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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:02 pm


A wounded warrior treading water,
walks through the dessert.
She does her best to work through the bull s**t,
In and out of faded dreams.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 9:35 am


It sounds really nice. But what kind of bull s**t does she work through? There is room to expand the poem.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:24 pm


I agree with Zoey. You could expand a lot on it
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