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 Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:40 pm
[Pictures to be set up later]
Basic
Name: Calliay Ti
Gender: Female
Appearance Age: 19
Actual Age: 1,200
Squad: 13
Squad Rank: Captain
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Personal
Physical Documentation: [X] Tall, Tan, Purple Hair to Ankles, Large Golden Eyes.
Height: 5’9”
Weight: 135lb
Body Type: Hour Glass
Hair Color: Purple
Eye Color: Gold
Marks/Tattoos: A red jewel on her forehead that wont come off. Its currently cracked.
Bio/Personality:
Before she died Calliay was a loving girl that wanted nothing more than to have children.
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Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: [X] Decaying angel.
Zanpakuto Name: Kubomi Re-tp
Sealed Appearance: [X]
Zanpakuto Spirit Bio:
Once a beautiful angel now a ugly banshee, hollow song is Calliay’s Zanpakuto. She came to Calliay after being destroyed almost, the sword was originally an arrancars, oddly it became hers.
Zanpakuto Inner World:
Castle with endless rooms, each having a different 'theme'.
~Shikai~
Release Phrase:
Shikai Ability:
Calliay is able to manipulate wind as well as even control the movement and speed of the wind depending on the swing with her fan.
Release Appearance: [X]
Shikai Attacks:
Wind Blades: Once she swings her fan it causes a fast strong gust of wind to blow towards her opponents strong enough to make them lose balance or even trip if they don't have good footing at keeping there ground, while the gust of wind is keeping her foes at bay five blades of wind soars straight at them.
Air Prison: With three swings with her fan from different directions, Calliay can control the wind currents to form a wind barrier that is 6 foot radius engulfing everyone in it while air within the barrier is debilitate. With the barrier traps the her prays in with no way out except to go through the barrier, there is only 3 foot radius of safe space but the other 3 foot radius is nothing but wind currents but the wind currents are moving so fast and strong that he can cut a person five times every two seconds.
Tornado Blades: By swinging her Iron Fan four times Calliay is able to make a 100 foot tall tornado with a radius of 4 feet that heads at her opponents with great speed sucking in everything in its path. The wind currents are moving at great speed that can cut anything seven times every second.
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Bankai~
Release Phrase: 'Sing to the heavens...'
Bankai Ability:
Similar to her shikai ability, Calliay can also manipulate sound as well as control the frequency to ether intensify or dim it as much she needs it.
Bankai Appearance: Black wings (metal feathers) and claws, with large black star fans floating behind user. (3) [X]
Bankai Weapon Appearance: [X]
Bankai Attacks:
Sonic Bubble: By suppressing her reiastu she can build up pressure that when released moves outward in a sonic boom. This is followed by a second and third less powerful sound, that leave the opponent stunned and temporary deaf. Calliay then uses a shower of metal feathers attack the opponent.
The first boom creates a bubble around 50feet around Calliay, where she is always the center, the only way out of this bubble and away from the constantly falling metal feathers (They can be blocked by things that can block level 60 kido and over.), is to leave the bubble through the sound barrier created by the first boom. Not so easy because of the pure level of sound compressed within the three inch thick wall. Which could leave the opponent permanently deaf if they are exposed to it to long.
Deadly Angel: By using her sound ability, which reverberates at different levels distorting a persons perception as well as the air around (Like with mirages just with sound instead of heat because sound can distort like that if at the right frequency) Calliay is able make a kind of illusion, of which she appears as an angel from heaven, with black and white alternating wings while the sky seems to rain black feathers (Not Metal). Not the true intent of the ability merely a side affect created by the dome of black feathers she must uses to create the ability, Calliay can pick and choose enemies and allies apart, and send bursts of razor wind at enemies to attack, while also picking out allies to send a type of healing Reiatsu to help with wounds. Healing small completely and severe partially. Consequently an enchanting voice fills the dome singing lovingly during the entire 10 minute span that the dome can be up.
Due to the shear amount of her own Reiatsu required to use this ability, Calliay must use the Guardian ability with the attack, and will fall unconscious for days after use. She is unable to use healing affect on herself as well.
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Kido Spell [24 Spells]
Hado
1. Shō (衝, Thrust) - Pushes the target away from the caster.
2. Beniikazuchi (Crimson Thunder) - A beam of deep red lightning is blasted from the user's pointing finger towards the enemy. It's intention is to make so much noise, that it breaks the enemy's orientation. Its strike is not very strong but the impact can make superficial bruises. It's a good hado for iniciants.
4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) - The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning) - Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.
31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire) - Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"
35. Breaking Palm - A direct kido attack, this move must be done at point blank range. The user of this attack focuses kido energy into one of their hands, the entire hand soon becoming covered in the energy. This technique gives the hand a great destructive force, allowing it to punch holes in walls and greatly increase that person's striking power to the point of being able to fracture or break bone. If the shinigami is captain rank this technique can even allow them to destroy large structures without a zanpakutou. This kido spell last only five minutes.
36. Kongōbaku (金剛爆, Adamantine Blast) - A blast of spherical, red energy similar in strength to a Sōkatsui blast.
38. Altar - The user presses their hands to the ground as they chant this spell. Stone javelins shoot forth from the ground, surrounding the opponent. They all come down on the person, shredding them. It starts out with four javelins. However two more extra javelins shots out the higher rank you are after officer. Each javelin appears ten feet from the target, they are all about one yard in length and four inches in thickness.
41. Roku Teikoku Touken (Six Imperial Swords) - Six swords made of light energy appear in the sky and crash down on the foe.
Incantation: Crown of the King, shatter the bones of the beast, let six hand place judgment on the wicked, as they bow in your honor.
52. Bakuhatsu no Chakudan (Detonating Impact) - Similar to the first blasting spell, Sudden Impact, this releases a blast of air from the hands of the caster, but instead of the 'normal' one, this one is huge in comparison and is supercharged with spirit energy, detonating on impact, thus the name.
73. Burning Spirit - The user creates a massive tornado of whirling fire that consumes and destroys everything inside.
88. Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) - Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in a truly enormous explosion.
90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) - Forms a box of black energy around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears," lacerating the one inside from head to toe. Its appearance and function is reminiscent of a common magician's trick.
91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) - Summons several spears of light that are all fired towards the same focal point where the intended target resides. The culminating explosion is exceedingly devastating.
Incantation: "Limit of the thousands hands, respectful hands, unable to touch the darkness. Shooting hands unable to reflect the blue sky. The road that basks in light, the wind that ignited the embers, time that gathers when both are together, there is no need to be hesitant, obey my orders. Light bullets, eight bodies, nine items, book of heaven, diseased treasure, great wheel, grey fortress tower. Aim far away, scatter brightly and cleanly when fired"
92. Gaki Rekkō (牙気裂光, Raging Light Fang) - A spell that makes a circle of energy, before firing blasts of green light from its center in a cage-like formation.
93. Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm) - A spell that fires a massive wave of ice capable of freezing its targets and surrounding area as well as destroying a group of Menos Grande through sheer power. It is also strong enough to go through Danku, which can block any Destructive spell numbered 89 or less.
Bakudo
1. Sai (塞, Restrain) - Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) - An energy rope entangles the target's arms.
8. Seki (斥, Repulse) - Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it that is not reiatsu base.
9. Geki (撃, Strike) - Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them.
Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"
10. Hōrin (Disintegrating Circle) - Causes an orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns to erupt from the users hand and attempt to trap a target. the end of it remains in the hands of the user allowing them to control the path of the tendril before and after capture. The Kidō is able to connect with another one of itself if both have captured a target and bind them together.
Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and tear out your own throat!"
99. Part 1 Kin (禁, Seal) - Ties the target's arms on the back in addition to wrapping the spiritual fabric around the entire body, and continues to pin the target with spiritual fabric stacked to the ground around the target with several iron shafts in an "X" shape.
99. Part 2 Bankin (卍禁, Great Seal) - This spell covers the target from head to toe with spiritual fabric (First Song), stabs them with numerous metal bolts (Second Song), and then smashes them with an immense metal cube (Final Song).
Incantation: First Song: Halting Fabric (初曲・止繃, Shokyoku: Shiryū). Second Song: Hundred Linked Bolts (弐曲・百連閂, Nikyoku: Hyakurensan). Final Song: Great Seal of 10,000 Forbiddings
Jokou
80. Area of Silence - Has a certain probability of temporarily inhibiting the use of magic by everyone within fifteen meters of the caster. Foe(s) in the sphere is forbidden from using kido spells or any hollow base spells that is a variation to shinigami kido spells like cero, bala, hierro, and ect. The barrier lasts for five minutes. Any kido spells or hollow base spells that is a variation to shinigami kido spells that are in active before this spell was use is nullified as while also.
81. Doragon no Uroko - The person's skin becomes tough as dragon's scales and cause the user's skin starts to morph into dragon's scales adsorbing 20% damage from bankai/resurrection 2 attacks/abilities, 50% damage from shikai/resurrection 1 attacks/abilities, 90% damage from physical attacks and kido spells/hollow powers this spell last for 10 minutes
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Speed Abilities
~Dashing~
A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks.
~Shunpo (Flash-Step)~
A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess Shunpo. Furthermore, it is a most fearsome mid-range/long-range speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. All in all, this ability can only be used by lieutenants and captains. For lieutenants it is nearly mastered, yet not perfected. Therefore, it is only of mid-range level 1. For captains Shunpo is of a level 2 maximum ability in which it is fully perfected for both mid-range and long-range.
~Air Walk~
Another skill, though not necessarily related, is the Soul Reaper ability to walk on air using spiritual energy. By collecting and solidifying spiritual particles beneath their feet, Soul Reapers can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. This particular ability can only be obtained from officer level. Furthermore, it cannot necessarily be used every so often, especially for officers. It is an ability that can only be temporarily used but cannot last for a very long period of time. However, for lieutenants, they can stay on air for quite a bit longer and for captains, it can be held for quite a long while considering the great amount of riatsu within a captain ranking individual.
~Senka (Flash Blossom)~
Although Shunpo is connected with this ability, this technique possess a unique name and style of its own. This technique is known as Senka (闪花, Flash Blossom), a flash step combined with a spin to quickly move behind the enemy, followed by a strike aimed to destroy the saketsu chain and the hakusui soul sleep with a combination of two quick thrusts. This technique is one of the two, that Youruichi developed mixing Shunpo to complete its ability. Furthermore, only certain individuals, of high ranking captain level can possess such an ability.
~Utsusemi~
This technique is one of the most difficult speed abilities of them all. Furthermore, this is also one of the two, that Youruichi developed as well. It is the 4 ways of the Shihou through Shunpo which is also known as "Utsusemi". It's ability is a speed known to be so fast that the user leaves an afterimage of him/herself. Its affect is most absolute, superb, and flawless if ever fully perfected. And to be more specific, Utsusemi's speed is so fast, that the enemy can practically feel and touch the physical body of the afterimage and not even know the very fact that it is nothing more but an afterimage. Its very image can easily deceive the eyes of the enemy. This technique is very rare, thus few captains are able to possess such a flawless ability. Furthermore it is most lethal when combining Senka after Utsusemi is executed.
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RPC History - Final
Calliay’s story starts over 900 years ago when Aizan was captain of division five, she was a third seat, though she took a momentary Lieutenant seat just after Gin left. Her Zanpakuto was known as the most beautiful ever used, but also the only Arrancar sword ever made a shinigami’s, this took Aizan’s attention and he kidnapped her for his Vizard experiments because of it. She was turned into something more Hollow than shinigami during the experiments, and only escaped just in time to keep her free will, sadly her sword was injured and decayed into something ghastly.
Calliay fled to the human world where she hid for fifty years, and during her last years she met Yarru, a human with a gift of helping others with traumatic things. Perhaps that’s why she took to him so, but the two got married and had two children, Minami and Hoku. Aizan sent an Espada after Calliay though, and soon it tracked her down, she wasn’t home when it attacked but to the best of her knowledge it killed Yarru and the twins. When she returned home she found them and lost control, blacking out she later learned that she’d killed an entire village, the Espada, and the stationed shinigami. The jewel on her forehead was put there by Yarru, who’s powers had grown I their ten years, he’d survived the attack but was killed by Calliay getting close enough to put the jewel on. It sealed half of her strength and her Hollow powers, though she was still able to use her Vizard powers if needed.
Broken hearted and weak Calliay returned to the soul society to find that Aizan was gone, after a while of working she built up enough strength to take on higher seats it took a while but she made it to Lieutenant of the third division under Captain Sai Takashi. Which is where she met an Espada named Dakota, apparently the Captain and Espada were close. Though at first she’d pretty much hated him the two ended up falling in love, even through the suicide he committed to become a soul reaper and the appearance of Calliay’s thought to be long dead husband Yarru who’d become an Arrancar. They ended up having a child, but Calliay died in birthing, when her heart stopped the jewel broke and a fail safe of Aizan’s kicked in letting the full Hollow out and reform in Huaco Mundo.
It took a while but the Hollow Calliay rose to Espada level and devourer enough Hollow’s and spirits to heal Calliay’s shinigami body and resort back to her Vizard self. Oddly enough the jewel mixed it up and her full Hollow form was sealed away inside Kubomi re-to’s inner world where it was locked up, with Calliay and her Hollow separated almost completely the jewel went a little haywire with nothing significant to seal, so it’s started sealing and unsealing memories randomly. So consequently she believes she’s only been gone a few months on a mission and has no idea she’s had a child. Much less that Dakota sold him for ice cream.
The jewel on her forehead is cracked from the strain of separating and near permanently sealing Calliay’s Hollow self away from her. While blood usually repairs the cracks, this one keeps coming back if she doesn’t keep blood on it regularly, and if it brakes completely the Hollow will be let out forcing Calliay into a full Hollow form unable to turn back to her shinigami self until the jewel is replaced. Which only Yarru can do.
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 10:18 am
[Du to information I was unaware of popping up the Bio(s) have been changed the originals if they will ever be needed are in the quote bubbles below.] Bio 1 Calliay used to be a normal member of the 13 divisions, even rose to Captain at one time. Not to mention a thing she’d had for one of the old members of the divisions. But something happened not but a few years ago and she vanished. See a long, long time ago she escaped Aizan’s experiments on Vizards and fled to the human world, where she fell in love with a human and had two children. Problem was an Espada was sent to find her and killed them. Calliay lost to her hollow side and was almost completely destroyed by it. But from spending so much time with her, her husband Yarru, who survived miraculously, used a power gained form being exposed to Calliay’s spiritual power to long, to seal her memories away. Problem, her jewel, the thing that sealed her memories away, cracked in a battle and then over time her memories returned. Lost to her misery she left the seat of captain and vanished. Now she’s back, but something seems off about her. Her hollow side which had been sealed for so long is raging to get out and its hard for her to fight it. Not that anyone in the soul society knows of it, it’s a well kept secret of hers. Now she’s challenging for the 7th division captain seat and wont stop until she gets it. Bio 2 Calliay Ti was a normal soul reaper, negative the purple hair and golden eyes, until she was kidnapped by Aizan many years ago in his Vizard experiments, she was seen as a very good candidate for the experiment because her zanpakuto Kubomi re-to, was once a arrancar’s sword. The sword was injured during the experiments and decayed from an angel to a banshee, before Calliay escaped and fled to the human world where she met Yarru. The two got married and had two children, sadly they were not meant to be. Aizan sent an espada to hunt her down, and in doing so he killed them. Calliay lost to her hollow self and destroyed the espada, as well as the only just barely survived Yarru. But with his last bit of life he sealed away Calliay’s hollow self along with most of her memories and power. Returning back to the soul society Calliay quickly rose to Captain and fell in love with another soul reaper named Dakota, and the two consequently had a child. On a mission to the human world the jewel that sealed away Calliay’s memories was damaged and began to go haywire, sealing other memories, letting others out and so forth. Completely lost to the jewel’s power and the escaping hollow that took advantage of it Calliay fled the soul society fearing she’d lose control and kill many. While she was gone she developed a method of stopping the jewels sporadic memory toying. Unfortunately this means most of her memories over the last hundred years are fuzzy or completely sealed. But feeling she had enough control back to handle the hollow inside her she’s returned to the soul society to take back a Captain seat and become a soul reaper once again. Problem is, she’s got no idea she’s got a kid much less that Dakota sold him for ice cream. That little bits not going to end well for Dakota when she finds out. RPC 1: Original RP Name: Calliay Ti Age: over 200 looks 19 Height: 5’9” Weight: 128lb Occupation: Vizard | Soul Reaper | Captain of 7th division Appearance: Tanned with Purple hair to her waist and gold eyes. Zanpakuto's Name: Kubomi re-to Zanpakuto Spirit's Bio: Once a beautiful angel now a ugly banshee, hollow song is Calliay’s Zanpakuto. She came to Calliay after being destroyed almost, the sword was originally an arrancars, oddly it became hers. Zanpakuto Spirit's Appearance: Decaying Angel. Zanpakuto's Sealed Form: Larger than normal white sword with a fan for the guard and red braid decorative rope to hand it from her right shoulder to her left hip. Awakening Call: Sing Shikai Form/Appearance: Giant iron fan 5’ tall, and ghostly banshee that hovers behind user. Shikai Ability 1: Wind Blades :: Uses fan to swing blades of wind at opponent. Shikai Ability 2: Hollow Screech :: Uses banshee to make loud glass shattering screams to distract opponent. Shikai Ability 3: Tornado Blades :: Uses fan to create a mini tornado of wind blades. Bankai Form/Appearance: Black wings (metal feathers) and claws, with large black star fans floating behind user. (3) Bankai Technique 1: Surround Death Sound :: Uses metal feathers to amplify a similar version of Hollow Screech to explosive levels. Bankai Technique 2: Metal Death :: Uses metal feathers as a shrapnel bomb by expelling the wings and sending the feathers flying out in all directions. Last ditch effort, as Bankai is lost afterwards and user is incapacitated. ~Speed Abilities~ ~Dashing~ A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks. ~Shunpo (Flash-Step)~ A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess Shunpo. Furthermore, it is a most fearsome mid-range/long-range speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. All in all, this ability can only be used by lieutenants and captains. For lieutenants it is nearly mastered, yet not perfected. Therefore, it is only of mid-range level 1. For captains Shunpo is of a level 2 maximum ability in which it is fully perfected for both mid-range and long-range. ~Air Walk~ Another skill, though not necessarily related, is the Soul Reaper ability to walk on air using spiritual energy. By collecting and solidifying spiritual particles beneath their feet, Soul Reapers can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. This particular ability can only be obtained from officer level. Furthermore, it cannot necessarily be used every so often, especially for officers. It is an ability that can only be temporarily used but cannot last for a very long period of time. However, for lieutenants, they can stay on air for quite a bit longer and for captains, it can be held for quite a long while considering the great amount of riatsu within a captain ranking individual. ~Captain Kido Spells Setting~ ~Hado~ 1. Shō (衝, Thrust) = low 2. Beniikazuchi (Crimson Thunder) = low 4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) = low 31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire) = low 32. Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash) = low 33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down) = low 35. Breaking Palm = medium 36. Kongōbaku (金剛爆, Adamantine Blast) = medium 37. Thousand Burst = medium 41. Roku Teikoku Touken (Six Imperial Swords) = medium 45. Chain Reaction = medium 52. Bakuhatsu no Chakudan (Detonating Impact) = medium 53. Big Hammer = medium 54. Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames) = medium 58. Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky) = medium 63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon) = maximum 64. Sōren Sōkatsui (双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down) = maximum 72. Burst Geyser = maximum 73. Burning Spirit = maximum 88. Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) = maximum 90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) = maximum 91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) = maximum 92. Gaki Rekkō (牙気裂光, Raging Light Fang) = maximum 93. Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm) = maximum Bio/History: Calliay’s story starts over 900 years ago when Aizan was captain of division five, she was a third seat, though she took a momentary Lieutenant seat just after Gin left. Her Zanpakuto was known as the most beautiful ever used, but also the only Arrancar sword ever made a shinigami’s, this took Aizan’s attention and he kidnapped her for his Vizard experiments because of it. She was turned into something more Hollow than shinigami during the experiments, and only escaped just in time to keep her free will, sadly her sword was injured and decayed into something ghastly. Calliay fled to the human world where she hid for fifty years, and during her last years she met Yarru, a human with a gift of helping others with traumatic things. Perhaps that’s why she took to him so, but the two got married and had two children, Minami and Hoku. Aizan sent an Espada after Calliay though, and soon it tracked her down, she wasn’t home when it attacked but to the best of her knowledge it killed Yarru and the twins. When she returned home she found them and lost control, blacking out she later learned that she’d killed an entire village, the Espada, and the stationed shinigami. The jewel on her forehead was put there by Yarru, who’s powers had grown I their ten years, he’d survived the attack but was killed by Calliay getting close enough to put the jewel on. It sealed half of her strength and her Hollow powers, though she was still able to use her Vizard powers if needed. Broken hearted and weak Calliay returned to the soul society to find that Aizan was gone, after a while of working she built up enough strength to take on higher seats it took a while but she made it to Lieutenant of the third division under Captain Sai Takashi. Which is where she met an Espada named Dakota, apparently the Captain and Espada were close. Though at first she’d pretty much hated him the two ended up falling in love, even through the suicide he committed to become a soul reaper and the appearance of Calliay’s thought to be long dead husband Yarru who’d become an Arrancar. They ended up having a child, but Calliay died in birthing, when her heart stopped the jewel broke and a fail safe of Aizan’s kicked in letting the full Hollow out and reform in Huaco Mundo. It took a while but the Hollow Calliay rose to Espada level and devourer enough Hollow’s and spirits to heal Calliay’s shinigami body and resort back to her Vizard self. Oddly enough the jewel mixed it up and her full Hollow form was sealed away inside Kubomi re-to’s inner world where it was locked up, with Calliay and her Hollow separated almost completely the jewel went a little haywire with nothing significant to seal, so it’s started sealing and unsealing memories randomly. So consequently she believes she’s only been gone a few months on a mission and has no idea she’s had a child. Much less that Dakota sold him for ice cream. The jewel on her forehead is cracked from the strain of separating and near permanently sealing Calliay’s Hollow self away from her. While blood usually repairs the cracks, this one keeps coming back if she doesn’t keep blood on it regularly, and if it brakes completely the Hollow will be let out forcing Calliay into a full Hollow form unable to turn back to her shinigami self until the jewel is replaced. Which only Yarru can do.
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:55 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:55 pm
Well the I like the RPC Zee it is great but there is only two real small problems and the other one is more of a personal feeling.
1. Just be more descriptive, the attacks good but they are too vague so people start coming up with ideas and stuff then next thing you know someone is gonna call it a Godmod ((for example: "Wind Blades : Uses fan to swing blades of wind at opponent." it is a good attack but you said blades of wind shot out, when you have the word "blades" alone with no limit on it so you can shot a 1000 blades with one swing that seems to be a bit to powerful for a shikai attack as well as it is Godmod.))
2. A Captain can only have a max. of 24 kido spells and you have 27 so just change that.
3. This is my personal feeling but others may agree with me but I see a lot of potential in this RPC that it can even be stronger or even just keeping the same attacks but just make them more stronger because even the attacks themselves have potential to really be a stronger version of themselves.
So as the same offer I gave to Music when I judged his, if you want I would be most gladly do the same offer that I gave to him ok.
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 7:16 am
ok, I'm going to judge this cause Ace can't do it any more.
The first thing is that u can't surpirse Reaistu. I know I could change it for you, but yeah....
The second thing is what do you mean by up to 60 kido?
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 7:37 am
Sorry, my computer does that when I type one word wrong (Got a spell check on it) so if I try to type a word and I type one wrong thing, sometimes it’ll mistake it for me trying to spell something else and fix it for me. (Ex: surpress [One ‘P’ wasn’t typed in by accident and the ‘R‘ got hit twice (I do this a lot when typing fast T-T)] = suppress | but can come out surprise])
The 60 Kido thing is just a comparison I was using, I mean level 60 kido such as Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon), though its 63 I’m just using it also as an example. So anything you’ve got that can block Thunder Roar Cannon and down would be able to block the feathers no problem.
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 7:50 am
It's fine on the spell check thing. i understand.
Please reword that part about the blocking with kido.
Other than that, it looks good.
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 2:49 pm
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