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HellpuppyMelinda

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:14 pm


My Angel


My heart has been shattered and stolen
My soul wanders the Darkest of nights
My love has left me to die

I feel like I can love no more
As my soul burns in the flame of pain
Left alone in the Dark
No one to find me, No one to hold me

Where is the Angel that God sent
Where is the Angel to heal my Broken Soul
Where, Oh where is he
The Light that is my Angel

Forsaken me the wrong I have done
I have betrayed your Love, my Dear
Leaving your Heart wounded
The healing that will never come

Your soul left in agony
The pain in your eyes
Your heart so fragile that one touch it will break
Leaving your soul to wander like mine

But will never see the Darkest nights like I
Your soul will go to heaven, My Angel
While my soul burns in hell
Because your soul is just to pure

My Angel will you ever forgive me
For the wounds I have left you with
My love for you is now forbidden
Your love for me is now and forever lost

My Angel so Beautiful, so Pure
My Angel so Loved and respected
Surrounded by one who Love you
Except for me and my Love for you
I will never feel your lips against mine
Your warm smile that leaves me breathless
Or your secure hugs that makes me stay
Those I will never have again, not now, not ever

My Angel, Oh my Angel
Will you ever free my soul
And heal my Broken Heart
So that I may Love you one more time

Forever with you my Angel
For all that I am
In the Dark or in the light
Will you my Angel take me

My Love for you is strong
And that my Angel
Will never ever be destroy
For when I die, I will forever Love you more
For all eternity my Love for you
Will never, ever change, my Dear


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 7:14 pm


wow i don't have any criticism for this poem it had me tearing up cuz me and my fiance recently broke up wow

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:52 pm


I loved the consistent diction and mood in the poem. I think it is something that a lot of people will like because they'll be able to relate to it. I can actually really see this be turned into lyrics for a song. I think it'd be worth it to put it into lyric format and give a shot at publishing it for a the music world.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 2:54 pm


Oh! You make me blush redface ! I worked really hard on this poem of mine!

HellpuppyMelinda

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