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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:34 am

'~' I made this picture... but I think there something wrong with it... Oh well? I 'll finish it later...
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:45 am

it's really goood!
i think its just that the lines are too thick?
i'm an amateur artist sweatdrop

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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:08 am

It's pretty good, if I say so myself biggrin
The only thing I'm concern would have to be the lineart. It's a bit messy as it's very thick in places (mostly on the hair, and there is a small amount in other places (like the cup).

BTW I love that it is Arthur Kirkland from APH biggrin

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:56 am

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It's pretty good, if I say so myself biggrin
The only thing I'm concern would have to be the lineart. It's a bit messy as it's very thick in places (mostly on the hair, and there is a small amount in other places (like the cup).

BTW I love that it is Arthur Kirkland from APH biggrin

Thank you ( ' w ' ) It looks messy 'cause I don't use photoshop often, and I had to scan it in (-_-) I hate scanners
I'm gonna go try to fix it then :3

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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:26 am

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it's really goood!
i think its just that the lines are too thick?
i'm an amateur artist sweatdrop

Don't worry, I'm a amateur too, so no need to be formal.
I'm going to try to fix him and his...... 'cute' bowl :3

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 11:12 am

'kay I thinned some of the lines and tried to fix the bowl more :3

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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:05 pm

added a background :3
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:48 pm

It looks good and I really like it~
The linear is cleaner and you added a background and some sort of separation from the background.
The only thing I want to add is to not smudge/blur your artwork. Although it might look good at points, it's best to use it wisely. Adding blurs at unneeded places are unnecessary as the artwork would look a bit messy.

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Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 1:10 pm

Do you use the layer option in photoshop?
if not that might help alot to ^_^ because you can try different things without effecting the actual drawing XD

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:09 pm

:3 been awhile since I put something up and everyone has good points
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I'm still coloring and tweaking parts I don't like (like the arms and legs)
but other then that how does it look?

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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:11 pm

never finished the image above this one....but yay new stuff
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I need to color and re-do the lines a little, feedback is always appreciated :3
(except the mean evil kind, no one likes that kind XD )

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