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Sprockette

PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 1:40 pm


I hold your fragile little heart in the palm of my hand.
Petting it delicately to not bruise it or break it.
Smiling brighly almost excrutiatingly to show a love deep within my chest.
My eyes light a glow with a motherly glitter.
Laughing heartily as I lovingly think of you.

You could never hurt me,I reassured myself so proudly.
As long as your heart is in my palm.
And a forest burns in my eyes.
The glowing happiness turned to wicked fury in my underbelly.
I hold your delicate heart in my hand.

Pretty,pretty beating heart I held so dear,no longer still beating when I'm through with you!
And then a delicious evil coursed through me as I viciously crushed it in my hand.
Blood flowing freely like a river,I laughed joyously.

His betraying self dropped to his knees with his "lover".
"Please,please,please!" he pleaded cowardly, "Let my heart go! Let it go from it's vicious cage!" She cried along his side.
I pet his face with my bleeding palm.
Did you let me live when I gave you my heart? NO.
Letting me bleed and you watch so intently.
Wandering lonely and sorrowful.

So savagely I took my revenge and finally he asked "why?"
and I replied,"Because you deserved it,my dear"
PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 3:07 am


I liked "A Hole for a Heart" better.

But, this is very well written, and it's very good~!

heart ^-^ heart

Fierydingleberry

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XMaster_of_destructionX

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 5:59 pm


Very good. It makes you think about your past and the hurting you have done..Its flow is very sensual, and it makes you think you are the person, or you are there.
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