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 Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 5:29 pm
Some of us think of God and know he's almighty and praise,
Where others just think of their job and a pay raise.
Some of us know right from wrong,
But others just sing swearin' songs!
None of us are perfect,
None of us are true,
But believe in God and he'll be there when we're blue!
I may be one of those people, who may be swearin'
Or maybe one of those who are on the rim,
Maybe not sure if he's true or not.
He's like a fairy tale, perfect beyond compare,
But people like him, he's truely rare!
When you were younger you were told that God is the only one,
Yet you go worshiping celebrities,
And you wannin' go kissing with your Dad's co-worker's son!
But once in awhile you gotta think of him,
And know he forgave our sins,
Or maybe you'd just like to go down to h*ll,
That's horrible and gruel like a prisoner's cell.
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Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 10:35 am
You are a good writer, you should write more poems!!! biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 1:39 pm
It's nice, but may I suggest making it a song?
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Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:29 pm
What if you call it "Some of Us"? It starts off your poem anyways and people would have to read it to find out what it's about. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2008 5:46 pm
You should call it : he's like a fairytale
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Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:25 pm
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