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PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 7:09 am


I'd like some help with my story. You can find the sumary here, but it's not exactly the compleat version.

I really need help with choosing names for my characters. I'm a bit uneasy about giving them significant names, because they were named before they became gods. I'm also wondering if it's ok to leae important characters unnamed (if they aren't spoken to or of, is it ok not to mention their names?).

So far, the only character that actually has a name is one of the MC, the goddes that gets exiled, Moira. Her guardian is one of the characters I'm planing to leave unnamed.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:41 am


I don't see why you would have to name someone if your not talking about/of them, however if they are "important" characters then I would think you would at least mention them once...then it woud depend in what context you are mentioning them.

For example: Her mom, the ice goddess, would appear in her dreams at night, guiding her in her new powers.

She doesn't know her mom's name so how would you or the reader. Thus the name is left out, only the feeling that this is her mom that is helping her is conveyed to the reader. Hopefully, you understand that a little...

As for names, whew, that's a big task to ask of someone else. Usually my characters arrive shouting their names but when I don't get the name along with the character I tend to glance through baby name books at the checkout line or look through "Behind the Name" online until one of them just seems right or my character gets all excited about the name. Okay that was one long suggestion lol..hope it helps a little on the names.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 6:25 am


Thanks and yes, that's the same site I use as a name source.

There would be one more little thing. What would you find a good enough reason to have her come back to the city of gods? Her new gueardian is supposed to come after her to get her to come back. There is no prophecy involved and she doesn't wish for revange.

I was thinking of something along the lines of 'her clan can't survie without her presence for very long' (this is also the excuse I'm using for them not to kill her in the first place: if she dies, the members of her clan die as well and the gods would lose their status in the eyes of mortals)
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:20 am


Ok, now I have a lot of questions running through my head.

Why would her clan die (or disappear) without her presence in the city of the gods? Apparently her not being there until now has been ok, so what is so special about this particular time? Why do members of her clan die when she dies? Did this happen when other members of her family died or just because there is something special about her? Is she the last surviving member of her family?

If you have thought about all the background needed for this reason sounds reasonable, I guess. I think I would have to read it in context to be sure. Is it possible you can use a simple reason? Like, oh her mom is dying or in a period of her life where she wants to make up for not being there for her daughter's whole childhood so she has contacted the guardian to bring her home. Or, you talk of her not wanting revenge so whoever has done her wrong may not know that and now that she has come into her powers is scared so he/she sends for her to make amends. Conflict potential maybe there, also some drama if you don't let on right away that she really doesn't want revenge.

The easiest way to go may be that she just wants to see where she comes from, who her people are, and perhaps meet others like herself. When your an orphan, or adopted, you tend to have these questions about yourself anyway and if you get the chance to find out the answers you may lean towards going to the ends of the earth to complete your sense of self, no matter the consequences.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:43 am


It was one of the first things that came to my mind when I first plotted this story. The god is strongly linked to his/her clan and, when that certain god dies, the clan would eventually die out as well. The phisycal presence of said god is not that important, but when they die... That is why she has been exyled and not killed by the other gods: if her clan (or any other) dies, their status as gods fades in the eyes of the ever skeptical mortals.

I have mentioned once (but forgot to update it in my journal) that the gods have limited fizical existances. Their 'spirits' continue to exist, but their bodies eventually die, so they need to change bodies every 300 years or so. Said body must be of a direct descendent of the god for this to work (normally a sort of clone, but under special circumstances - the child). The goddess' reincarnation would thus be more human than the members of her clan (this is why she doesn't have her memories anymore) so curiosity about her past and real nature would be a good excuse for her to want to come back.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:41 am


Oh, well now that answers some questions. lol, you'll have to forgive me I'm not real good at remembering stuff so if you mentioned it before my brain didn't really think it was important enough to store. Happens with my stories too if I put em down and don't re-read them before starting to write again. I'll find myself saying stuff I already have or skipping so far ahead in the story that it doesn't make any sense at all.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 11:22 am


This story is getting stranger and stranger... I'm starting to think about it as my 'never written story' since I'm still stuck working out the bugs in stead of writing it.

I'm leaving Moira's guardian unnamed even if he is part of half of her memories. He's too important to her to remember as just a name.

I really need two names at this time: Moira's brother, the god of love, who has a very strange conception of 'brotherly love', and her avatar's new guardian. I have a long list to choose from and still adding.

It's also hard to figure out how much like our own world the humans' world should be. Most of it looks like 19th century Europe, while there are still areas that led primitive lives or have lived closer to the leading race and have a more advanced culture. If you can help with some links to useful sites about the period... it would be great.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 1:59 pm


grr...my explorer shut down just as I had 4 sites up but before I could post. Let's try this again.

Google "19th Century Europe" as you will know best what your looking for from the links that pop-up

18th and 19th century europe

Internet Morden History Sourcebook

19th century socialism

Map Room

gl

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