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Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2017 8:25 pm
Where my characters will be
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Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2017 9:48 pm
Denied for two reasons. One being the obvious of failing to use the proper Profile layout for your character. Two is for very poor foundation of a biography and personality but foremost towards you character's poor history which needs better cultivation of intellectual imagination if you even have hoped of it being approved here regardless so you need to add more detail to your character as well as more solid context of this " Impending Doom" and have more or less likely to be shrugged off and denied as of the fact this guild needs a break from the constant enemy's they have consistently been facing as of late. . So there are your reasons for having your character being denied, I hope this helps you somewhat in what not to do.
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2017 2:54 pm
Fiendish Az Denied for two reasons. One being the obvious of failing to use the proper Profile layout for your character. Two is for very poor foundation of a biography and personality but foremost towards you character's poor history which needs better cultivation of intellectual imagination if you even have hoped of it being approved here regardless so you need to add more detail to your character as well as more solid context of this " Impending Doom" and have more or less likely to be shrugged off and denied as of the fact this guild needs a break from the constant enemy's they have consistently been facing as of late. . So there are your reasons for having your character being denied, I hope this helps you somewhat in what not to do. I assumed, it was late and I needed to get this typed out while I could with the intention of merging it over into whatever profile layout you use. Secondly, this character was used before in the past in the original kingdom key academy, which is where I extensively worked with Kalena, I was asked to come back before but was unable to, but now that I have the time I figured this would be the best time to do so. I will fix the character layout, but for the backstory I'm not entirely sure as how to flesh it out at the moment, considering Kalena's characters have obviously moved on and mine stayed dormant for an actual three years.
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2017 3:32 pm
Appearance Harvey is a tall, short haired blonde woman who stands at 5'7. Her small frame makes her nimble, and her height makes it quite easy to get into those hard to reach places. Her crystalline blue eyes are easily her best feature, able to garner the attention from anyone that passes her. Name●: HarveyGender●: FemaleAge●: Twenty-OneHomeworld●: Radiant GardenEthnicity●: AmericanFamily●: N/ASchool year●: Completed Mark of Mastery exam within another campus.Race●: HumanSexuality●: BisexualRelationship Status●: SinglePersonality●: Harvey is very headstrong, one could describe her as independent, though she is very caring and thoughtful when it comes to others. She’s rarely ever seen alone, always surrounded by friends whom she cares very dearly about. At a distance, her strong bravado and lack of communication could be seen as intimidating to strangers, but getting to know her is key to know her personally. Backstory●: Years ago (see original Kingdom Key Academy for further details) a mistake was made in Land of Departure which swept Harvey away into the land of darkness where she has resided and presumed dead for almost three years. Here, within the Dark World, Harvey met a teacher who was also trapped in the realm as well. It is here where she learned her mark of mastery, becoming a fellow keyblade master among the peers she left behind. Having finally been able to conjure a successful Corridor of Light, Harvey found herself back in the real world, and struggling to deal with how time had progressed without her. Mastery Status●: Keyblade Master Affiliation:●: Keybladers/Light Power(s)/Skills●: Able to produce advanced level magic, has an affinity for spell casting in general, tends to rely on it at a distance. Battle Style●: Harvey is exceptionally capable when it comes to spell casting, tending to rely on it rather then the traditional ‘hack and slash’. She can very easily produce higher level magic, making her stand out amongst her peers. She tends to fight at a distance, relying on magic over brawn, but when the situation calls for a head on fight, her long reach keyblade makes situations easier..)Element Type Alignment●: LightWeapon(s)/Keyblade●: Radiant’s Way: Radiant's Way was a keyblade bestowed onto Harvey from her late master within the realm of darkness. It's made up of fragmentary pieces of stain glass found only at Dive to the Heart, making it an exceptionally rare piece of weaponry. It features a long reach, with moderate strength and exceptional boost in magic that's capable of performing mastery level spells with ease. The keychain features a heartless symbol, soon to be eclipsed by radiant light. Likes ●: Her friends●: The ability to travel to different worlds/see rare sights, considers herself very lucky/gifted in this aspect.●: The wide variety of knowledge she’s come to learn about, and the vast knowledge she will come to know now that she’s back at the academy.Dislikes●: Overbearing people●: The Darkness●: (??? Not sure what to put for thisStrengths●: Magic based attacks●: Her friends●: KnowledgeWeaknesses●: The Darkness●: Commitments/Responsibilities●: Low health
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Posted: Fri Apr 07, 2017 6:41 pm
Approved. Now this is what I'm talking about, please forgive the rudeness I displayed in my prior post as I was under the impression that you were just another "SlotTaker" who joined the guild for the lolz or something, glad to see I was well wrong with your improved layout. Well hearing your context of your situation makes me wish I could have knew beforehand and dampen my criticisms and I'm rather impressed with how well you used what little context you have for your character and used them in the layout. Well anyways thank you for putting up with my harshness and I hope you have a plesent time KHA (Again lol).
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2017 10:14 am
Appearance Chase is tall, nearing 6’1 with shoulder length blonde hair and a fit physique, he uses his charming good looks to get what he wants, allowing himself to creep into the trust of others before his ulterior motives pop up. Name●: ChaseGender●: MaleAge●: Twenty-TwoHomeworld●: Destiny IslandsEthnicity●: AmericanSchool year●: Drop-Out: Schooling was completed, yet failed to complete the Mark of Mastery ExamRace●: HumanSexuality●: GayRelationship Status●: SinglePersonality●: Darkness has raked what used to be a caring young boy who was eager to learn into that of a hateful person who is hellbent on revenge. Where is a bubbly personality once was, a more cocky and sarcastic one has grown, melding Chase from a carefree adolescent to an adult full of hatred.Backstory●: Three years ago, after his best friend Harvey was sucked into the darkness, Chase began exploring less then appropriate means to bring her back. His descent into knowledge of the darkness brought him just that, and through learning this knowledge a small dot of darkness on his heart formed, and continued to grow substantially as he prepared through schooling for his mark of mastery exam. However, it was this darkness that brought about his undoing. While in the middle of the exam, the darkness lying dormant in Chase’s heart awoke, killing two of his peers in the process. It was this accident that brought a change in him, and his banishment from the school only aided in his descent into the darkness itself. Now, years later, he’s something to be feared, popping up occasionally to stir the pot with his small army of heartless, waiting for the day his friend Harvey returns from her prison, waiting to enact revenge on what her indirect involvement brought onto him. Though completely corrupt with darkness, it hasn’t truly taken over him, his body is still his own, and his mind is still clear, it would appear he has some sort of mastery level control over it. Within his dark heart, lies a single remaining streak of light, seeking redemption.Mastery Status●: Keyblade Wielder: Through the accidental killings of his peers, Chase was banished from KKA, though he knows a great deal about keyblades, how they work, how they function, etc. he is not a keyblade master.Affiliation:●: Heartless/DarknessPower(s)/Skills●: Chase can enact an almost admirable amount of dark magic and darkness based attacks, he is something to be feared, as most of his attacks are capable of dealing out an almost critical amount of damage.Battle Style●: Chase’s battle style is very haphazard and could be deemed untrained, he attacks swiftly with his right arm, and though his keyblade is capable of dealing critical damage he can easily be dodged by the weight of it, leaving him susceptible to attacks from behind and to his left side. His specialty is ground combos, and will tend to wail on his opponent rather than calculate a weakness. Element Type Alignment●: Darkness
Weapon(s)/Keyblade ●: Dark Rapture:A long reach keyblade capable of deadly blows, what it lacks in magic it makes up for in strength, aiding in earth shaking ground combos. However, it’s weight is its downfall, disabling its user from quick turns or dodge related jumps or dashes.
Companion ●: Though he lacks a companion, Chase is able to conjure forth various forms of Heartless of varying degrees of strength and size.
Likes ●: Darkness ●: Heartless ●: Hurting others Dislikes ●: Light ●: Those who appose him ●: Those that threaten his well being Strengths ●: Heartless conjuring ●: Darkness/Darkness based attacks ●: Trickery Weaknesses ●: Light/Light based attacks ●: Those who wish to help him seek redemption ●: The darkness growing inside of him
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2017 10:15 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2017 12:37 pm
Approved. Keep in mind the guild is going to be on a break with dealing villain like character's and NPC's rather soon once the current threat is taken care of (hopefully for good), just a fair warning.
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2017 12:41 pm
Fiendish Az Approved. Keep in mind the guild is going to be on a break with dealing villain like character's and NPC's rather soon once the current threat is taken care of (hopefully for good), just a fair warning. That's fine, this is more a villain for Harvey anyway, just trying to tie up loose ends.
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