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 Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 8:11 am
And so blindly I wondered the world with you.
I gave me to you.
My love,
My Heart,
My soul.
I loved you, but you did not feel for me back.
You reached into me and ripped my heart out.
And watched me bleed.
So intently you watched me wither in agony and misery.
This sick pleasure you took in so amused.
I did not share this joy.
Instead I asked "Why?"
and you said. "Because you deserved it"
And walked away.
I wondered forever with a hole for a heart.
I didn't have one anymore, you took it away from me.
I asked "why?"
And you gave me the same answer, "Because you deserved it,"
And I cried my tears of misery.
Of course they didn't mean much to you.
But it was all the reason I had to live.
I wondered the world without a heart.
Bleeding inside and I couldn't stop.
Dying little by little as everyone watched.
They asked me "why?"
And I said,"Because I deserved it"
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 3:09 am
Oh my gosh. crying
I loved it. It's so sad. It sent chills through my body. Especially when I read the ending.
*Claps loudly*
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 5:45 pm
*bows* thank you! It was how I was feeling lol.
but thank you! I appreciate it! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 9:26 pm
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 5:11 pm
Loved it... I envy those who can write poetry because I am not so good at that....
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Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 6:01 pm
Wow...so much hurt..yet such good poetry. The story you told, made me want to help you..Continue writing like this, you are very good at it. biggrin
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