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 Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 8:58 pm
As the feathers fell around my ankles I cringe from their color.
My once white wings,so pure, changing colors so dratsically, makeing my stomach lurch.
Was the clarity nothing more then an empty promis? I thoguth i would be the right thing to do. Any heartfelt sister would try to do anything possible to save her twin brother.
The pain surging through my back was so intense that tears stung at my eyes. Looking up from a veil of glisten, I saw the figure that had done this to me. The say grey eyes my own face held. The familiar blakc hair that fell into his face. The hands i grew up holding, now grasping my shoulder and tearing at my wings.
To save a soul by tarnishing your own will always burn at your mind though I suppose is they're that important to you, you should try anything to save them.
As I look at him I see he has tears falling down his own cheeks.
"Broher," I whisper and look at hims. I regret dieing now. I wasn't aware he would fall so fast. The scars on his wrists are sill burning deep. The rope burns are still apparant around his neck. Is this true love? Wanting to be with me so bad that it would come to this. I'm not sure how to react as he wraps his arms around my shoulders and hugs me from behind. I can feel as his breaths become unstaedy and his sobs grow louder.
Draping my hands on his I smile and know that to save my brother eternal damnation seemed my fate.
"I don't get to become and angel." He sobbed into my shoulders "Something's wrong with me." The feeling of stricken regret start digging at my heart again. My eyes kept falling on the wrists that wrapped around me. Is love a good thing then? Love can make a person go mad and that can't be a good thing, can it?
"No there isn't." I tried my best to soothe him. "Don't worry," I patted his hands lightly and whispered, "we're together now."
"But your and angel," He started to sob harder then kissed my wings softly over and over again. "Your wings...your beautiful wings." He kissed my wings one last time then buried his head deeper into my shoulder. "I'm so sory." he stated.
"Not anymore. I felt as my voice cracked. The pride i had felt only moments ago slipping so drastically away. I truned and hugged him hard. "I'm not an angel Angel." I smiled and wondered if I was wrong. To give up my afterlife to stay connected with my twin brother is a big decision.
Shaking my head violently I laughed and knew, "no one who once served under God can be an entirely bad person."
At first i didn't realize I was talking out loud. Thought it didn't matter, I knew he understood my point. Families are meant to stick together. Especially to catch you when you fall......Even if it's from Heaven.
ok so don even ask me why i wrote this it just happened one day in class lol but ya drop a comment and tell me how much it sucked mmmmmk.. lotsa love
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 9:23 am
Wow... Seriously, that was great, you have talent for that, it was very good.
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:05 pm
awwwww thanks *random glomps*
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 5:10 pm
Misunderstood Lovers
In spite of it all I loved you dearly as a friend. My bow quivers with excitement and my arrow has long been neglected. The burning sensation that lingers deep within my body and breaths become deep and hollow. The want to cry out to you. The need to tell you to run away, as my fingers bleed from the pressure of the string. I want you to know this is the only way we can stay connected and away from the pressure of the world we know. Please, my dear friend understand when my arrow pierces your heart the immense power flowing through it is pure. My tears that sting the side of my eyelids are unwanted. The thoughts of us once laughing together are unneeded. The love flowing through my hand is unnecessary, because I’m already aware of what I need to do. I don’t want you to be disgraced by being murdered, My companion, my cherished loved one, why are my thoughts whirling so fiercely through my mind?
Squeezing my eyes shut one lat time I pull the string to the bows peak. Seeing you turn to look at me makes my body shutter riveting in pulsations. Your eyes burn so deeply into my soul, I know you are aware of my motives. Letting the string go feels so right and I can see as you accept it as your fate. Opening your arms as though your ready to embrace the cold death that is awaiting to silence your every thought.
As it hit you I fell to the ground weeping. Ignoring the pain I felt from the rocks making my knees bleed I lay sprawled on the ground twitching at the sight of the blood around your body and the arrow, so sinister, as it protrudes from your back. It has also pierced my own heart. My long brown hait hitting the ground and my breast pressed deep in the dirt. Covering my eyes with my fingers I feel the warm sensation of blood dirtying my face. The blood of a Killer. The blood of a Traitor. The blood of a Lover. Crawling over to your bosy and kneeling down I lay your head in my lap. I can’t help but smile. A smile that is filled with compassion. A smile that knows the dagger that glistens in my hands will soon be dragged across my neck and we can laugh as we used to.
As friends, as Rivals, and as Misunderstood Lovers.
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Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:55 am
Oh, wow. I like both of your stories. You do have a knack for it.
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Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 4:21 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 5:02 pm
Those are both really really good.
i love them!
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:45 pm
*huggles* YAY! I do love compliments lol now all I need to do is one day figure out a way tro publish a book that is a cros between "Running with Scissors" meets "Hawthorne Heights" lol. . . . . . . one day! gonk xp
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 5:11 pm
i liked both orf them, but...
the 2nd one is confusing. please add more info.
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