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PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 3:22 pm


Chapter One



It started with the funeral.

Well, of course, it didn't really; but at least the funeral I can still remember

clearly, something more than a series of fragmented images tumbling against

each other. There are a few cracks in the scene I hold in my head; fault-lines, where

someone's quiet words have slipped away, or a fleeting expression of some

faltering sentiment washed away by the smoothing touch of time. I will try

to recreate those, if there is an important gap, as best I can.


The floor was, let me see, carpeted, I think. Yes, it was carpeted in

something thick and red and expensive, soft stuff that smelled musty and

old, a little strange against the rest of the parlor, which stank of anti-septic.

Some mark of the past, no doubt; I still don't know who Alex's parents

were. He always shied away from the subject like a nervous horse. An old,

aristocratic family, probably, one marked with old money and older blood.

Alex was the dead man. Before, at the service, I had only been able to

stand a glimpse of his corpse. They had done up his face with too much

makeup, so that his lips were a little too red against a face that was a little

too pink, and lying in the black lacquered box, hands folded neatly on his

chest and face frozen in a disturbing smile, I remember he reminded me

most of a costly china doll. I stayed away from it during the rest of the

mass, and was quite relieved when they closed the casket.

Anyway; I was standing in the parlor, the high dark ceiling arching

above me, shadowed in such a way I couldn't quite make out the designs

carved into the smooth wood, though something about the angles and

edges that were highlighted by the low-hanging chandeliers suggested

rather gruesome countenances.

There was something distinctly awkward - more awkward, in any case -

about that reception. It's always awkward, of course, standing around

talking to those who are much sadder than you are [and someone always

is] for an hour while eating tiny sandwiches. But this particular one was

worse, partly because most of us didn't have a lot to say about him. When

you haven't seen a fellow for five years, it's hard to think of some suitable

story to tell.

Alex was never a sociable man. I had only been a school friend he kept in

contact with after our graduation, but even I had been invited, probably

more out of a need to fill a seat than anything. Most of the people there

were of the same breed, or else they were blond and angular aunts and

uncles and the queer swarthy cousins who hovered and buzzed like flies

around the other guests.

Guests: what a god-awful name for it. Guests want to be where they are,

or they did originally in any case, and there could hardly be a less

appropriate word to apply to these unfortunate souls, as they stood around

with small pale grimaces of embarrassment. It was absurd, watching them,

each moment a caricature of a theatrical funeral scene, and I would have

thought it immensely boring if it weren't for the stabs of guilt I felt every

time the thought flitted through my head.

It was near the end of the reception that his brother, Frank sidled up to me,

holding his bowler hat in his hands with an expression on his face that could

only be called gleeful.

'I understand you're open to the possibility of writing another book, Mr.

Grayson.'

I said something non-committal. Frank and I never got along well, even

before - well, that comes later. He was too much the rich kid then, a grown man at

forty, and still is, though he's used up most of his father's money

now, Lord knows.

He wasn't discouraged by my lack of enthusiasm, however.

'I have a proposition for you,' he barreled on, talking faster. 'I want you to

write a book about Alex's life.'

He had my full attention then.

'You want me to what?'

'Write a biography for him. Trust me, it'll be worthwhile.'

There was something quite greedy in his expression that made me suspect,

even then, that there was rather more to it than that. He took my silence

as a good sign, and continued, his voice high and tight with agitation.

'You would have full access to his possessions, his will, legal documents,

history, everything. But I want a complete and thorough biography in

exchange.'

What a project! I saw then how wonderful such a book could be, for

Alex was not an insignificant man, and there were

shady edges to the straight and narrow course of his life. Temptation stayed

my tongue, though I had intended to say no directly on principle. Instead, [and

indeed, I remember afterwards I was a little shocked] I blurted out two

unexpected words.

'Why not?'

Frank smiled smugly then, and that worried me a little, but I buried the

feeling under thoughts of getting a chance to poke around his old manor

and brushing off the vague shapes of his past.

In any case. He set a date - April 29th - for us to meet and settle the terms

of the contract. I shook his hand. His palm was slimy with sweat, and I remember

wiping my hand vigorously on a napkin to get the feel of it off as soon as he

was out of sight.

-

The next few days were insignificant. It was the meeting where events

were set into motion. April 29th: a grey day, with weather that was more limp

and damp than anything else.


I had intended to already be in my office when Frank arrived, but it was my

misfortune that the housekeeper, Millie, had caught a nasty bug and was taking

the day off, so I was swearing at my crumpled tie when the doorbell rang.

Giving up, I removed the tie entirely and answered the door. I must have looked

quite disheveled, without a necktie and the top button of my shirt undone and

no proper coat. Frank made no comment, but gave my attire a disdainful

look as he followed me up to the study.

As soon as I'd closed the door behind him, he started fiddling with the lock of

that ratty old briefcase of his. I think he still has it, even now. He had his oddities.

At length, he had out a sheaf of papers, which he laid on my big old roll-top

with a satisfied sigh.

'Sit, please,' I said as he settled down into my favorite chintz armchair

without so much as a glance in my direction. He must have sensed my annoyance then,

as he gave me a guilty sort of grin.

'Well, Edward. Let us attend to the matter at hand, hmm?'

'Quite.' Still disgruntled, I remember sitting in the lower visitor's chair and thinking

it a bad omen, somehow, that Frank, who was a good three inches shorter than

me, was starting the business meeting by staring down at me over his

spectacles.

There was little of note about the contract he had drawn up. The sum offered

as payment, however, was practically unheard of. A thousand crowns for a

new manuscript was quite ridiculous. Obviously, brotherly love was not the

motivation for this commission.
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2007 8:36 am


OMG!!!!! WHAT AN AWESOME STORY!!!

It's actually hooked me, and I can't say that for every book. I WANT to see what happens next.

exclaim exclaim exclaim heart

bluegray
Crew

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