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Diablo _The Dark Alliance

PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:59 am


here is my deviantart gallery

http://moonaltar.deviantart.com/gallery/


criticism and tips are appreciated
PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 11:57 am


i think you have a lot of potential in your work. your style is consistent biggrin which is definitely a good thing and i've found that once you get a consistency in your drawing style refining it becomes a lot easier. i'd suggest looking into some anatomy tutorials. i think they'll make drawing a lot easier for you. it's like an equation to make our art more consistent every time. Here are some decent tutorials:
http://Zardra.deviantart.com/art/Anatomydrawing-quicky-tutorial-67557105
http://Cedarseed.deviantart.com/art/Big-Guide-to-Drawing-the-Body-15014442

Both of those should teach you a little bit about proportions. Just knowing the correct proportions make it easier to draw.

I'd also look into experimenting with different line widths. it'll make your linework a bit more dramatic. right now your lines are pretty much the same width so it looks a little flat.

Also check out this tutorials on clothing folds:
http://kitten-chan.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-Clothes-and-Folds-40875508

i hope that helps smile

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Diablo _The Dark Alliance

PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:50 am


okay i'll check those out.
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