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 Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:18 pm
Wel, lately I've been working out this new story idea. Part of my inspiration came from a necklace that had guardian wings on it from a friend for Christmas. A few ideas started popping up in my head that had to deal with the necklace, but I ended up dismissing them since there was no way I could even write them into a story. After a few ideas, I finally thought of this one.
What if there were no longer humans, but instead there were hybrids? Half human, half wolf, there's a long list. It even includes the dragon and the phoenix.
Well, to start things off, the world is separated into five main clans each with smaller clans that deal with the power. They are: Canine, Feline, Avian, Reptillian, and Mythical. For the most part, the Mythical clan is in charge of the world. After years of the things being run by the Mythics, the Feline clan starts to get annoyed. Seeking help with the Reptillian clan, they try to take down the Mythic caln. But instead of going straight for the Mythic clan and start murdering others from each clan to rouse suspicion.
Finally, a war breaks out between all clans. Even the Feline and Reptillian clans ended up fighting each other. Who is able to stop it?
A small group(My characters are all mainly based off of friends.) consisting of a few from every clan learn of this before anything ever happened. They tried to warn others, but the ignored them. Now it's there job to stop it, with the help of the others who think the war is wrong. But...Is that even enough?
It's really just a basic story idea. I haven't gotten anything written down yet, but I hope to start soon. I already have some plans and twists for the story. And of corse, it will contain romance, tragedy, and a bit of humor. Any comments and suggestions are welcomed. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 10:26 pm
It sounds interesting. So pretty much, there's a band of kid leading a rebellion? Well, I can' say that hasn't been done, but your spin on it is... different, to say the least. I kinda like it. ^^
That little bit with the phoenix and dragon made me laugh. Did you know that the phoenix started in Chinese mythology, and it is the female verson of a dragon?
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 1:49 pm
Sounds cool, but I have a question: Why did the Feline Clan and the Reptillian Clan end up fighting each other?
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:18 pm
thats a nice idea, but you should have a secret clan of regular humans that had lived underground for millions of years, or something like that.
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 2:04 pm
MsMayfair It sounds interesting. So pretty much, there's a band of kid leading a rebellion? Well, I can' say that hasn't been done, but your spin on it is... different, to say the least. I kinda like it. ^^ That little bit with the phoenix and dragon made me laugh. Did you know that the phoenix started in Chinese mythology, and it is the female verson of a dragon? Since most stories are re-tellings os the same themes, the twist is all that matters. It IS an original aproach as far as I know and the story sounds interesting (even if it's just the basic outline so far)
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 5:19 pm
I like where this is going, but it needs fine tuning. Keep it up!
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Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 11:10 am
Just do yourself a favor and give each character a hugwe flaw that they must overcome.
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 8:58 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 8:48 am
I like it; it's certainly something I'd read. I enjoy novels about wars between nonexistent civilizations, so go for it.
Just one thing. Cause a little controversy.
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