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Fierydingleberry

Hygienic Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Wed May 23, 2007 3:23 am


I walk up the staircase
So weakly
Of course I have no grace
I am the seed, not the tree

"You are young and foolish,"
A slap across my cheek
My body crashes into the tank of fish
"You're not strong, you're weak,"

He left me there dying
Because I was born
He left me there crying
Because my heart is torn

Blackness appears
Then so much sunshine
Sliding down my cheek, so many tears
A warm sensation that I'll be fine

An angel said, "It's okay,"
I looked around me
"That bad man is now away,"
He was not here for me to see

I looked down
Every feeling around me showered
I saw that town
"Daddy," I whispered, "You're nothing but a coward."
PostPosted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 5:50 pm


It's umm intresting, and very angry. It's not bad but I want to go read something happy.

Raijin91


Fierydingleberry

Hygienic Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 9:02 am


Raijin91
It's umm intresting, and very angry. It's not bad but I want to go read something happy.


I know it was horrible.

I've been having a bit trouble writing lately.

I'm not running out of ideas.

Something's just blocking the way to get the right words to express the ideas.

><; You see.

^-^ Thank you for replying.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 4:04 pm


yes the words are a bit rough and hit the edges hard

crazystraightjacketgirl1

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