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 Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:13 pm
Oh brother don’t you know?
I’ll never leave your side,
Like the sky I’ll always remain,
Watching your back for eternity.
My twin, please walk with me,
Through this endless land.
If you fall and cannot rise,
Like Orpheus I’ll come for you.
Friend, dear friend of mine,
I wish you could see,
That you are an unintended thief,
And I a heartless victim.
My thief, you have what you stole,
Something very precious to me,
That I never had a chance to protect,
For you never were blocked by my defenses.
Oh brother whom I love,
My twin I’ll always save,
A friend I’ll never leave,
And a thief I didn't stop.
You’ll always be all of these.
Maybe one day,
I can add one more.
Comments please ^^
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:42 pm
wow it sounds really really nice i dont really have much else to say actually
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SerasuAlucard Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:01 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:08 pm
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SerasuAlucard Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:41 am
That is amazing! It flows well. smile
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