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A Rp in the Golden Sun universe 

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 6:54 pm


YO YO YO!, i know im litterally JUST got into the guild but...*Emabarrased*........heheheh...TO THE PROFILE *flies*
Name:Flare chanted
Age:15
Weight:145
height: 5' 1'
element :FIRE! DUH!
Class:Warrior

Alignment:She is actually quite innocent but has a darker side

Personality Summary:She is really a quiet, Nice, kind-hearted girl, When you look at her you think of her as an angel But in the night time, She turns into a cold demon, She never thinks twice when it comes to killing. The only time she gets to meet her darker side is in her sleep, Where they both sit back to back and talk

other note:She never really wanted to do such thing but She really does not have much of a choice [no sure what you mean by this owo]

Bio abstract:Ever since she turned 12 She wakes up covered in blood, She has hard times sleeping everyday. The only times she actually sleeps is when she is drained [Of pp =.=]

She travels a lot and far away from towns as possible. She hates killing people, Only monsters she would like to kill, In the night time you would see her get pale her hair gets darker and body grows a tiny more mature [She is flat chested XD ].

And she had that bloody eyes for quite a while now....

Narrative Bio: Flare wobbled through her house, Eyes filled with tears body covered in blood "No...NO I DIDNT DO THIS!She yelled looking at the bodies of her parents "I DIDNT!!"She falls to the ground tear blinding her"You did"A darker more sinister voice whispered She flinches and screams "NOOO!"A evil laugh was what she could hear now.

Flare takes one good look at what she done, rubbing her eyes she runs out of the house, she took her sword couple of herbs and changed into better clothes she ran far from the village.
[OMG CHEEEEEESY!!]
Starting stats: warrior [i already said that >.>]
Level:11
Hp:100 (Nightime:200)
PP:140
Attack:90 (Night time:150)
Defense:78
Agility: 90 (Nighttime:120) [WTF!]
Starting equipment:
Uhm....uknown?

Djinn:Steam

Starting psyenergy~
Basics [uhm....sorry X<]

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:08 pm


you could probably say what your Djinn does next to it. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:04 pm


Steam is a merc djinni that ups res by 40. :T
PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:30 pm


TOO LAZY TO CHECK THE WIKI! V_V:

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:17 am


*lazy too* Me no fix, me content with flare *nods*
PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:37 pm


Now look what you've started, Boxy! D:

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:34 pm


Child Hood of Flare


[i was extremely bored and thought i could practice my writing this takes place anywhere cuase im to tired to set where she used to live LET GO!!!]
Chapter 1
The laughter of happy young children filled at feild, All perhaps 8 or 7 . Who was laughing the loudest, was a the youngest girl who seemed to be 6 but she was quite mature for her age. She smiles, her shirt covered in mud and grass stains probably from falling alot. "WATCH OUT!!" A young boy yelled at the blue haired girl "Wha?" She turned to find a soccer ball hurling towards her, Knocking her forehead "Ow....." was the best she could say "I said watch out" The boy mumbled before helping her up "Not much of help Aero..."Said the girl before getting up while he just chuckled "sorry Flare, your alive right?" Flare nodded, her head was hurting and elbow was bleeding a bit but she she was alright "Good, now next tme when i say 'watch out' " He said at first smiling "WATCH OUT!!!" He yelled, a direct hit in her ear then he took the ball and left "What the...grrrr" She grabbed the nearest rock that would hurt very much and threw at her full strength Watching it fly to aero..."BULL EYES!" She laughs feeling content, and skipping happily to her small but nice home.

[Like i said just practicing what do you think? and aero is not important AND DONT YELL AT ME!!!]
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:50 pm


Malevolent little girl o,o;

I try not to be too picky, but watch your grammar and spelling. Once you think you're done a post, reread it to yourself (out loud even) to make sure everything's spelled and punctuated correctly, and that the grammar and word usage is sound and appropriate.

I guess my biggest problem though is that you still won't tell me anything about what Flare's goals and motivations are and why. :T It's tough to help you integrate into the RP without knowing that.

Anyway, as far as your blurb here goes, the first sentence is off. I think you meant it to be "The laughter of happy young children filled the[wording] field[spelling], all perhaps 7 or 8 years old[clarification]." Errors underlined, explanations in brackets.

After that you're pretty good, though the 'mature for her age' seems contradictory to her later inappropriate aggression.

Finally the last bit is unclear. I'm guessing that he kicked or threw or otherwise launched the ball again at Flare on purpose? And hit her on the side of her head. After which she threw a rock at him.

If you're trying to project that she's inherently malicious/sadistic/lacking empathy (even considering her age) then you've done quite a good job.

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