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TsukinoShinobi
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 4:19 pm


I know that I was supossed to wait till we got a subforum up, but that won't be happening any time soon unless people donate like crazy. stare

Here's my faverite oc ever:

Name: Amami Mikazuki (last, first)
age: 12/13
hair: Brown
eyes: They change (it's all acourding to her mood!)
kekki-genkai: eight pointed star of the ten elements
family: older sister- Kimiko
her story: Mikazuki was just and ordinary girl, until Sasuke started walking behind her one Monday mourning. The next day it was Shino, then Neji, then Lee, then Kiba, Naruto, and finally Shikamaru. Then it started up again. Finally she confronted the "stalkers". Turns out Mikazuki was the "long-lost" heir to the Amami clan.

That Friday, she meets her sister, Kimiko and is assigned to the team of Usagi, a young taijutsuist with a big mouth and an even bigger brain, and Toramaru, a shy boy who let's his sword do the talking.

A few months later, Mikazuki become's gravely ill, as it turns out, she's the jinchuriki for the three-tailed fox: Hikari-no-Sora, who's chakra was keeping Mikazuki from dying. Once every twelve to thirteen years, Hikari has to rest and replenish her chakra for about a week or so. Despite orders to stay in bed, Mikazuki trains with Kankuro to learn how to become a puppet master.
(That's all I got on her story so far, here's her jutsu)

Tai: Maiken no Kaze, Wind style Dancing fist: this taijutsu relies on speed and accracy to take down opponents

Gen: Yaoi distraction technique: pretty self explanitory

Nin:
Soul puppet jutsu: allows user to control their opponents body and mind
plus kekki-genkai abilities
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:47 pm


I personally am not really into OC's, though I like your characters Yaoi distraction thing. >w< I would be pwned by that jutsu. Who wouldn't? 4laugh

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 3:11 am


Mizu and I came up with it together, so we both use it.
Here's one of my ocs:

Name: Aichaku, Mizu Tenshi
age: 12/13 before time skip, 15 after time skip
hair: brown
eyes: black
Kekki-genkai: Siren Blood abilities (can't die of unnatural causes, has a second her inside her self and some other things
family: Orochimaru (father, I know creepy), Aichaku Megami (mother, deceased), Kabuto, Kin, Zaku (they did NOT die) and the Sound five (adopted siblings) Kakashi and Iruka (gaurdians and big brother figures).

Her story: Mizu Tenshi is treated almost the exact same way Naruto is. It's because of her father's awful deeds and herheritage on her mother's side. Her siren half, known as mizu orochi (or just Orochi) must take control of Mizu's body every so often to feed on the breath (which contains vital mental energy and physical energy used to make chakra) from the young men and boys of Konoha.

During the forest of Death exam, Orochi is practically starving and goes after the first biy she sees, Gaara. After feeding off him, Orochi makes a statement that confuses Gaara:

"You are not a demon, you are an angel whose gifts are misunderstood."

Later, During the War, Megami is temeraily brought back to life by her fox compainion, Kamikaze, mother of Mizu and Orochi's foxes: Sasu and Naru. She helps Mizu and Orochi get their father "back" by teaching them the hand signs to the "Spiritual Light Art Hikaru". And orochimaru becomes a loving father to not only Mizu and Orochi but the other sond ninja too.
(Sorry, that's all i got at the moment)

Ninjautsu:
The spitual element arts: Fire art Kurenai, Water Art Aoi, Earth Art Kurogane, Wind Art Miyabi, Thunder Art Raijin, Ice Art Tori, Dark art kage, and Light Art Hikaru

Taijutsu:
Maiken no Mizu, Water Style Dancing fist: this version of Maiken relies on grace and the ability to fluidly ,ove from one set of strikes to the next.

Gen: none...

((If you see any simularities in me and Mizu's characters, that's because we use each others ideas in our own way. We work together to make our plots and our characters.))
PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 6:47 pm


Name: Makenshi
age:7000
hair:white
eyes:green
kekki-genkai:hell's judgement
family:younger sister (Wynn) and younger brother Madoushi
his story: He's a half-demon. He went through pain and torture starting at the age of 6.The kids at his school would stab him, beat him, scare him, and ridicule him. Even the teachers did it. The only reason he didn't die was because his demonic powers let him regenerate.

When he was 11 the humans attacked him and his family. His parents sacrificed themselves so that he could get his brother and sister out of there. After that he and his brother were filled with hatred toward the humans and went on a 6889 year-long "crusade " to eliminate the human race.

When he was 6900 years old he fell in love with a human, ending his hatred. But his brother still hated them and felt that his brother had betrayed him and started attacking him. Eventually one major battle his brother tricked Makenshi into killing the woman he loved. He and his brother haven't spoken since.

He eventually found himself in konoha 7 years after the attack from the sound and sand.

Tai:shell arm: a giant titanium shell of armor appears on his arm

Gen:soul piercer jutsu: He can look into his opponents mind and over exagerate their worst fears.

Nin:chaos cannon: his right arm turns into a giant black cannonwhich has enough power to destroy all of konoha, he has to use his very life energy to fuel every shot. ( he has only used this jutsu once, and it nearly cost him his life)

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 10:06 am


my fav oc is the one i created

name: Uchiha Hitomi (Hitomi means eyes)
age: 17 in the first story 19 in the second
hair color: black
eye color: black/ren (sharingan)
kekkei genkai: sharingan, mangekyo sharingan, tsukuyomi, and amaterasu, (they're all really kekkei genkai from the uchiha clan)
parents: Uchiha Sasuke and Uchiha, formorly Haruno Sakura
siblings- Uchiha Obito (older brother and heir to the Uchiha clan, currently hidding the fact that he's gay from his parents, black hair and eyes nickname- Obi-kun) Uchiha Mikoto (older sister, pink hair and green eyes. nickname- Mi-chan) Uchiha Taru (Hitotmi's twin brother, younger by 2 mins., Taru died at birth and Hitomi was responsible for it, this is how she came to possess the Mangekyo) Uchiha Inabi (younger brother by 11 years, twin to Ayame, black hair, green eyes, his greatest ambition is to beat Hitomi) Uchiha Ayame (Aya for short. Inabi's twin sisiter younger by 5 mins. Pink hair black eyes) and finally Uchiha Fugaku, (littlest Uchiha sibling, he's only and infant, pink hair and violet eyes he get's from his grandmother on the Haruno side.)

about: Uchiha Hitomi is the ANBU medical Cheif of squad three with teamates Uzumaki Ryuho (son of Hinata and Naruto), and Aburame Zai (son of Temari and Shino) they've been together as a three man cell since their academy days. Hitomi is the Uchiha prodigy, on of of the ANBU missions she was on she was taken by the Akatsuki. Later she marries Uchiha Itachi her uncle...and has a baby they name Uchiha Shisui.


and that's Hitomi if you want to know more pm me and i'll give you the link!
PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 5:22 pm


Oh my gosh! Yaoi distraction! I know a lot of people who would pay you to use that technique.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 5:24 pm


Yoshiko Naru
Oh my gosh! Yaoi distraction! I know a lot of people who would pay you to use that technique.


I'd pay to get that technique used ON me! xd
PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:23 pm


this one i made up.

name: Nekoshi, Katrina(kat)[last, first] neko means cat and yes she has a cat
age:13(before time skip)
hair: black shoulder length
eyes: yellow
kekkei genkai: beast mimicry and such
for her cat
name: nina
age: 4
fur: all black not fluffy
eyes: green
her story: because neko means cat and inu means dog, her family hate the inuzuka family. she is forced to go on a scouting mission with kiba. she takes all her hate and anger out on him verbally. kiba does not respond to any of her taunts. then nina is killed by a rabid wolf. kiba protects her from the rest of the pack of wolves and almost gets killed when back up comes. she is eternally gratefull and even likes kiba now(like as in love and kiba likes her too). of course their parents dont agree with them and they go through the whole romeo and juliet situation(without the death and the party)

jutsu:

-nin- hmmmm cant think of any for now i'll add some later.

-tai- hidden lotus, primary lotus and reverse lotus

-gen- paranoia indusion jutsu(i made it up)

that's all i have for her for now blaugh

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 8:56 am


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Yoshiko Naru
Oh my gosh! Yaoi distraction! I know a lot of people who would pay you to use that technique.


I'd pay to get that technique used ON me! xd

So would I!!!
PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 9:06 am


Smexy Besteys!!!
Aqua Heart Alchemist
Yoshiko Naru
Oh my gosh! Yaoi distraction! I know a lot of people who would pay you to use that technique.


I'd pay to get that technique used ON me! xd

So would I!!!


I third that!

TsukinoShinobi
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 9:13 am


i second that motion
PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:38 am


I would love to have the Yaoi distraction used on me. That person would become my new best friend.

I for one don't do OCs.

Yaoi Lovechild


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PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:48 am


Kakashisshurikansharpener
I would love to have the Yaoi distraction used on me. That person would become my new best friend.

I for one don't do OCs.

but OCs rock! you can like, create one that's just like you!
PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:44 am


smelyondra
Kakashisshurikansharpener
I would love to have the Yaoi distraction used on me. That person would become my new best friend.

I for one don't do OCs.

but OCs rock! you can like, create one that's just like you!


Most people call ocs based off the authors 'Mary-sues' though because they think the author's trying make themselves perfect. Which isn't always the case, but thats how they feel.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 4:04 pm


Aqua Shinobi Tenshi-kun
smelyondra
Kakashisshurikansharpener
I would love to have the Yaoi distraction used on me. That person would become my new best friend.

I for one don't do OCs.

but OCs rock! you can like, create one that's just like you!


Most people call ocs based off the authors 'Mary-sues' though because they think the author's trying make themselves perfect. Which isn't always the case, but thats how they feel.

i make ocs all the time and they are never perfect. i just like to write storied about a person that i make up.
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