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 Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 1:32 am
this is my Bleach fanfiction that I wrote.
Title: im not sure...
rating: 12+
couple: ichiruki obviously
length: 5 chapters ( this is only the first)
Status: finished
author: ME!
url: i hope it is okay if i post it here....
Summary: Rukia suddenly gets put under a curse that makes her afraid of…well.. Everything. But Ichigo is there to help her. And what happens when Renji enters the picture?
Genre: humor/romance/action/angst
Disclaimer: I don’t own bleach and never will. But I do have bleach in my cabinet
Chapter 1: The Crybaby curse
Rukia Kuchiki was not afraid of anything. She fought hollows everyday and dosent even flinch at the sight of a tarantula. She was sound asleep in Ichigo’s closet when suddenly she woke up feeling uneasy. She shooed it off and went back to sleep.
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Meanwhile at a faraway place in the soul society, Renji was concocting up a smelly green potion. “ Once Rukia is afraid of everything she will cling to me for support.” Renji fantasized of Rukia clinging to him and Ichigo sulking in a corner.
Renji added the last of the ingredients and then chanted unfamiliar words. The foul liquid floated above the coffin and floated off into the distance, defying the laws of physics. The foul liquid floated above a sleeping Rukia and turned to dust. It landed on Rukia and dissolved into her skin. The stinging pain awoke Rukia with a start. Then she saw it. A black and hairy 4 legged freak. Rukia screamed and charged out the closet. She fell on Cone and awoke Ichigo with a start.
“ Rukia, what the hell!?” Ichigo exclaimed. “ S-sp-sp SPIDER!!!” Rukia yelled. “ Rukia shutup, you’ll wake the whole house. “ It was a spider! Ichigo kill it!” Rukia whimpered. “ Since when are you afraid of spiders!?” Ichigo asked. “ ICHIGO TURN THAT DAMN T.V. DOWN!” yelled Ichigo’s father. “ Sorry dad!” Ichigo lied.
Rukia stayed back, hugging Kon to her chest. “ Its my lucky day!” said Kon. Ichigo expected the spider to be big and poisonous. It was a thumb sized cricket actually. Ichigo killed the bug and threw it in the trash. Ichigo turned to Rukia, ready to yell at her. But her eyes were big and full of fear. She looked so adorable to Ichigo. “ Ichigo can I sleep with you just for tonight?” asked a fearful Rukia. “WHAT!?” Ichigo half yelled. “ Please?” Rukia begged. “ Fine okay!” said Ichigo. His faace was red as tomato soup. “ THANK YOU ICHIGO!” Rukia tackle glomped Ichigo and crawled into bed.
“Good night.” Ichigo said but Rukia was fast asleep. “ She’s asleep so….” Ichigo leaned in and gave Rukia a good night kiss on the forehead. Ichigo turned over and Rukia smiled.
A/N: tackle glomp: a hug were you tackle someone. This is the fluffiest thing I ever wrote………… review please!
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 10:34 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 5:10 pm
Erm...how did the liquid go from soul society to the real world so fast? Its pretty good but you need to be more descriptive in some areas, I can't wait for chapter 2 xd
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:30 pm
sorry people. i now realize that i didnt put enough detail. sorry! i already rewrote it so if you wanna see it just tell me mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 12:18 pm
umm... i think it was prety funny.. heh ichigo would be as red as tomatoe soup if she asked to sleep with him instead of her usual bed in da closet.. that sounds so weird...=_=...
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 8:29 pm
I'm overlycritical when it comes to fanfiction..... stare
So I will reserve my judgement.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 10:18 am
It was pretty good. As people have said it didn't have enought detail. evil
I really like it though. It has a really good story line.
Can't wait to read chapter two. mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2007 5:37 pm
i luv it and cant wait 4 chapter 2.
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 4:47 am
Aww That Was Really Cute! I Love Romantic Stories! heart Cant Wait For Chapter 2!~ biggrin
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 12:36 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:33 am
how cool! i hope chapter 2 has more detail, but all the same, i cant wait!
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