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PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 4:32 pm


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Name: Skothantos

Age:[Actual: Not known but is known to be old. No age is presumed as his appearance and origins is rare to many.] [Looks: Early 20's]

Birthday: October 4th (Date of birth not known)

Height: 7 feet

Weight: 200 ibs

Body Type: Mostly slender with some muscles

Hair Color: Predominately black with red stripes

Eye Color: Cat-slitted red eyes

Gender: male

Sexuality: bisexual

Personality:
Skothantos, or Thanatos in his Arrancar state, was once a cold, calloused, aloof and quiet, preferring to work by himself since that is what his rank demanded of him. Often keeping to himself, Skothantos often writes in his notebook of what happened and how he feels about certain situations. Ever since his self imposed exile, the mystery continues to deep with him. Why he gave himself the exile is not known, not even to him, but he does however feel he is too "incompetent" to be of the Espada rankings. As such, one of his goals is to regain his competence and learn his sense of honor and humility. Skothantos, or Skothy as he is called in his Gigai state, is quite the opposite. Humorous, perverted, and wisecracking, it is hard to believe he and his Arrancar self are one and the same, but this is done for disguise of himself.

Hollow Hole: The lung area

Broken Hollow Mask:
Details are included in the drawn pic

Race: Hollow

Species: Vasto Lorde Psuedo-Arrancar (if it is allowed, since Starrk and Lilynette were that)

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Rank
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Division: Four

Seat: Second Lt

Squad Ability: none

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Hechizos
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Sacrificatorio
Guadana

Elemento
Resbalar

Maldición
Reanimacion


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Hollow Abilities
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Standard Cero
Gran Rey Cero
Cero Oscuras (while released)
Bala
Pesquisa
Hierro
Sonido
Air Walk
Garganta

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Zanpakuto
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Zanpakuto Size:
Length: 9 and a half ft (blade), 11 ft (handle)
Weight: 225 ibs
Width: 5 and a half ft
Thickness: 90 kilograms (blade), 40 kilograms (handle)

Zanpakuto Guard: Discarded and not known

Zanpakuto Sealed (Sword) Form:
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Zanpakuto Type: Umbrakinetic (shadow manipulation)

Zanpakuto Name: [Name: Siniestro Seagador] [Meaning: Dark Reaper]

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Sealed Form
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Sealed Ability:
Intense Shadow Manipulation: Capable of moving, bending, and creating shadows for many purposes such as manifesting an attack or weapon (he can only make throwing knives and shadow blast type attacks) and camoflauge.

Sealed Attack One: Shadow Strike
Description: A quick slash of the blades slicing through the ground that forms a blast of darkness. It creates a blast radius smaller than a Cero, but is still equally deadly in that it is backed by Skothantos' umbrakinetic powers.

Sealed Attack Two: Sin Harvest
Description: Skothantos' ability to call down a strike of fireball-like bombardments from 10 ft above. These bombardments are not heat seeking missiles and only 7 are dropped, but do explode upon impact.

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Reserreccion
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Reserreccion Form:
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Reserreccion Release Phrase: "Overshadow...Siniestro Seagador"

Reserreccion Weapon: Physical weapon
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Reserreccion Ability:
Instanteous Teleportation
A faster means of transportation than Sonido in that Skothantos can appear just about anywhere his eye sight can see. This ability can be in five minutes after use.

Reserreccion Attack One:
Bolts of Doom
Description: Skothantos unleashes a barrage of 12 lightning-like bolts of darkness from the palm of his hands. These are like heat seeking missiles but they explode on contact. Once the bolts of lighting gets at least within 10ft of an enemy the bolts loses the heat seeking part and just be traveling normally.

Reserreccion Attack Two:
Tainted Auspex
Description: Skothantos can only create up to 3 trap on the ground at a time and uses it as a device to attempt a trap but he can only set a trap every 5 minutes . It can only trap to immobilize the opponent if stepped upon and the trap's effect only last a minute while the victim is trapped. There is only a 25% chance for the opponent to actually step on the trap so the foe must use the "Random Number" 1-100 and if the number is 25 or less the person is caught in the trap but the more traps that is on the ground at once the percent goes up by 25 for each additional trap making it easier to trap the opponent.

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Second Reserreccion
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Reserreccion Name: "The Prince of All Grim Darkness"

Reserreccion Form:
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Reserreccion Weapon:
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Reserreccion Release Phrase: "Siniestro Seagador's Might...Segunda Etapa..."

Reserreccion Ability:
Berserking Void
Description: Skothantos undergoes a violent fit of rage and he is heightened for a short time in a total of 7 posts while activated, thus doubling Skothantos' strength.

Reserreccion Attack One:
Void of Chaos
Description: "Skothantos creates a dark portal in front of him and attempts to draw his opponent in and assimilate them into himself to gain power. The Void has trapped souls and corpses that attempt to grab its target, but its range is incredibly limited. The suction range only reach out 50ft in a cone shape but the closer the person gets the stronger the suction is but if the opponent gets at least 5 ft or less close to Skothantos and this wasn't used the attack can't be activate until the opponent is 6ft or more away from him. Once sucked in the opponent is instantly spit out after a few seconds but the opponent's speed is half while their destructive power is cubed and is transfer to Skothantos for only 10 minutes. He must stand completely still to let the portal continue to suck until getting getting the opponent but once he moves the attack is cancel as well as he can only use this attack once every 5 minutes but while up even projectile attacks gets sucked in but he gains nothing from them only when the portal sucks in a person. Also, the attack can drain Skothantos of his Berserking Void ability if performed wrong, such as it being used for too long or if the opponent escapes its clutches and suction.

Reserreccion Attack Two:
Grim Scythe
Description: Skothantos' most powerful of all attacks. He creates a large set of four scythes, making an eight pointed, intersecting set of arrows. When Skothantos charges them completely, he unleashes them all and uses them as interceptors to corner his opponent into a quarter to unleash the explosion. It can be destroyed to disrupt the attack.

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Other
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Items:
Notebook
Aviator glasses

Misc:
Human Theme
Arrancar Theme
Arrancar Fight Theme
Arrancar Fight Theme 2
Arrancar Fight Theme 3
Resurreccion Theme
Resurreccion Fight Theme
Resurreccion Fight Theme 2
Resurreccion Fight Theme 3
Resurrecion 2 Theme
Resurreccion 2 Fight Theme
Resurreccion 2 Fight Theme 2
Resurreccion 2 Fight Theme 3
Detailed pic of Skothantos
2nd detailed pic of Skothantos
Unmasked Resurreccion Pic
Unmasked Resurreccion 2 Pic

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Biography
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Many years upon years ago, Skothantos was a Vasto Lorde and somehow managed to rip off his mask, naturally, but still underwent the Artifical Arrancar process to gain more power, since his "transformation" was accidental. The mask he wears is not his, instead it is made of fragments he pieced together while facing against a Vasto Lorde that was far more powerful than him and wears it as a reminder of his victory. To this day, he prides himself with being a Soldier-Captain, but his pride has dwindled over the years due to his self imposed exile. Many of the reasons why he left the ranks is not known, but one reason that is clear is that he feels guilty for his "incompetence" and wishes to restore his sense of honor and become humbled. Ever since his exile, Skothantos has underwent a strange transformation in character, becoming a lot more like the people in the World of the Living, even learning to be like them in many ways, believing himself to be a human. Still, he has not forgotten his "misfortunes" and wishes to one day return when the time is right for him to do so.
Other:
Skothantos has an obsession with the "Goddess" Razgriz, her poem, and her song.
Skothantos has four forms of inner chaos that tempt him to do evil and they usually win.
PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 9:25 pm


I love the RPC and it is good, the only real problems here is that you need to add details and only make three changes and that is it.

Changes need to be made:
Well in this guild all the Arrancars joined the Seireitei so there are no more Espadas, basically your ether Solider-Captain Shinigami or Soldier-Captain Arrancar. So where you put "Exiled Espada" next to Division and Seat is not allowed so you need to sign up to one of the Squads and once you get accepted put that Squad Number for you Division and whatever seat they put you as just put that rank for your Seat.

For the squad ability as of now new RPCs don't have a Squad Ability until they complete the training from the that they are in for that Squad Ability so the Telepathy has to go.

Things that need to be detailed in:
These are the things that you need to explain in details on how it works, what does it do, what is the limit if it needs it, and how long it last as well as the cooldown before using it again if it is a lasting type of effect.
1. "Sealed Attack One: Shadow Strike"
2. "Sealed Attack Two: Sin Harvest"
3. "Reserreccion Ability: Instanteous Teleportation"
4. "Reserreccion Attack One: Bolts of Doom"
5. "Reserreccion Attack Two: Tainted Auspex"
6. "Reserreccion Ability: Berserking Void"
7. "Reserreccion Attack One: Void of Chaos"
8. "Reserreccion Attack Two: Grim Scythe"

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Nightbringer Duskcrawler

PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 9:28 pm


I had a hunch I needed to go in depth, but I ignored it
Anyways, may he still be an Exile of sorts?
PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 9:45 pm


Its ok but you can still say that was an Exile Espada in the bio but the RPC has to be in a squad and stuff but as time go on we may open a new forum for RPC's can go to if they left the Seireitei so that the RPer still has a place to post and be active but for the time being your gonna need to choice a squad and get a rank ok

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Nightbringer Duskcrawler

PostPosted: Wed May 18, 2011 9:47 pm


Okay I understand. His exiled scenario, I guess, can be done in RP if need be to add detail to everything that happens, even though that sort of kills the mystery behind it, but everything gets revealed inevitably.
Anyways, everything is edited and I have removed the "Espada" position and replaced it as necessary.
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 1:41 pm


Sorry about last night I fell to sleep but lets get back so that we can get you to RPing ok. smile

The descriptions look great and I can see where so that part is perfect but I still had to read it over just to make sure everything was ok but as I see everything is good but there is some things that needs a little slight adds because some people still will consider them a slight godmod or to confusing to understand but I will give you suggestions that you can use for the adds if you want but trust me there will be reasoning for the suggestions.

Suggestions:
1. "Reserreccion Ability: Instanteous Teleportation- A faster means of transportation than Sonido in that Skothantos can appear just about anywhere his eye sight can see." this is good and you don't need to change it but at the end of it you should add "This ability can only be used once every five minutes." The reason why I said that because remember Sonido is all about your running speed so it uses barely any reiatsu but teleportation on the other hand is the opposite because it uses lots of energy so a person can appear somewhere else without moving so if you use it to much you will drain your reiatsu faster than usual so to prevent that you add that sentence at the end as well as this will be less people saying something ok. The reason why I said minutes and not post because in this guild in the Rules a minute equals one post.

2. "Reserreccion Attack One: Bolts of Doom
Description: Skothantos unleashes a barrage of 12 lightning-like bolts of darkness from the palm of his hands. These are like heat seeking missiles but they explode after a given time and stop locking on."
perfect attack but only one problem is that this attack is an auto-hit because this one thing you put "These are like heat seeking missiles" by saying that it made it an auto-hit and we don't allow auto-hits so there is two things you can do you can take away the heat seeking part completely or you can have your attack say this "Skothantos unleashes a barrage of 12 lightning-like bolts of darkness from the palm of his hands. These are like heat seeking missiles but they explode on contact. Once the bolts of lighting gets at least within 10ft of an enemy the bolts loses the heat seeking part and just be traveling normally." ether one of those two would not make the attack an auto-hit and it would be ok.

3. "Reserreccion Attack Two: Tainted Auspex
Description: Skothantos creates a trap on the ground and uses it as a device to attempt a trap. It can only trap if stepped upon and the trap is stopped after 1 post while the victim is trapped."
this is great but this attack is the kind of a attack that is a little difficult to try to word to make understanding so let me give you my suggestion that would help. First the question that would come up is that "What does the trap do?" but I am guessing that the trap immobilizes the opponent but your gonna have to state that then after you state it this attack is a chance thing so to make it fair we use the "Random Number System" so that their would be no problems of any of the sort. So to make sure that attack passable here is my suggestion what it should really say and it might be a slight better as well "Skothantos can only create up to 3 trap on the ground at a time and uses it as a device to attempt a trap but he can only set a trap every 5 minutes . It can only trap to immobilize the opponent if stepped upon and the trap's effect only last a minute while the victim is trapped. There is only a 25% chance for the opponent to actually step on the trap so the foe must use the "Random Number" 1-100 and if the number is 25 or less the person is caught in the trap but the more traps that is on the ground at once the percent goes up by 25 for each additional trap making it easier to trap the opponent."

4. "Reserreccion Ability: Berserking Void
Description: Skothantos undergoes a violent fit of rage and he is heightened for a short time in a total of 7 posts while activated."
it is great but the one problem is that it brings up the question, "What happens in the Berserking Void?" so I will suggest this we all know berserkers right so they are well known for their brute strength so lets add this at the end of it "Skothantos physical strength doubles."

5. "Reserreccion Attack One: Void of Chaos
Description: Skothantos creates a dark portal in front of him and attempts to draw his opponent in and assimilate them into himself to gain power. The Void has trapped souls and corpses that attempt to grab its target, but its range is incredibly limited."
well first let me give you my suggestion on what it should say for it to be passable it won't cause problems then after I give you the reason why. If it would of said this "Skothantos creates a dark portal in front of him and attempts to draw his opponent in and assimilate them into himself to gain power. The Void has trapped souls and corpses that attempt to grab its target, but its range is incredibly limited. The suction range only reach out 50ft in a cone shape but the closer the person gets the stronger the suction is but if the opponent gets at least 5ft or less close to Skothantos and this wasn't used the attack can't be activate until the opponent is 6ft or more away from him. Once sucked in the opponent is instantly spit out after a few seconds but the opponent's speed is half while their destructive power is cubed and is transfer to Skothantos for only 10 minutes. He must stand completely still to let the portal continue to suck until getting getting the opponent but once he moves the attack is cancel as well as he can only use this attack once every 5 minutes but while up even projectile attacks gets sucked in but he gains nothing from them only when the portal sucks in a person." it would be passable because this is one of those attacks that is somewhat Godmod in itself and mostly everyone will say Godmod so to make something like that passable your gonna need a lot of down sides to it but reasonable ones not crazy ones so that no one can say anything about it as well as with attacks like this you need to be very descriptive and that was lacking as well.

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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 2:50 pm


Its alright. I fell asleep too so it doesn't bother me.

Everything's changed and description is updated.
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 3:18 pm


Everything is great and I strike out the things you didn't achieve yet because your only a soldier so every time when you get to higher rank just unstrike the things that is open to that rank ok. But I look over your "Hechizo" I see that you have two things there that a soldier Arrancar can't use so click on this link "Maleficio List" and read it so that you can understand the hollow spells and know which ones are open to your current rank but make sure you read every thing as well these Hollow Spells are new so we will be adding more of them so just check in on the list to see if any new ones that has been added that you may want to add to your RPC ok.

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Nightbringer Duskcrawler

PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 3:21 pm


Sir, yes sir!
PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 3:39 pm


Well as of now the RPC has been Accepted so I am moving it to the Accepted form ok

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Nightbringer Duskcrawler

PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2011 3:48 pm


Oi, one last thing: where exactly do I start posting?
PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2011 9:22 am


I would like to apply for Captain of Squad 12 if that is possible.

Nightbringer Duskcrawler

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