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 Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:42 am
This story is about a young elf who had the life until it was taken away from him by an evil force.
It was a dark night as he was playing in the woods of the elven village. He was dressed up as a knight and had a makeup fort. "Fire Your bows when you can see their dead eyes" Dire Yelled. "Oh no their coming up with ladders take out your swords" He said as he took out a wooden practice sword. Dire slashed the air as if something were there. All of a sudden there was a scream in the woods. Dire ran to the yelling with his practice sword drawn. As he got to the screaming he saw it was nothing but a person laying in the woods. But as he got to the front odf the person and saw Fur and fangs!
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Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:37 pm
As dire saw the fangs glinting in the moonlight he started running. He ran and ran until he got home. He opened the door and then slammed the door. He was breathing heavily and was sweating. He opened the door a little bit and looked out the crack and saw nothing. He went to bed that night. He had a dream
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Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:35 pm
As dire fell asleep he awoke up again but not in his room! He was in the woods where he saw the thing. But this time it saw him! He tried to run but his feet never moved they were like stone! The thing talked in a raspy voice (You will be great someday. You will also be betrayed by a loved one) It said. "No lies all lies i wont listen!" Then dire woke up!
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Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 10:33 am
It was still night when dire woke up! He was sweating and gasping for breathe. "It felt so real!" Dire whispered. Then he looked around for there was a klunk against his window. He walked over and opened the window. Outside was his cousin [winry sensar] she was throwing rocks at the window. Dire climbed out the window and met winry. "Your sleeping at this hour of night? You should be having fun" Winry said. "I dont wanna play tonight...I saw something in the woods it looked like a Death reaper" dire replied. Winrys eyes went wide as she heard the name. Then she started shaking and pointed at the wall. Dire looked back in he could see a shadow but it was a regular shadow on the wall but it looked like it was a death reaper!
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:51 pm
As Dire turned around he saw the death reaper standing its full height. Dire stood there shaking and sweating. The death reaper moved towards dire and slammed him against the wall saying in his face "You Are supposed to be in bed young one".
The reapers breath smelled like rotten corpses. Then the reaper struck him and dire blacked out. When he woke up he saw his cousin lying on the ground bleeding and crying.
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 5:00 pm
He ran over to her body and held her in her arms. Winry spoke "When that thing was attacking me he said youd be in control of a great city". Dire cried then said "That thing is evil i wouldnet believe it". Then winry replied "But he showed me the future and i saw you in a great castle". Then dire said "I will kill that thing for putting those lies in your head!"
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:32 am
As she breathed her last breath dire ran into the woods looking for the reaper but found no trace of it! Suddenly he had a pain in his arm. He looked down at his arm there was a large cut which was bleeding black blood. He started feeling some pain in his head. All of a sudden his eyes started to turn red and his hair started to turn inro flames and he changed completely.
He noticed many new things like a flaming sword and every time he breathed it was a flame!
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