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 Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 9:50 pm
Child come and play with me.
Child won't you come and see,
The lights that shimmer 'round the tree?
My sisters dance upon the fern.
Watch them swirl and watch them turn.
They dance about like fireflys, into the night and in the sky.
Child won't you play with me, the Fairy of the Midnight Sea?
So, what do you guys think?
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 7:25 am
its a pretty little limerick and it has a nice rhyming scheme.
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:15 am
thanks a lot! The first line just kind of popped into my head and when I wrote it down the rest of the poem just flowed out too! ^_^
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 5:23 pm
What a pretty poem! On scale on 1 to 10 i would rate it a 9.5 (.5 subtracted cause it's so short.... ninja )
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 12:56 pm
whee I like the playfulness.
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 4:35 pm
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