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 Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 1:08 pm
though we hope for promising years,
after shedding one thousand tears,
yesterdays sorrow constantly nears.
and while the moon still shines blue
by dawn it will be scarlet hue.
all people i will use
life and death is the only path they can choose
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Posted: Sat May 20, 2006 3:28 pm
Sweet. I like the imagery in your poem.
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Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 12:54 pm
I really like this. It honestly drew me in, not many short poems do that.
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Posted: Thu May 25, 2006 12:39 pm
*clasps hands* really?! it did? wow my poems are amazing *jumps* yay thanks so much
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