I, for all intents and purposes, will be acting like a real reviewer when posting. Be forewarned.
--To Look Into the Eyes of a Beast Unknown, a first stab at science-fiction writing for the Gaian named [_Jaws_], is merely the beginning in what would seem to be a rather long book, were she to finish. And yet, even for its length, I find it good, and extremely intriguing. Not exactly for the idea, though it is fantastic in its own right, but for the title. Based on the small part of what has been posted, the title makes about zero sense, which leads me to wonder what the rest would be about to make the author name it so.
--Even though [_Jaws_] has a reputation for creating utterly random names for stories and roleplays, I still would find it interesting to learn the method behind this particular madness.
--All in all, I would recommend that you, the reader, go see for yourself why this story deserves praise, and that you, the writer, go and add more to your wonderfully creative idea.
Eh, even acting as a real reviewer I can't really be objective. Oh, well. It was still fun, kinda.
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