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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 10:31 am

RP Name: Maika Tsunimori
Age: Looks 15 but actually 13,325 years old
Height: 5'5
Weight: 121
Occupation: Captain of Squad 12
Appearance: (ribbons Included)

Zanpakuto's Name: Kisu Doku (Posinous Kiss)
Zanpakuto Spirit's Bio: Kisu Doku was once a young girl who was a servant for a goddess, she was beatiful and worshiped to her hearts content, one day she beytrayed this goddess who's wrath turned her into a giant snake as punishment the people feared the girl and sealed her into the swords one representing her human half the other her demonic snake half, she was soon united with Maika where they fight along by side to each other to this very day.
Zanpakuto Spirit's Appearance:
Zanpakuto's Sealed Form:(acutally short bladed katanas (like soi funs)
Awakening Call: Dance Elegantly and Deadly, Shatter the diamond mirrors Kisu Doku.

Shikai Form/Appearance: Same
Shikai Ability 1: His sword breaks up into diamond dust particles that takes up a ten foot radius, DIamond dust particles are so small they can not be seen but if inhaled it can rips someone from the inside out, let alone cut if come into contact, but the down part is that diamond dust can not be moved unless wind is aphriated to the product.
but coated with a posion but if one does not breathe it in it slowly seeps in trhough the flesh of the opponent but this effect could also work on the user of the zanpakto (explained in 2nd ability)
Shikai Ability 2: Kiss: if one is cut by the diamond dust he may use this technique, this technique releases a posion within the body, At first his opponent don't feel nothing for the first five minutes, the poison start taking its effect then every 3 minutes after the first five minutes the person gets worse but only if they stay in the area for those extra minutes. Even if they get out of the area if they don't let their body take out the particles that is already in their body and they re-enter the area the time will continue where it last stop and the longer a person is in the area the longer they have to stay out of the area in order to completely make sure that the particles are out (as much time a person spent in the area they need to spend that same amount outside of the area).

Shikai Ability 3: This ability has no name and can be made without any effort, if one was to be standing in the right angle as the light shines down mirror images of Maika will expand outwards from his body making clones of himself.

Bankai Form/Appearance: Same
Incantatiom: Eternal Illusion Cast and Reflect,Bankai Technique 1: In a twenty foot radius a strong Illusion is cast and when one steps into the radius of illusion, 20 mirrors arise from out of no where and surround the opponent that show reflection of the person being trapped inside reflecting the opponent all over, the only way to get out of this technique is by destroing the mirrors but where ever the mirror is struck 20% less of damage is inflected on the person who cut the mirror or detroyed it let alone the mirror will revert into dimond dust and menvour back into its orginal course.

Bankai Technique 2: The mirrors from the first technique disngerate into the dimond dust that then releases all the posion which in one huge technique Maika preforms a giant kiss that hits everyone who is inside the radius of the dimond dust or has been affected by the dimond dust(including himself) using the rachi from the dimond dust and his own in one huge pulse.

~Speed Abilities~

~Dashing~
A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks.

~Shunpo (Flash-Step)~
A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess Shunpo. Furthermore, it is a most fearsome mid-range/long-range speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. All in all, this ability can only be used by lieutenants and captains. For lieutenants it is nearly mastered, yet not perfected. Therefore, it is only of mid-range level 1. For captains Shunpo is of a level 2 maximum ability in which it is fully perfected for both mid-range and long-range.

~Air Walk~
Another skill, though not necessarily related, is the Soul Reaper ability to walk on air using spiritual energy. By collecting and solidifying spiritual particles beneath their feet, Soul Reapers can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. This particular ability can only be obtained from officer level. Furthermore, it cannot necessarily be used every so often, especially for officers. It is an ability that can only be temporarily used but cannot last for a very long period of time. However, for lieutenants, they can stay on air for quite a bit longer and for captains, it can be held for quite a long while considering the great amount of riatsu within a captain ranking individual.

~Senka (Flash Blossom)~
Although Shunpo is connected with this ability, this technique possess a unique name and style of its own. This technique is known as Senka (闪花, Flash Blossom), a flash step combined with a spin to quickly move behind the enemy, followed by a strike aimed to destroy the saketsu chain and the hakusui soul sleep with a combination of two quick thrusts. This technique is one of the two, that Youruichi developed mixing Shunpo to complete its ability. Furthermore, only certain individuals, of high ranking captain level can possess such an ability.

~Utsusemi~
This technique is one of the most difficult speed abilities of them all. Furthermore, this is also one of the two, that Youruichi developed as well. It is the 4 ways of the Shihou through Shunpo which is also known as "Utsusemi". It's ability is a speed known to be so fast that the user leaves an afterimage of him/herself. Its affect is most absolute, superb, and flawless if ever fully perfected. And to be more specific, Utsusemi's speed is so fast, that the enemy can practically feel and touch the physical body of the afterimage and not even know the very fact that it is nothing more but an afterimage. Its very image can easily deceive the eyes of the enemy. This technique is very rare, thus few captains are able to possess such a flawless ability. Furthermore it is most lethal when combining Senka after Utsusemi is executed
~Captain Kido Spells Setting~

Kido:
~Hado~
2. Beniikazuchi (Crimson Thunder) = low
11. Tsuzuri Raiden (製本電, Bound Lightning) = low
38. Altar = medium
41. Roku Teikoku Touken (Six Imperial Swords) = medium
52. Bakuhatsu no Chakudan (Detonating Impact) = medium
54. Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames) = medium
88. Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) = maximum
90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) = maximum
91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) = maximum
93. Hyōga Seiran (氷河晴嵐, Glacier Vapor Storm) = maximum

~Bakudo~
8. Seki (斥, Repulse) = low
61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light) = medium
62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence) = medium
73. Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal) = maximum
74. Shisō Kekkai (四葬結界, Quad Burial Barrier) = maximum
77. Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Rickshaws in Silken Air) = maximum
78. 1000 Knives Torture = maximum
81. Danku (斷空, Splitting Void) = maximum

~Jokou~
80. Area of Silence = maximum

Bio/History: Maika was called on previous Captain Azuma Komagome to help him out with a project but his history is unknown from before, none the less he helped the captain aimlessly with any request the captain asked it was until they finished the project the captain was attacked by 2 espada and his efforts proved to be futile, so the soul society needed a captain just as smart as the least and can be proved to be better in battle as the last, The Soul Society had no choice but gave the Captains exam to Maika and he passed with flying colors, He took the job and is captain of squad 12 to this day learning and fighting for squad 12 and trying to bring it back from the previous death of it's past death of the last two captains.

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 9:02 am

What can I really say, the RPC is great, I love it and its well made. There only slight changes that needs to made because only that people wouldn't complain or say something stupid so no big drastic change just very tiny minor ones that is all.

1. "Shikai Ability 1: One of his swords breaks up into millions of diamond dust particles, DIamond dust particles are so small they can not be seen but if inhaled it can rips someone from the inside out, let alone cut if come into contact, but the down part is that diamond dust can not be moved unless wind is aphriated to the product." The only thing here that people will have problems with is that "One of his swords breaks up into millions of diamond dust particles" so instead of just saying that put "His sword breaks up into diamond dust particles that takes up a ten foot radius." then it would be perfect.

2. "Shikai Ability 2: Kiss: if one is cut by the diamond dust he may use this technique, this technique releases a posion within the body, that uses the one who got cut, rachi's,powers, pressure to collapse on himself, this technique is repeated on how many time the person has been cut or stabbed if one has not trained to hold agaisnt his power everything will collapse on him and his body will shut down aka die, but if one is trained it may take multiple kisses to kill the person using this posinous technique. Me personally have no problem with the poison because can do real ******** up things to people but others may complain so it is your choice if you want to make the poison do something else. What I do need to be added is a time length because not all poisons takes affect instantly and with this poison effect you really need a time length before it can take affect. The only reason why Suì-Fēng's poison took an instant affect is because remember she needed to strike a person twice and when she strikes twice the end point of the strike must be the same and not only that if she took to long for the second strike the first strike mark would disappear that is why it was instant, but yours is the opposite because once they inhale it it is in them. So the time length should be like "At first his opponent don't feel nothing for the first five minutes, the poison start taking its effect then every 3 minutes after the first five minutes the person gets worse but only if they stay in the area for those extra minutes. Even if they get out of the area if they don't let their body take out the particles that is already in their body and they re-enter the area the time will continue where it last stop and the longer a person is in the area the longer they have to stay out of the area in order to completely make sure that the particles are out (as much time a person spent in the area they need to spend that same amount outside of the area).

3. "Shikai Ability 3: This ability has no name and can be made without any effort, if one was stadning just right in if one is standing just right images may be reflected through the dimond dust (aka clones (sight) etc...)" there is really no problem here but that the way how you worded it may confuse people. "Shikai Ability 3: This ability has no name and can be made without any effort, if one was to be standing in the right angle as the light shines down mirror images of Maika will expand outwards from his body making clones of himself." just put that and it would be perfect.

4. "Bankai Technique 1: In a twenty foot radius a strong Illusion is cast and when one steps into the radius of illusion mirrors arise from out of no where and surround the opponent that show reflection of the person being trapped inside reflecting the opponent all over, the only way to get out of this technique is by destroing the mirrors but where ever the mirror is struck 20% less of damage is inflected on the person who cut the mirror or detroyed it let alone the mirror will revert into dimond dust and menvour back into its orginal course." the attack is great but just put how many mirrors appear that is all, maybe say twenty mirrors and it would be perfect.