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styledcliff
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:57 pm


Curse of time


Everything must end that holds the curse of time.
Including this short life of mine.
Everything must end from to the simple to the complex.
Even the worst and also the best.
Things come to an end it can’t be ignored.
No matter how much it may have been adored.
One’s love can be put to the test.
But the trial of time cannot be out best
Everything has an end we must agree.
Down to the rocks in the sea.
Even the strongest can’t live forever.
Nothing can even if it may seem stronger.
Down to the steps we take and the money we spend.
Time itself will eventually come to an end.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:21 pm


wow brother my favorite part was hmmmmmm....... the whole thing

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:26 pm


One's love can be put to the test. But the trail of time cannot out best Everything has an end we must agree.
-not bad, like the rhythm in it. keep posting-
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:05 pm


Very nice Sonnet. The images were awesome and the lines well crafted =D


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styledcliff
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 11:06 am


still not too sure about the title if i should keep it or if there might be a better one
PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:23 pm


Hmmm I see your point. Maybe try changing the title to, "To An End" or "Curse of Time"


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styledcliff
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:46 pm


i was thinking curse of time also but im not good with names lol
PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:52 pm


I think Curse of Time would be better to gain someones attention and it sounds cooler lol


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styledcliff
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:54 pm


I do agree 3nodding
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