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 Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 7:22 pm
Here is a poem I have written a little whiles ago and I am anxious to see how people like it.
Hollow Days and Souless Nights
Blackened petals fall
from buried caskets.
Ruffled by an unknown breeze,
and landing on your crimson lips.
You ascend once again,
to your sugar coated throne,
and you raise your golden scepter,
but it is naught but false gold.
Pass your riens to your servent
for your power is wilting.
Close those emerald eyes pretty,
this is the chaos you have made.
Fires burn on ebony wings,
and your firey hair ignites.
Whisper no words to me,
for my ears are closed.
Demons enchanted you love,
they pulled you away to your delight.
Now rejoice you reckless beauty,
for rubies adorn your pallid skin.
I have many variations of this poem scattered in many notebooks but please don't try to steal it because I have a copyright on it...I used to, I think it still stands...
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:21 pm
A lovely peice, both sad and angry.
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:23 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 8:39 am
Nice figurative language. smile . Sad poem.
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 3:32 pm
Thank you all who commented smile
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 4:21 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:17 pm
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