im having a bit of a problem with the ryhming of the first part of it (bad spelling im aware)
but basically it throws it off
i want new words, to make it original
so if you have anything to help it please share
The thought of you today
Would never really stop
And even though If I ever tried
My heart would surely die
Yet today is another day
But without you so near
Even to just see you once
Would make every moment so dear
Now the thought of you wrapped in my arms
Shouldn’t be just a dream
To have my heart nearly bursting
This should all be more then it seems
But could you grant such a wish?
So that we may ride upon a fantasy
That would only give pure bliss
To be on that time of ectasy
but basically it throws it off
i want new words, to make it original
so if you have anything to help it please share
The thought of you today
Would never really stop
And even though If I ever tried
My heart would surely die
Yet today is another day
But without you so near
Even to just see you once
Would make every moment so dear
Now the thought of you wrapped in my arms
Shouldn’t be just a dream
To have my heart nearly bursting
This should all be more then it seems
But could you grant such a wish?
So that we may ride upon a fantasy
That would only give pure bliss
To be on that time of ectasy
