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 Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:18 am
ive become a free lance writer in my spare time
here, a link to read my article.
http://www.authspot.com/Journals/My-Chinese-Mother-in-Law.161803.
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 10:55 am
It's linking me to a blank page and I don't know how to fix it! gonk I wanna read it! You have an awesome sense of humor. twisted
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 12:20 pm
what?? crap..uh..i dunno.. let me work on it.
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 12:23 pm
try this one.
http://www.authspot.com/Journals/My-Chinese-Mother-in-Law.161803
i hope it works this time. im going to keep writing articles and stories.
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:59 pm
You need a bit of editing. You forgot to capitalize your I and the term Mother In Law is traditionally hyphenated to avoid reader confusion. Mother-In-Law and Father-In-Law are less likely to cause that moment of reader uncertainty.
This reads more like an editorial than an article of news or social commentary. If you intend to write freelance it will be best to stick with subjects that aren't quite so personal. When you publish online anyone can find and read your articles (this includes family-in-law).
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