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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:49 pm
Now, the title may lead you to believe it is a rp about past wars. But technically, it isn't. Actually, its about WW3 and on. I'm gonna post what I have done for it. If you think its a good idea PM me, or just voice it here after I finished putting the information in...
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:50 pm
-Overview, will be more detailed when I make it (If I make a sub forum of it, if I don't...then it will probably be this exactly) -Blood Feud-
During the late 21st century, the third world war (also know as that last great war) ended. During this time, the countries formerly known as The republic of China, Great Britain, Germany and Japan became what was once considered Third world. The United States (Now known as Imperial United States) quickly aided their closest allies (Japan and Britain recieved over 150 billion dollars within the first two weeks of the War ending. Though, IUSA was relitivly unaffected, only a few border towns near Mexico saw any of the fighting. During this time, new weapons were seen as they were in every Great War. New weapons, such as the Pulse Rifle, the Plasma cannon and even the Railgun and Gauss gun's saw the battle field. The largest impact would have had to be the A.S.R [Armed Slave Regiments] Also known as Mecha years before. Unlike the comics drawn about them, they had simple mechanics, using the most basic controls to be controlled. Though, they provided as much cover as a tank. But with the added height they became icons of the new war. Though, they only were the icons because they were the new "Weapons of Power". Or so thought the civilian war. Unknowing to them, the armies had been using human sized A.S's, also known as Androids. Unlike Science fiction, they lacked the human appearance. Instead they were very much closer to their tank bretheren. They looked human in size, and stature. But lacked the facial features, the skin. They were known simply as "Droids" by the end of the war.
Twenty three years after the war, the automatically programed 'droids' had fallen into disrepair. Their pilot requireing brothers had been taken to museams. But the droids had been tossed into junk yards, trash pits. Even some where brought to the Middle East, and let loose in the deserts. The same happened in siberia, let loose in the snow lands. These droids, unable to erase the program to "kill" instead rewrote it to "rebuild". When a piece of their arm fell off, they would replace it with what they could find. The scientists who created them could never have imagined what they had created. They droids actually took in parts of their enviroments. Merging with them. And again, during the late 22nd century, they were saught out for their fighting powers. Not by large armies, but instead by the Rebels, now fighting the Empire (IUSA with the Russian Coalition,and the New Peoples Republic of Asia [Asia being everything but Russia in that continent, IUSA controlling all of Europe, and most of Africa. Also took S.A without a problem.) The middle east, some of Africa, and small patches of Europe are left untouched.
When the rebels discovered the Evolving droids, they studied them first by afar. Then they went into the small patches of Droid lands. They had devised their own goverments, their own villages and Higharachy. Even the droids in the trash pits had done this. Now so far from their original type, many of them where given new names. The most describing was the 'Junker-bot' Basicly the droids that lived in the Junkyards. Many of their parts now being old materials. Even containing some archaic machinery such as Stereos, or toasters. The rebels tried to interact with the Droids, who seemed to not mind. Until the rebels started bringing weapons into the pattern. The first droid to kill a rebel was located in the Sahara. The empire was oblivious to these droids, who had been so neglected, they were left out of every history book. Instead, only the ASR's were even remembered, and they were considered ancient. The Rebels learned that the droids reacted to weapons as a threat. And would kill those carrying them. They brought in engineers, and learned that the droids still had programs to kill, but over them were layers of other re-hashed codes. Many even having bits of intelligence forming. A new species had been created. - Again, the Rebels messed up. They had infact been able to find the problem codes. Giving the Droids freedom. But, that meant the Droids now were perfect killing machines, that would kill by their own judgment. Now even the empire saw the Droids as a Threat. They attacked the droid town in the Siberia. Killing over thirty droids (all from the last great war. The empire was unable to kill the New Droids)
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:51 pm
Much more will be added, including common weapons, clothing/armor and short back stories (aside from Droids, they have a long a** back story above...) The empire, a global power. Controlling almost all of the land in the world. They use high tech weaponry, and believe human power to be greater than Machines. So, they use no ASR, or any other form of Mecha. Rebels- A underground resistance, meant to fight the Empire. But, they found themselves instigating a war between Droids and the Empire. Droids- See above for full history.
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 2:53 pm
Alright, I got as much information as I have done here... So if you want to say "yeah, it looks good" or "It sucks" then go ahead. (Actually, I'd prefer an actual response, like with criticism and whatnot...)
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 8:20 pm
You need to work on your sentence structuring and grammar, they were the most glaring errors I saw.
Also, it would have been extremely difficult to hide the fact that the government used tank-like automatons to wage war. It would have required nation-wide censorship and the droids themselves would have had to kill every single enemy they came in contact with so that no information could have been passed along.
Also, why would the government drop the droids in these random places over the globe? If they had tried to keep them a secret, it would have been awfully reckless of them to just drop them here and there.
It's strange how the droids created their own hierarchy as well. To me, a civilization of androids would have a communism-like community with no one in power and everyone as a worker.
Why would the rebels bring weapons to the droids? Were they trying to convince the droids to fight the empire? Were they bringing the weapons as a security assurance in case the droids were violent? You may know this, but you never really explained it so you need to flesh this part of the story out.
Also, the last part of the post, how did they find the problem codes? How did they give freedom to every droid in the world? You made it sound as if the rebels screwed up the code of every single android on the planet.
You should also explain more of the anatomy of these new droids. If they're still based on computers and man made technology, a simple EMP could take them out and expunge them from the face of the planet. Or have they evolved past that point? Have they turned into something more organic?
It's a decent idea, but these little things you neglect to explain really make the plot questionable.
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 9:49 am
A lot of the idea is still in the works.
Also, the droids were not meant to be hidden, they simply did not gain any coverage, as they simply were not as "awesome" as the larger mecha, which were the tank-like ones. The civilians ignored the smaller droids, thinking them to be obsolete to the larger, stronger looking piloted ones.
The communist-like government makes sense to me the more I think about it, and that'd probably be changed to fit in.
The rebels brought the weapons into Android area's because they were trying to hide them from the empire.
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