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Um, OK. I'm putting up a lovely little angst realistic-fiction. I don't know how long it will be, but I have at least four chapters planned and two chapters typed.

Chapter One
Chapter Two - WARNING: This story was painful for me to write because it reminds me painfully of my relationship of me and my brother. It is also very bloody. You will read this one at your own risk.
Chapter Three
Chapter Four

Please leave your comments about it for me. I'll try to update it every Monday, but I can't say that I'll get it every week.

I have now decided to release every other Monday until I say otherwise. Ta!

Oh my. I almost can't say anything. D:

Really shocking. I'm hoping that she'll show more emotions in later chapters? The second was perfect. I suppose a detached narration would be perfect. [I dunno, never been there. xD;;]

But, maybe you should put more hints to the darkness in the first chapter. The turnaround seems to big... small, subtle hints, like the movie they went to see was a bloody horror?

Oh! and something about her not caring to call 911. "After all, they're dead already. What's the point?"

Yeah, that seems like quite a bit of criticism. xD;;; But, truthfully, I ADORE murder mysteries. And you know how much harder you are on things that you love, right?

♠I walked through the emptiness...♣

@ Domerin Thompson
Um... I'm sorry? I'll try to change the links.

#Everyone
If I ever get this thing done, it will be a miracle. I'm sorry that I can't put anything up because I'm brain dead, writing two other stories at the same time, and very busy. So, I will put it up as soon as I have finished completely.

♦... and found what I was looking for.♥