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 Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:44 pm
I love poetry
it makes me feel lovely
im not alone when i write
surrounded by imagination
it feels right
I think all day and dream all night
of things to say and things to type
it is not often that people read
but what the heck, i'll write till i bleed
its my heart that spills
the pen that fills
my thoughts my mind
i have nothing to hide
here on clean paper
and some full and old
I could never be happier
Poetry is like gold
the creator of this guild has read it first, cuz that's basicly how i got in XD
hi everyone!!! :'D
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:58 pm
hello the Captain bids you welcome to the lovers of poetry guild ^^
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SerasuAlucard Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 9:22 am
welcome and that poem is awesome
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 8:46 pm
highgoddess_of_nyx_zoey welcome and that poem is awesome thank you. :3
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 8:47 pm
styledcliff hello the Captain bids you welcome to the lovers of poetry guild ^^ YAYYY.
okay haiku time!
having a good night
is definitely where i am
a good state of mind
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 4:30 pm
Love the flow of this one and I think a lot of poets can easily relate to this poem. However, I don't think the first and second lines are necessary. They don't match the rest of the poem and I think the poem will sound better without it. ^^
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:57 am
original__zate Love the flow of this one and I think a lot of poets can easily relate to this poem. However, I don't think the first and second lines are necessary. They don't match the rest of the poem and I think the poem will sound better without it. ^^ if i change the poem it wouldn't be the same as i felt when i wrote it. lol.
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 1:12 pm
TrapJoyShot original__zate Love the flow of this one and I think a lot of poets can easily relate to this poem. However, I don't think the first and second lines are necessary. They don't match the rest of the poem and I think the poem will sound better without it. ^^ if i change the poem it wouldn't be the same as i felt when i wrote it. lol. Well if you like it the way it is it's fine, but poets go through about 40 revisions for a single poem before the final.
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:24 pm
original__zate TrapJoyShot original__zate Love the flow of this one and I think a lot of poets can easily relate to this poem. However, I don't think the first and second lines are necessary. They don't match the rest of the poem and I think the poem will sound better without it. ^^ if i change the poem it wouldn't be the same as i felt when i wrote it. lol. Well if you like it the way it is it's fine, but poets go through about 40 revisions for a single poem before the final. well, if that was the case, there'd be more versions out there for famous poetry. :/ i'm no famous poet, and i do like it the way it is, i see nothing wrong with it.
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