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iiHades

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:05 pm


Name: Ed
Occupation: 3th seat officer of squad 4
Specialty: Swords
Zanpakuto's Name: lotus
Shikai/Special Ability 1: To control water
Shikai/Special Ability 2: A dark blast
Shikai/Special Ability 3: Heal
~Ranked Kido Setting~
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Shikai: Its a Dark Lotus sword. Also its ability to generate a lotus shield.

Bankai/speacial ability: To be able to do dark slashes
PostPosted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:34 pm


Hades I would suggest that you go a little more in depth about you're shikai. For example. If I was to put down that a shikai ability is to control ice I would elaborate and say that the ice can be formed into ice blades that attack with me. So in regards to your Shikai, just elaborate a little bit more on them.

You're ranked kido setting I will have to get back to you on. I do not believe that you, as a 3rd seat officer, can have a master kido setting. Please make sure to look at the Kido system that has been listed in the Profile Skeletons thread and adjust it accordingly.

You may just edit the profile above and then make a new post saying that it has been edited so you don't have to post it again.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:56 pm


Hades Religio
Name: Ed
Occupation: 3th seat officer of squad 4
Specialty: Swords
Zanpakuto's Name: lotus
Shikai/Special Ability 1: To control water, And it also forms a serphant that is able to shoot water bullets sizes of tires that shoots in many directions
Shikai/Special Ability 2: A dark blast, It is made of reistu that its a dark matter that is a shape like a backwards c
Shikai/Special Ability 3: Heal, It heals wound like cuts that are miner to deep.
~Ranked Kido Setting~
Hado spells
#4 byakurai
#31 Shakkaho
#33 sukatsui
#63 soren sukatsui
#53 big hammer
#12 fushibi
#54 haien

Bakudo spells
#1 Sai
#4 hainawa
#16 ryuusa
#50 sokubaku
#61 Rikujōkōrō

Bougyoudo
#3 blue mist
#30 Banshiisse
#35 Collapse

chiyudo
#2. Amatsubu
#5. Antidote
#25. Bandaidification
#55. Great Barrier
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Shikai: Its a Dark Lotus sword. Also its ability to generate a lotus shield.Also It can generate a white lotus sword,

Bankai/speacial ability: To be able to do dark and light reistu slashes


Squad Four Ability
Poison strike- it allows all of squad 4 members to be able to use a poison slash on an opponent. The poison is a paralyzing poison, and it only lasts one
PostPosted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:14 pm


i edited it and still need help with the rank kido

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:28 pm


Ranked Kido setting:

Since you are a 3rd Seat for Squad 4 you have an Officer kido setting. It is just underneath a Lt. but above a soldiers.

Shikai 2:

Does the blast form a ball or a straight shot. Just add a little more detail here and it'll be fine.

Shikai 3:

How deep of a wound can it heal, just small cuts or large ones. A little more detail on this one and it should be fine.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:22 pm


You have edited everything but you still need more information with the Shikai 2.
What form does the energy take?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:41 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 2:43 pm


That is fine. Other then those things that have been changed I see nothing wrong with the profile.

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