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 Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 11:10 am
Hello everyone. I decided to write a poem for my webmommie's poemetry corner on the Shooting Stars Collection, because I don't recall it being updated in a while, and I took screenshots for it. I decided to share it and the screenshots with you, because you're a guild of fans of GW, people who actually care about the series, or used to, or pretend to.
I know I'm not that great of a poem writer, so please don't bash my poetry abilities or disabilities or be rude or mean or insulting, but if you want to provide helpful critique in a friendly manner, you may.
Please no Relena or 1xR bashing either if you're not fans of Relena and Heero together or just plain don't like Relena.
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 11:12 am
"I'll kill you."   “I’ll kill you.” “Omae o korosu.” It’s all a lie, I can’t pull the trigger. “I love you.” “Ai shiteru.” Is it true? I don’t figure… “I’m sorry…” “Gomen nasai…” I’m so confused right now. Shouldn’t I kill her?
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 2:16 pm
I think it's very good! Shows the tension between them nicely... the illustrations feed along the same lines. Good work!
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:11 pm
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