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Hakkyou Neko

PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 5:20 pm


Summary: Claire had loved her stay in Mineral Town, especially since she was married and had a cheerful young daughter. However, her once closest friend, Ann, had seemed distant since she married Cliff. She was becoming a little worried. One day, Claire gets a letter from the city. It was from her older brother, Jack. He was going to pop in for a surprise visit.

Author's Note: This idea has been floating around in my mind for a while, as most ideas do, and I decided to just write it and see what happens. Also, I'll try not to bore you. Edit: I hope I can get as much done. It's midterm season at my school and it's hard to get on the computer at all nowadays. cry

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:06 pm


Chapter One ~ The Letter


"So, how's business coming along?" Claire asked her friend, Ann.

"Kinda slow," Ann replied.

Awkward silence.

"So, did you improve that cake recipe?" Ann asked.

"Nah. But I can tell I'm close," Claire replied.

Awkward silence.

"Well, I'd better head back home. It's almost dinner time, and well, you know how Cliff gets when he's hungry," Claire joked. Ann stiffened at Cliff's name, and she wished she hadn't brought that subject up. "Well, see ya."

"Bye."

The blonde farmer girl, deep in throught, walked down the streets of Mineral Town, thinking of what to cook for dinner, what to write in her story that Mary was helping her with, and how to fix her relationship with Ann. She was getting lonely without her adventures with her carrot-topped buddy, but she loved Cliff nonetheless, and didn't regret marrying him.

"Claire! I've been looking everywhere for you!"

Claire turned at the mention of her name, instantly landing back on Earth from her thoughts. She noticed Karen running towards her, and wondered what she wanted to talk to her about. It wasn't like they didn't like each other, it's just they didn't have that much in common.

"Hey, I took that advice you gave me," she said.

Huh? Claire thought, half of her still lost in her thoughts.

"So, I want you to be the first to sample it," Karen finished, handing Claire a slice of chocolate cake.

Oh, no, she thought, remembering the advice she gave Karen a week ago. She could only imagine what this cake could do to her, but she took it anyway.

"Tell me what you think tomorrow. I gotta help dad with the store. Make sure he doesn't sell on credit y'know. See ya!" Karen said, turning to leave.

Claire, with her no-doubt poison-on-a-plate, turned back towards her farm. Now her thoughts were consumed on whether or not to take her chances on trying the cake or to bury it in the moutains and tell Karen she enjoyed it. Then again, if the cake was bad, which it probably was, Karen would think she got the right recipe finally, then probably try it at the Cooking Festival or something. No, it was better to take her chances with the cake then to lie and loose the trust of Karen.

Koro, Claire's dog, raced up to greet her as she entered her farm. She held the cake away from his reach and gave him a pat on the head before going into her house and setting the cake on the table and covering it so her daughter Louina, Lou for short, wouldn't try to eat it or worse. She could see her daughter still taking her nap, just as she left her, and slipping into the shower to wash away the grime of the farm since it was seven. Cliff wasn't home yet because Claire had sent him off to ask Saibara to make a Maker.

Claire sighed as the warm water hit her and she reached for her razor. It had been about three or for days since she shaved, and luckily it was cold enough to wear long pants, it being Fall already. Now that she finally had time, she could get rid of that unwanted hair. She reached for her shaving gel and went back to her thoughts.

I wonder how Jack's doing? she thought. Jack was her brother from the city. Maybe he's a CEO now, or maybe he's still working minimum wage...

"Ouch!" she gasped as the razor caught behind her knee. The cut reddened, and she could see it was pretty deep, as far as shaving cuts go. "Stupid, pay attention."

Claire splashed some water on it to try to keep the blood from running down her leg. The sight of it made her a little queasy. She finished as quickly as possible and stepped out of the shower to dry off, being careful not to thouch the towel onto the blood.

I'll probably have to put a bandage on it since it won't seem to stop bleeding, she thought, grabbing her pajamas.

As Claire walked out of the shower, she noticed Cliff had gotten home. She also noticed that he had settled himself down at the table, removed the cover from the slice of cake Karen had given her, and was eating it. He took a swallow and noticed Claire stepping out.

"CLIFF! NOOO!!" she shouted. "DON'T EAT THAT!!"

"Why not?" he asked, mouth full of cake. "It's delicious."

"KAREN -- Wait, what? You like it?" Claire asked skeptically, walking towards him.

"Yeah, it's really good."

"Let me try," Claire said, taking the fork from a confused husband and ate a bit, carefully tasting it. "Wow, it actually is good."

"Didn't you make it?" Cliff asked. Claire shook her head.

"Karen made it," she replied, humorously watching her husband's face pale. "I gave her some advice, and she did a good job at baking this cake."

"Wow, who woulda known?" Cliff joked, recieving a playful punch from his wife. "Oh, by the way, you've got some mail."

"It's probably one of those 'You've Won The Drawing' ones," Claire said, annoyed as she picked up the envelope and read the letter inside.

Dear Claire,

How's it going? I bet you sure miss your big bro, huh? Probably not. Or maybe you are, sitting on that farm of yours, thinking, "Why, oh, why isn't Jack here?" Or maybe you're some kind of successful farmer that everyone likes. Maybe you're even married and have a kid! Ha! Not likely huh? Well, I guess I'll find out soon enough, since I'm coming to visit. See you in exactly one week, sis!

Your Wonderful Brother,

Jack


Claire looked at the date quickly, hoping what she thought wasn't true. Unfortunatley, it was. The letter's date was exactly six days before. Her brother would arrive at her farm tomorrow. Her brother, Jack.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"

~*~*~*~*~

Sorry it's kinda short. I'm not one for long chapters. Anyway, this is more of a basic introduction and to see how my story works so far. And yes, Jack is Claire's brother in this story. And yes, her "official" name is Claire. Jill has brown hair and pigtails, and Sara is the one from GBC with the short hair.

Hakkyou Neko


Hakkyou Neko

PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 7:28 pm


Chapter Two ~ The Unwanted Visitor


As Jack stepped off the ferry, he noticed that his sister wasn't there to greet him. Of cource, he expected that. He looked around the dock, but only saw a guy with a brown pony tail walking towards him. Maybe he knew Claire. Jack grabbed his bag and walked towards him.

"Scuze me, but do you happen to know a girl named Claire? Blonde-hair, about yay high," he asked, showing how high "yay high" was with his hand.

"You must be Jack then," the guy said, extending his hand. "I'm Cliff, and yeah, I know Claire. She was too busy with her farmto come and greet you, but today was my day off, so I came in her place.

Jack shook Cliff's hand and wondered why he came in Claire's place, but followed him nonetheless.

"So...er...where will I be staying?" he asked. "I got enough money for a hotel or something if there's one around."

"Don't worry, we've aranged a place for you to stay," Cliff responded.

What does he mean "we"? Jack thought, but said nothing.

After walking in a bit of a silence for a while, Jack began to wonder what his sister looked like now. She was probably the same; he himself hadn't changed much. He wondered who this guy, Cliff, was exactly. Maybe her boyfriend or something. Well, at least he had something to tease her about while he was here. Pretty soon, he could hear Claire's all-too-familiar voice.

"LOU!!"

That didn't sound good. Cliff took off at a run and Jack wasn't far behind. Although he constantly teased his sister, he still loved her and could sometimes be a little overprotective. The tone of her voice didn't make him feel at home either.

The two men quickly found themselves on the farm, with a limping Claire carrying a crying Lou. Claire smiled at Cliff, but then glared at Jack. She obviously hadn't forgotten him in the time they were apart.

"Are you okay?" Cliff automatically asked, rushing over to the two.

"Yeah, I'm fine. Lou was playing around the cows while I was tilling the soil for some more grass seeds, and I didn't notice. When I looked over, one of the cows had butted the other, and the two started charging around the pasture. I quickly grabbed Lou, and she's fine, just a little shaken up," Claire explained. "The only damage done was when a cow stepped on my foot as I grabbed her. I hope they didn't break any fences. The last thing I want is spending more time out in the fields just to mend the dang fence."

"Mommy, I wanna go inside now," Lou wimpered, buring her face into her mother's arms.

"Okay, sweetie," Claire cooed. "I'll take you in."

She motioned for Jack and Cliff to follow her in. Cliff helped her get the weight off of her sore foot. As the four made it into the house. Claire sat down in a chair after setting Lou down to play with Koro, who was inside now.

"Nice to see you again, Jackson," she said calmly to her brother while trying to pull her boot off her foot.

"You can just call me Jack, y'know, Clairice," Jack retorted.

"Who dat, Mommy?" Lou asked, pointing to Jack.

"That's your Uncle Jack, sweetie," Claire replied sweetly. "He's gonna be staying here a while."

"Yay! Hi, Uncle Jack, my name is Lou. I'm two years old. This is Koro," Lou explained excitedly, completely forgetting about her close encounter, and pointed at the dog. "Mommy said you coming, and I said you can have my bed. It's over dere. I sleep wid Mommy and Daddy while you here."

"Oh, well thank you for giving up you bed for me," Jack said, bending down to ruffle her hair. Lou giggled and ran back off to play with Koro.

Claire had already pulled off her boot and sock to expose the foot beneith. It was turning a bluish-purplish color, and was starting to swell. She sighed, knowing it'd be hard to work with this foot if she could at all.

"Maybe you should get that looked at, Honey," Cliff said, looking at the foot.

"Oh, I'll be fine," Claire assured.

"I really think you should let the doctor see it though," he suggested.

"Well, I guess it wouldn't hurt," Claire sighed. She really didn't think it was necessary. "Anyway, it's about lunch time, so let's get caught up while we eat, shall we, Jack?"


With Cliff's help, Claire had whipped up a large lunch for the three of them to eat. Lou had been invited to Jake's house to play. Jake was the son of Karen and Rick and was about the same age as Lou. Claire and Cliff thought it was a good idea for her to play on the Poultry Farmwhile the three adults chatted.

"So, Jack, how've you been doing?" Claire asked, her left foot elevated and in a cast. It just so happened to turn out to be broken, so of course she had to stay off it for a while. Even though Fall was the time of year Duke needed Cliff the most, he agreed to let Cliff take a break until Claire could get back to work while he helped her with her chores.

"Well, I've made CEO," Jack said simply. "And how about you?"

"Pretty good. I have a successfull farm and a nice, loving family," Claire replied. "Are you with anyone?"

"Nah, not yet. I haven't really met any good girls. So, Cliff, what do you do for a living?" Jack asked.

"Well, I help Duke at the winery," he replied. "Actually, Claire was the one who got me that job."

"Really? How interesting. Does your family live here too?" Jack asked.

Claire, with her good foot, kicked him under the table.

"OW! Why the heck did you kick me!?" Jack yelped loudly.

Idiot, Claire thought. Her brother was so stupid.

"No, they don't live here," Cliff replied, a little sadly.

"Then where--OW! Would you knock that off!?" Jack yelled at Claire, who had kicked him again. She accompanied this by a look.

"Well, my mother died and I have no idea where my sister is," Cliff replied again.

"Oh," Jack said. Claire shot him a look. "So, you two have a daughter, huh?"

"Yup. In case you haven't already figured it out, we named her after our great-grandma," Claire replied.

"I've noticed," Jack replied simply. "So how long have you guys been married."

"Three years," Cliff answered.

Jack nodded and continued eating. There was a bit of an awkward silence and Claire hoped her brother wouldn't say anything stupid. Why did he have to come? Couldn't he at least given her time to prepare?

"So, Jack," Claire broke the silence, "why don't you have a girlfriend yet?"

"Well, like I said, I haven't seen a girl to my liking," Jack replied. "I kinda like my girls spunky, kind, and it would be great if they could cook."

Claire almost sprayed the Fruit Latte she was drinking. That description fitted Ann to a T! Maybe there was some use for her brother after all. It was time for her to play matchmaker, and she had a plan....

~*~*~*~*~

I decided to go ahead and post Chapter Two. Um, there's nothing else to say, really.... except Happy Christmahanakwanah! (I hope that's right. If not, then let's just pretend it's something I made up. sweatdrop )
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