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xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 9:09 pm


RP Name:Shadow Nightwalker
Age:UNKNOWN
Height:5,11
Weight:120
Occupation:Soldier of Squad 5
Appearance:User Image

Zanpakuto's Name:Kagemaru
Zanpakuto Spirit's Bio:The spirit rarely sees me or talks to me. I guess it means it hasn't acknowledged me yet. I call him Neph
Zanpakuto Spirit's Appearance:User Image
Zanpakuto's Sealed Form:Already in the picture above, but it has this symbol on the handle User Image
Awakening Call:Alpha Kagemaru

Shikai Form/Appearance:Zanbakuto:User ImageUser Image

Shikai Ability 1:Zangetsuha
- The blade gathers spirit energy concentrates it into a crescent-shaped strike. When fully powered, it can gather up spiritual pressure from the wind can result into and extremely sharp attack. In which, it's original name is Kaze Zangetsuha. If this method is used, it can badly wear out the user.
Shikai Ability 2:Sword of the Mortal Flame
-The user plunges the blade into the ground and exchanges a certain portion of it's spiritual energy to call forth the flames from with in the core of the spirit an surround the blade. It drastically strengthens the user's speed, attack power, and heightens the amount of adrenaline. It it were used to go any further than half of its user spiritual energy, the side effects can lead to a berserker state. Which could lead the body to an overexertion that can lead to unconsciousness or death.

~Speed Ability~Dashing


~Soldier Kido Spells Setting~
~Hado~
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning) = low
29. Chuujou / Assatsu = low
31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire) = low
33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down) = low

~Bakudo~
8. Seki (斥, Repulse) = low
26. Kyokko (曲光, Curved Light) = low



Bio/History:Shadow has no memories of who he is or where he came from. All he knows is his name. And the name Nightwalker came from the locals of the living world always see him at night as a dark vigilante. In time he obtained the name, Shadow Nightwalker. After some time in the human world, Shadow learned different types of abilities though out each of his battles. When it comes to battle, he is a quick learner. Later he found out he was actually a soul reaper after he read a few books about the super-natural. Lately, he has been getting into a few situations with hollows hunting him down like a natural enemy. One day, he began to hearing terrifying voices in his head as if something evil is trying to claw it's way out of him. And every time he get pulled into a dire situation like the verge of death, he blacks out and wakes up to his enemies hacked into a bloody mess. Thats when he realized there was a hollow inside of him.
There is a mark on the handle of his Zanpakuto that hasn't been seen in the soul society for many generations. The mark of the Dark Wolf. A powerful creature that was used as bloodhounds to track down hollows and fight along soul reapers in battle. They were highly intelligent and grew stronger in every battle. One day, they all gave their lives to defend the soul society from an invasion of hollows. Now it seems one has survived in the form of a human and with the power of a soul reaper.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 10:45 am


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Yunna Zee

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 11:43 am


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Alright, there is a few things that need some tweaking. Other than these your profile really is a good one.

[01]: Okay the first thing that really caught my attention was the mention that he’s a Vizard. The guild votes on Vizards, so you would have to ask about that. But at the moment we’re not excepting any Vizard Characters. So you’ll have to wait a bit before trying to apply for a Vizard position.
I’d suggest Rping for a bit so that everyone can see that your active and a fare enough Role Player to have a Vizard position as well, if you really want it. Until then keep the berserker thing going to cover the possibility up.

[02]: Shinki 1: Zangetsuha - The blade gathers spirit energy concentrates it into a crescent-shaped strike. When fully powered, it can gather up spiritual pressure from the wind can result into and extremely sharp attack. In which, it's original name is Kaze Zangetsuha. If this method is used, it can badly wear out the user.
Well first off is that it needs a little more detail, because as is it’s a bit confusing to me with such a small amount of detail. We don’t know how powerful the attack is, how big the strike range is, how many times the strike can be used. Etc.
Secondly because of the lack of detail this attack can be seen as G-modding. As its written the attack seems way to powerful for a first level Shinki.

[03]: Shinki 2: Sword of the Mortal Flame - The user plunges the blade into the ground and exchanges a certain portion of it's spiritual energy to call forth the flames from with in the core of the spirit an surround the blade. It drastically strengthens the user's speed, attack power, and heightens the amount of adrenaline. It it were used to go any further than half of its user spiritual energy, the side effects can lead to a berserker state. Which could lead the body to an overexertion that can lead to unconsciousness or death.
First off, this attack is way to powerful for a second level Shinki. A second level shouldn’t have such power that it could send the user unconscious or dead. This kind of reaction would probably be more in the Bankai 2 area, or extreme extended use of Bankai 1.
Secondly you’ve changed elements. Shinki 1 says that you use wind, now Shinki 2, says that you use fire. You need to pick an element and stick with it for all your Shinki.
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