sentences.
and "," are pauses.
a sentence can have one break, but its basically anything you can say in one breath.

other then that I am not sure like I said, I suck at writing I taught myself. Dx

anything I may be missing please fill me in, cause I am still trying to learn more.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 6:14 am


Completely _Freaky
to start I am not the best writer.
however some basic rules I learned where as follows.
try and not use the same word alot in a sentence especially "and", "the", "or"
if its trying to explane more then one thing put "," in between.
the start of each new sentence is on its own line.

paragraphs are 4 or 5 sentences.
and "," are pauses.
a sentence can have one break, but its basically anything you can say in one breath.

other then that I am not sure like I said, I suck at writing I taught myself. Dx

anything I may be missing please fill me in, cause I am still trying to learn more.
commas are actually used as either a break or to split off a thought. e.g. "Ace a third shift associate will be on the radio" needs two commas. if you have one comma, "Ace, a third shift associate will be on the radio" or "Ace a third shift associate, will be on the radio" it is going to say something completely different from the sentence with two commas. "Ace, a third shift associate, will be on the radio" they split off the part in the middle since that is an extra part that is not really needed. a rule of thumb for if that would be needed is if you cut it out and read it, it would make sense still.
as far as the paragraphs go....i just realized that the breaks did not come over from word when i copied and pasted.... stressed my bad, imma fix that right away.

Ryuu-sakama


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 1:27 pm


Dark DragonCom
Completely _Freaky
to start I am not the best writer.
however some basic rules I learned where as follows.
try and not use the same word alot in a sentence especially "and", "the", "or"
if its trying to explane more then one thing put "," in between.
the start of each new sentence is on its own line.

paragraphs are 4 or 5 sentences.
and "," are pauses.
a sentence can have one break, but its basically anything you can say in one breath.

other then that I am not sure like I said, I suck at writing I taught myself. Dx

anything I may be missing please fill me in, cause I am still trying to learn more.
commas are actually used as either a break or to split off a thought. e.g. "Ace a third shift associate will be on the radio" needs two commas. if you have one comma, "Ace, a third shift associate will be on the radio" or "Ace a third shift associate, will be on the radio" it is going to say something completely different from the sentence with two commas. "Ace, a third shift associate, will be on the radio" they split off the part in the middle since that is an extra part that is not really needed. a rule of thumb for if that would be needed is if you cut it out and read it, it would make sense still.
as far as the paragraphs go....i just realized that the breaks did not come over from word when i copied and pasted.... stressed my bad, imma fix that right away.

never heard the term Ace like that, so what you mean is that commas are to tell a person about the same thing before and after the comma?.
then the next sentence can be completely different kind of thing?

ahh mucho betteroso xD
PostPosted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 6:02 am


Completely _Freaky
Dark DragonCom
Completely _Freaky
to start I am not the best writer.
however some basic rules I learned where as follows.
try and not use the same word alot in a sentence especially "and", "the", "or"
if its trying to explane more then one thing put "," in between.
the start of each new sentence is on its own line.

paragraphs are 4 or 5 sentences.
and "," are pauses.
a sentence can have one break, but its basically anything you can say in one breath.

other then that I am not sure like I said, I suck at writing I taught myself. Dx

anything I may be missing please fill me in, cause I am still trying to learn more.
commas are actually used as either a break or to split off a thought. e.g. "Ace a third shift associate will be on the radio" needs two commas. if you have one comma, "Ace, a third shift associate will be on the radio" or "Ace a third shift associate, will be on the radio" it is going to say something completely different from the sentence with two commas. "Ace, a third shift associate, will be on the radio" they split off the part in the middle since that is an extra part that is not really needed. a rule of thumb for if that would be needed is if you cut it out and read it, it would make sense still.
as far as the paragraphs go....i just realized that the breaks did not come over from word when i copied and pasted.... stressed my bad, imma fix that right away.

never heard the term Ace like that, so what you mean is that commas are to tell a person about the same thing before and after the comma?.
then the next sentence can be completely different kind of thing?

ahh mucho betteroso xD
not always, sometimes it is a pause or split in the train of thought. like the one i used up there xd however, unless it is in dialog you should avoid putting more then one in a sentence when you don't want to split something off from the rest. and just to make sure things are clear, Ace was being used as a name...i know a rapper guy called Ace lol. English is not the language to teach yourself since it is considered one of the HARDEST to learn

Ryuu-sakama


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 1:51 am


>.< promises promises no one that said they would be here alot ever was here that much at all xO

lol
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