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 Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:59 pm
Here is the story of my new manga based plot I may do some pages for it later,
In the distant future Earth will be destroyed by the sun going super nova
the last remaining humans of earth wil use serviving technologic skills to create the new Earth which will be a large slab of earth built on to a gravitational provision device This Is not the only source of human life of course there are also stations found all across the galaxy one of which is the location for our story. The Miltary base its the second largest base in the galaxy here army men and woman are trained in the art of physical combat and the handling of weapons, this is the main protection unit for The new earth for there are indeed people who wish to destroy the new earth for reasons unknown so far....
On with the story
The military base's electonic control centre~
"S-sir?" A female monitering one of the cameras of the inner base said turning to face the head scientist of that particular section."Hrmm?What is it?" The Electronics general asked turning towards the woman "An intrudor.." She began "Let fthe first wall take care of it." The general said cutting off the woman, "But you see sir the intrudor has already managed past the 4th wall..." She said a slight bit of shock overtaking her expression.The generals aloof expression became alaramed "Wh-What?!But the 4th wall is gaurded by our foot soldier specialist!" He exclaimed racing over to the monitor The woman scientist was sitting at, "How i-is this possible?" The general said in a trembling voice as he found the intrudors dot break past the 5th line of defence with ease. The general grabbed a radio mic and began to speak."All remaining Walls brace yourself!The oncoming enemy is not to be taken of light!" The general shouted.
6th wall~
"Feh!" a soldier scoffed at the technical generals seemingly urgent warning,"Even if he mangaed to break pasrt the 5th wall theres a big difference in strength between the 6th huh?" He laughed paying no attention to the footsteps that approached him and as fast as he stopped laughing He collapsed a figure stood were the big headed soldier once stood the figure had on a cloak of the sorts before the remaing soldiers could say anything the Figure leapt over them and continued walking onward the stunned crew almost let him go when a single female charged up with a bazooka "C'MON GUYS SNAP OUT OF IT!" SHe shouted releasing a huge blast from her weapon.The other soldiers scrambled for their own artillery while the firey bullet streaked at break neck speed towards the "Intrudor" He glanced for a millisecond behind him and did a flip kick sending himself Into the air a mere centemiter out of harms way."Kuso!" A soldier cussed bringing out a radio as the enemy fled up the stairs to the next room."Intrudor proceding towards level 7!Last line of defence!" "yOu think the 7th floor can handle it?" A soldier asked the man who radiod the second floor "are you kidding don't you remember who is on thaty seventh floor?!" he asked with a serious expression.
7th floor:last line of defence before the admirals room~
As the intrudor entered the room the door behind him shut and locked."So you've managed to get to the last floor huh?" A voice asked from across the room A woman with long red hair walked over her gun drawn and pointed towards the others head "Im your opponent" she said An evil and somewhat cocky smile on her face.
ENd of chapter one~
((Lol such a short chappy =w=))
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:07 pm
lolz i got half way through the chapter thinking "this sounds alot like her other story~" ^^
I think its really good by the way!! XD
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:54 pm
Lunalover009 lolz i got half way through the chapter thinking "this sounds alot like her other story~" ^^
I think its really good by the way!! XD Wh-what do you mean? *looks over story* HOLY POOPS IT IS!!! XD thankyou anyway XD
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Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:26 pm
This story is more like seperated into little bits they're not big enough to call chapters I might spell check later.
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One quick flip kick disarmed the woman and stunned her long enough for the inrtudor to get past her,"Were do you think your going?!" she shouted Picking up her gun again and this time firing.It let out a red bullet that missed its target by mere centimeters,"Lucky." the woman excused while she loaded the gun again "At least give me the pleasure of knwing my enemies name?" She said charging at the other."Arc Leo," The boy answered catching her by the arm,"You sound young,Im Gale Katsuki," She said with a grunt as she thrust him to the ground and pushed her gun onto his head."Although fat lot of good names will do now that your done for..." she said her grip tightening on her gun,She pulled the trigger and closed her eyes fully expecting the feeling of Warm blood.
But i never came,Gale opened her eyes to find Arc gone,She got up and looke around cocking her gun "What the he-" She didn't get a chance to finish as arcs fist was already pressed into her solarplexius "Ugh.." She grunted falling to her knees.The other walked away slowly "Not yet!" Gale shouted throwing up her gun and firing,The bullet missed any flesh but knicked the hood of Arcs cloak."Darn this is company property he sighed turning to fight again "Heh what do you mean Company?" Gale asked this time taking aim.Arc didn't answer instead he tried to knock Gales gun away again "Dont doubt me!" She shouted blocking the kick with her wrist and then delivering a blow of her own only his one with her fist to his face."Tch" Arc spat Dodging other assaults "How long do you intend to keep this up?I have a schedule to keep!" Arc asked not bothering for an answer he ran to the exit clicking button that opened it Gale gritted her teeth and Chased him shooting her gun wildly.
The central room held the head honcho of the military base, the gaurds around him shuttered as hey heard the gunshots and loud noises from the stairwell to the room echo and approach.Then everything went quiet the only thing heard from behind the door now is low murmurs the gaurds leaned in to hear while the general sat and stood his ground.As soon as the voices stopped the door burst open and Arc flew through behind it he skidded over the white tiled floor dodging the bullets that showered him and slowly came closer and closer to the general Gale ran in too and shot as well. "GENERAL!" She yelled as Arc was within spitting distance he leapt onto his Desk "stop firing you might shoot the General!" head soldiers comanded and watched in terror as the intrudor was pulling something out of a side pouch "d-damn!" Gale shouted sprinting to the general just as she was about to grab him Arc thrust something towards the General"NO!"
Gale shouted in horror.
"Mail delivery,"
Arc said removing his hood to reveal a very young face in his hand he held a manila envelope with an imperial seal on it "From the prince." He smiled panting a little.The soldiers in the room dropped their weapons Gale dropped to her knees and the General let the one drop of sweat he had accumulated fall too."The first ever person to EVER infiltrate the 7th wall of defense to the General..Was a mail man..." Gale said Her face somewhat dead looking.
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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 3:20 pm
O.o .....hahahaHAHAHAHA!!!! XD oh lolz!! nice. cool
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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:24 pm
XDDDDDDDDD I LOL'd when I read the last part. Go mail mannnnnnnnn!
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 3:25 pm
LOL YEAH!FEAR TEH WRATH OF EVIL MAIL MEN! AND THEIR ENVELOPES OF DOOOOM!
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 12:39 pm
Okay so WHO wants for me to continue this story?!Im starting to not like these stories o mine So If anyone doesn't want me to continue this story or doesn't care if it continues or not just don't post on this story If you would like me to continue Tell me to
Sorry if it sounds like Im holding my story for ransom...
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