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 Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 12:39 am
I'm going to bed i'm already at mag meets shilo but i need some advice.
Should I do the 17 years ago like this?
17 years ago.
Two Lovers Rotti and Nathan
A perfect SadoMasochistic Relationship.
Until Nathan Met Marni and went straight.
and Broke Rotti's Heart.
Then Marni got sick
Rotti sent and Gentern over to slip a poison into Nathan's medicine
Althought the Gentern left the poison on the counter with a skull and crossbones label
Nathan was too distracted by the prospect of a daughter to notice and gave it to Marni.
In the Confusion Nathan could only save one.
Now Nathan is Rotti's B**ch
Or should i actually write the scenes out from 17 years ago. If I don't Magni is going to be impossible but.. I'm torn at being cutesy and being pornographic
What are your thoughts and opinions. Also this story will have a diffrent ending compared to the movie so guys Will Nathan Live or Will Mag? you can choose. this story is rated Absolut Obscenity.
Answer me so i can finish it
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 1:28 pm
I like the idea of writing from now about 17 years ago because that makes it more like the movie.
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 11:27 pm
I like the first way. It seems cooler. =P
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 10:04 am
The first. xD I laughed so much.
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 9:59 am
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